"So it was you."
"It was you."
She was a supremely gifted up-and-coming skier, and also a cool, distant photographer.
He was a gifted doctor who should have had a bright future, but ended up a rebellious race-car driver.
Amid a sea of people, they passed each other in the corners of their eyes countless times, never meeting.
Fate mercilessly sent them plummeting to the bottom: an accident took away her sight; another accident trapped his true self.
Two people covered in scars and trapped in the abyss met again for the first time at their most wretched and destitute moment.
He hid his affection in playful banter and teasing tests; she hid hers in quiet indulgence.
Theme: After enduring every kind of hardship, at last they find peace and joy.
After reading it, there are a few things that I feel are wrong. 1. Are the voices of Lin Lexuan and Wen Ruohan very close? Why can't the heroine find out (if so, I think I can add something) 2. How old is the protagonist and what is the setting? It's a bit unclear. I thought Lin Lexuan was already in college but turned out to be just an adult (did he skip a grade)? Wen Qianyun also gave me the same feeling. 3. The emotional pace is a bit too fast (maybe because the plot advances too fast), and it feels like you fell in love without getting along very much. If it is love at first sight, you can write it more straightforwardly. 4. I think it would be better to introduce the protagonist's family background clearly at the beginning. In the text, I learned that their family background is a bit unclear. These are my suggestions, I hope you can read them and see if the writing is passable!!! Still interested, looking forward to updates!