When my mother passed away, I was only ten.
The sky, the clouds, the snow, the wind, and a swaying memorial tablet: that was all I had.
Xiao Lian swept into that small world of mine, bringing wind and snow with him. The blue mole beneath his eye pierced my gaze.
He was my elder half-brother, a person I had never met and was never supposed to see.
He gave me every kindness, every warmth, everything that should have vanished with my mother’s death.
How fortunate I was to have such an elder brother, and how unfortunate that he was my elder brother.
During the autumn hunt that year, I rode into the forest and avenged the fifth prince’s bullying and destruction of my belongings with an arrow, but my elder brother noticed.
He said, “You’ve harmed your own brother. Your intentions are wicked.”
He said, “From now on, we’ll be nothing more than ordinary brothers.”
Fine. Then I would be an ordinary brother to you.
Until I grew tired of it, until everything was ready and I could no longer keep up the act.
I would make sure you looked at no one but me, Xiao Lian.
Tips
A short story, narrated in first person from the gong’s perspective.
Forced love, younger gong, paternal half-brothers, seven-year age gap.
A story born of a random idea. The setting is largely inspired by the Tang dynasty. Please don’t scrutinize the history or political intrigue too closely.
Hope you enjoy reading “ψ(`∇´)ψ
Theme: Raising a tiger invites disaster
The teacher's writing is really good, long live the gk theme. I read this article all the way down. At first I thought Xiao Quan was a pitiful little brother who only had an older brother, but later I found out that I was only partly right. Because the first-person narrative is too deceptive, this is a white-cut and black-crazy criticism.
Xiao Quan is really good at pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. He was bullied in Hongwen Hall since he was a child, pretending to be mute and submissive. Every step he took was not forced, it was his own choice. Brother Five Emperors actually dared to throw his brother to the inkstone? Then Qiu Lie will let you fall off your horse, but it is far from enough, and this is where you will go. Do you dare to think of revenge? Then it will be a disaster and will never be able to turn around. When I saw this, I exclaimed, this is a Machiavellian article! Bloody struggle is the endless blood of Machiavellian plots
Xiao Quan has 100% love for his brother. He is crazy, but for his brother, he just hopes to be entangled forever, and his brother belongs to him. He wanted to kiss the mole under his brother's eyes. He would never marry a wife until his brother married him.
Xiao Quan is a gravity-based man, with a heavy, paranoid and pure love.
What impressed me most was when the fifth prince was retaliated against for breaking the inkstone given by his brother. From a small incident, I felt Koizumi's paranoia.
Everything related to my brother cannot be violated by others.
[On a bright moonlit night with sparse lights and candles, the clear light flows through Xiao Gu's eyes when he enters the room. A very beautiful section, I feel like I have already seen the two-part illustration. In the ancient building, the bright moon is sparsely projected.
Xiao Quan was looking at his brother, and saw the light in his eyes. The sun and the moon were not as bright as his. Zheqian means to embrace the bright moon.
The little details the teacher wrote are great! There are many things that moved me, such as the scene where Xiao Quan threw the blood-stained sword to the desk and wrote a letter to his brother.
Why should we cut the candles from the west window together and talk about the rainy night in Bashan? I have always felt that this is a very beautiful and restrained poem, a longing that spans time and space, and the thought of meeting again all the time. Moreover, it was a letter written by Li Shangyin to his wife. My brother is my wife. I was really sweetened by the little details of the teacher.
Xiaoquan, aren't you afraid that he will see it? Or do you want to just let him see it?
The light and affectionate writing style is particularly suitable for writing one person's inner monologue and the emotional entanglement of two people. I kept crying when I saw that Xiao Quan and his brother clearly had the same intention, but they couldn't love each other.
Thank you to the teacher for creating such a vivid character. Thank you for meeting me. I hope the two little bitter gourds will always be happy.
Is Xiao Quan happy? It seems that neither of them is happy [biting handkerchief]
It feels good just to be slapped, the beauty's angry eyes are really nice to look at, so happy [Cat Head]
Only now does he feel that he can truly stand beside Xiao Pian and be accepted, accommodated and loved by him... The scene of the breakup at a young age is like a lifetime ago.
The perspective of a secret admirer, slimy, good rice [rice rice] [rice rice]
It's very beautiful. The plot and emotional lines are all very well written [crying]
I played white cut and black attack last year [please]
It's so beautiful, such a detailed first-person narrative [please]
The last chapter of the extra chapter is also being uploaded~ I really love my two children, and I couldn't bear to let them go. I wrote a very long ending without realizing it [please please] If inspiration suddenly comes to me one day, I will update it here or with big eyes in time~ [Prick-eared Rabbit Head]
Oh yes! I have big eyes: Hanxiang sauce
The final chapter has been updated tonight and is under review ~ [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] Quanquan Xianpian has made it to where it is today without knowing it with everyone's company. Thank you very much! ! [Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl
The teacher's writing is really good, long live the gk theme. I read this article all the way down. At first I thought Xiao Quan was a pitiful little brother who only had an older brother, but later I found out that I was only partly right. Because the first-person narrative is too deceptive, this is a white-cut and black-crazy criticism. Xiao Quan is really good at pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger. He was bullied in Hongwen Hall since he was a child, pretending to be mute and submissive. Every step he took was not forced, it was his own choice. Brother Five Emperors actually dared to throw his brother to the inkstone? Then Qiu Lie will let you fall off your horse, but it is far from enough, and this is where you will go. Do you dare to think of revenge? Then it will be a disaster and will never be able to turn around. When I saw this, I exclaimed, this is a Machiavellian article! Bloody struggle is the endless blood of Machiavellian plots Xiao Quan has 100% love for his brother. He is crazy, but for his brother, he just hopes to be entangled forever, and his brother belongs to him. He wanted to kiss the mole under his brother's eyes. He would never marry a wife until his brother married him. Xiao Quan is a gravity-based man, with a heavy, paranoid and pure love. What impressed me most was when the fifth prince was retaliated against for breaking the inkstone given by his brother. From a small incident, I felt Koizumi's paranoia. Everything related to my brother cannot be violated by others. [On a bright moonlit night with sparse lights and candles, the clear light flows through Xiao Gu's eyes when he enters the room. A very beautiful section, I feel like I have already seen the two-part illustration. In the ancient building, the bright moon is sparsely projected. Xiao Quan was looking at his brother, and saw the light in his eyes. The sun and the moon were not as bright as his. Zheqian means to embrace the bright moon. The little details the teacher wrote are great! There are many things that moved me, such as the scene where Xiao Quan threw the blood-stained sword to the desk and wrote a letter to his brother. Why should we cut the candles from the west window together and talk about the rainy night in Bashan? I have always felt that this is a very beautiful and restrained poem, a longing that spans time and space, and the thought of meeting again all the time. Moreover, it was a letter written by Li Shangyin to his wife. My brother is my wife. I was really sweetened by the little details of the teacher. Xiaoquan, aren't you afraid that he will see it? Or do you want to just let him see it? The light and affectionate writing style is particularly suitable for writing one person's inner monologue and the emotional entanglement of two people. I kept crying when I saw that Xiao Quan and his brother clearly had the same intention, but they couldn't love each other. Thank you to the teacher for creating such a vivid character. Thank you for meeting me. I hope the two little bitter gourds will always be happy.
Is Xiao Quan happy? It seems that neither of them is happy [biting handkerchief]
It feels good just to be slapped, the beauty's angry eyes are really nice to look at, so happy [Cat Head]
Only now does he feel that he can truly stand beside Xiao Pian and be accepted, accommodated and loved by him... The scene of the breakup at a young age is like a lifetime ago.
The perspective of a secret admirer, slimy, good rice [rice rice] [rice rice]
It's very beautiful. The plot and emotional lines are all very well written [crying]
I played white cut and black attack last year [please]
It's so beautiful, such a detailed first-person narrative [please]
The last chapter of the extra chapter is also being uploaded~ I really love my two children, and I couldn't bear to let them go. I wrote a very long ending without realizing it [please please] If inspiration suddenly comes to me one day, I will update it here or with big eyes in time~ [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] Oh yes! I have big eyes: Hanxiang sauce
The final chapter has been updated tonight and is under review ~ [Prick-eared Rabbit Head] Quanquan Xianpian has made it to where it is today without knowing it with everyone's company. Thank you very much! ! [Orange candy] Got it [Purple candy] kswl