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Quote: ["Miss, don't you know that I have the special ability to predict the future," Song Jiayi said, taking out a stack of registration forms from her backpack, "Hey, one for each person, friendly sponsorship~"]
In formal articles, you should avoid symbols like "~".
Quote [About the skating club, about the handsome guy, and about the love in everyone's heart… ]
If you need to use ellipses, be more formal.
Since this is my first time writing a novel, I don't know how to write it well. What aspects do you think I'd like to revise?
The subject matter is good. However, some of the content is too extensive.
Not a bad start. . But say something. "It must be the lotus that comes out of the mud but remains unstained." The lotus that comes out of the mud but remains unstained is the lotus. . .
Support new writers Welcome to exchange links with me
Quote: ["Miss, don't you know that I have the special ability to predict the future," Song Jiayi said, taking out a stack of registration forms from her backpack, "Hey, one for each person, friendly sponsorship~"] In formal articles, you should avoid symbols like "~". Quote [About the skating club, about the handsome guy, and about the love in everyone's heart… ] If you need to use ellipses, be more formal.
Since this is my first time writing a novel, I don't know how to write it well. What aspects do you think I'd like to revise?
The subject matter is good. However, some of the content is too extensive.
Not a bad start. . But say something. "It must be the lotus that comes out of the mud but remains unstained." The lotus that comes out of the mud but remains unstained is the lotus. . .