The command center received a hacker attack. The main screen, split screen, and all the electronic equipment used for handling the case were occupied by one person:
The dark cat hat covered half of her face, and a red mole appeared faintly on her neck.
It looks like he is no more than Shuangjiu's age.
"I'll give you three days to consider and give me an offer from the police force."
"Otherwise, wait to be fired."
After the video, a list of people with a blue background and white letters began to be played across the city. Not only were their names written on them, but their crimes were also engraved on them.
"Confusing right and wrong, you damn bastard. When I catch him, he will scream in agony!" Qin Zhao, the detachment leader, got off work and stepped on the accelerator to go home.
As soon as he opened the door, he saw the beautiful little sick cat who had reorganized the family with his half-father and mother, curling up barefoot on the lazy sofa.
Holding a computer and playing Bubble Hall.
"Brother, are you back?" He raised his eyes, and his whole body exuded the soft fragrance of just taking a bath.
Qin Zhao ignored him and rushed into the door.
Tarino put down his computer. The dragon-shaped hacking system on the back glowed with blue light, and the red mole between his neck shone brightly.
"It makes me cry so hard? It's interesting."
.
There is an additional consultant in the bureau.
She is so beautiful that everyone loves her, but unfortunately she is a boy. The most important thing is that she likes to hide in the detachment leader's nest.
The young intern forgot to close the door when he went out, revealing the secret of the detachment leader.
Everyone in the world was forced to watch a dog teasing incident.
Tarino huddled on the tatami, holding the dog teasing stick in his hand, and the spring breeze of laughter came again.
And their future pillar squatted on the ground, shouting while putting on the little consultant's shoes.
"Wangwang, does it sound good?"
"Scream again, and it will make you more miserable."
"
"I will kiss you from the highest point in the world. "
"
Detective Captain & Criminal Hacker
Reading guide:
1. Xiaochui has a bit of crazy attributes, Qin Kongkong is very controlling, just get used to it, bloody plot, bold single arrow.
2. The beginning of the classic is useless. It is recommended to read from the second chapter, which will not affect the integrity of the story.
3. It's not fake, it's a joke version of a young couple living in the same house...
4. Don't take the fictional plot of the novel seriously.
5. Adhere to the principle of absolute justice. The illegal incidents included in the article have nothing to do with the protagonist.
[Carrying a sea of blood and hatred, but looking down on the sick, weak, beautiful, strong, miserable, crazy cats & rabies patients who have been suffering from rabies for ten years, holding cannons to protect their wives, crazy demons, invincible thunder leopards]
The outline is complete, no nonsense ✓
Purpose: Maintain network harmony
Reader comments
The full article is finished, and a new article "Taming a Mad Dog A" will be published at the end of July. The beauty attacks, the mad dog suffers, and AAs fight each other. Interested friends are welcome to click on the column to take a look~
—
"Taming a Mad Dog A"
"The hand holding the ruler is also quite beautiful. It's so beautiful that Lu Xiao wants to lower his head and kiss his fingers."
*
Chuanshu was bitten by a mad dog as soon as he woke up. Xi Zhao covered the side of his neck where blood was bleeding, smiled coldly, and immediately beat the unconscious dog half to death.
That mad dog was still shouting at him: "Xi Zhao! I won't let you go! If you didn't beat me to death today, I'll beat you every time I see you in the future!!"
Okay, Xi Zhao satisfied him, and then saw this mad dog whipping him every time. With such a dog's temper, no wonder he is the biggest villain in the book.
…
Xi Zhao is out of the book, a bloody campus ABO novel. The protagonist is the school bully alpha Gong and the cold and stubborn omega Shou. It combines a series of bloody elements such as robbery, contract lovers, chasing wives and crematoriums. Of course, this kind of literature usually has a villain who drives the protagonist's emotions, which is the mad dog that bit Xi Zhao, the young master of the Lu family, Lu Xiao.
The protagonist Gong is a "tyrant" at best. He is really crazy, because the protagonist has no regrets after receiving a kind help once. From then on, he caught Gong Shou and bit him all the way to the extra story. He lives endlessly and causes troubles. He can be called a fighter among mad dogs.
And Xi Zhao is just a cannon fodder who covets the protagonist and is targeted by Lu Xiao. He only appears in a few chapters.
I didn't want to get involved in the dramatic love story of this group of horse-catching gay men, but unexpectedly, I became the mad dog's neighbor and classmate by accident, and took on the important task of supervising his studies.
Seeing the mad dog's arrogant grinning expression, Xi Zhao touched the pointer on the table that was used as a motivational decoration, and smiled, OK, let's learn, it's not that he doesn't know how to teach, and what's more, he hates wild dogs like this that can't see the situation clearly and bite people indiscriminately.
If he didn't listen carefully, he would be punished with a whip; if he answered the questions randomly, he would be punished with a whip; later on, when he made a mistake in the quiz and was whipped once, and his palms were swollen, he would take off his pants and spank him. He also asked him, "Young Master Lu, how come you, a top alpha, can't beat me, an inferior alpha?"
Later, the mad dog that bit him when it saw him finally learned to put away its teeth and wagged its tail obediently at him.
From a high position, Xi Zhao looked at the red and gasping face, and gently brushed his thumb over the bitten and bleeding lip:
"Young Master, how can you be in heat like this? Do you still dare to bite me?"
"Remember, keep your shit away without my permission."
Ps: In the early stage, Gongshou was really hard to deal with. The fight was a real fight. Shou had a slight pain disorder and was controlled by his hands without even realizing it. So in the later stage, there will definitely be a plot where he is obsessed with his old Gong (dbq, I am bt).
Pps: The plot requires it, but fighting is very, very wrong! !
It's a tie, will you come back again? [Crying]
The subject matter of the story is good and the writing style is acceptable. I feel like there are a lot of things I want to express. After reading the first chapter, the overall feeling is a bit messy. There are many characters and the supporting roles are not clear enough. I can't remember them after reading it. The metaphors in some dialogues feel of little use and have no memorable points. The biggest problem is... I don't remember who is who. (This is just a random comment, please delete it if you don't like it) Don't affect your mood, keep up the good work
. You can add the previous one here.
In addition, I would like to add a few points. There are obviously very prominent issues after this comment. First of all, the subject matter is criminal investigation, and the protagonist's profession is related to criminal investigation. Manage his position and perform his duties according to his duties. This sentence has always been said by people, and it is reflected in all walks of life. But in fact, what the article presented to me was completely different. The first person to attack is the leader of the detachment. This position is not only a reflection of qualifications, but also the comprehensive result of ability and other aspects. It is also true that Gong will be very calm and composed when sorting out cases and facing various situations that arise when handling cases. It is shown more than once in the article and the supporting characters also point out that Gong cannot remain calm and loses judgment when he is in danger. This is a very fatal problem. As a detachment leader, how could he not be able to maintain judgment and calm down. As a major in administration, not just in criminal investigation, students will generally explain professional ethics, professional qualities and other professional-related moral bottom lines in advance during school, and they will continue to study throughout the school period. When you go to work, you practice those things to the end and integrate them into your work. And work is work. When handling cases, it should be very serious and serious. This is the process of finding the truth and seeking justice for the victims. Case handling comes first. However, the two protagonists openly expressed their feelings to each other during the handling of the case and began to walk the emotional line. This is really incredible and what is shown is very unprofessional. So much so that what was shown in the article made me feel very uncomfortable.
Secondly, in terms of narrative, it was first stated that An's mother died in a car accident, and a few chapters later it was revealed that An's mother was still alive, and then continued to revolve around her. This place is outrageous, and no matter how I look at it, I can't come up with an acceptable explanation for this situation. Flashback? Not quite. The plot presentation was very abrupt and felt unfocused.
The last one is about copywriting. The content presented in the copy does not quite match what I have read so far. At first I thought it would be a flashback, but I rejected it after watching it. I thought it would be an interlude, but it didn't seem to be reflected.
To be honest, the copywriting and writing style are quite to my liking, but I have found a lot of bugs so far, which do not make sense logically and make me uncomfortable. These are just some of the problems I found after reading so much, and I don't mean to deliberately find faults. Because of the novel and the subject matter, logic is particularly important.
This passage is so well written
"She called a car for me, and now..." This is a big bug for the author~
Called a car?
. It's not annoying and feels a bit conflicting with rare habits. [Question mark]
I should point it out here that it's a phone number. Listen to the voice coming from the phone. [Shy]
It seems that, after all, he can see the face, but he can't seem to determine where his eyes are falling?
Was it originally onomatopoeia? [Changed]
The part about the online car-hailing scene was quite real, and the male protagonists met "smoothly", although their gender was not revealed. There are still problems with the first chapter, some descriptions could be deleted, and it is unclear who spoke the dialogue. Are the symbols used to express inner thoughts, or are they words spoken by others? (I watched it again. It should refer to the message replied on the phone?) It was a popular misgendering joke, so Xiao Qin sang a one-man show for a while, not noticing when the pomegranate juice spilled on Xiao Chui. Compared with the first chapter, the expression is a bit clearer, but some descriptions are still a bit difficult to pronounce and are not commonly expressed. Come on come on
Morally corrupt person hahahaha
Add ⛽ to urge updates, more and faster, more accurate updates! [Knock on the wooden fish][Knock on the wooden fish][Knock on the wooden fish]
"Taruye would never have thought of..." This is a big bug for the author~ I'm a little fan.
Completed "Spreading Flowers" [Spreading Flowers] belongs to Yes Meow on my XP
It's so cool to be called brother [dog's head holding a rose] [dog's head holding a rose]
Can you mark what things should be revised? Is it just free chapter repair? Last night I encountered an incoherence in the text (I hope you will reply to me) [Xingxingyan]
I found it was really messy, there was no transition, and I had no idea what scene I was in.
See Chapter 8 here for now.
Remarkable. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. It has foreshadowing and is given early. It can be seen that the author has an outline or has conceived it. However, it may feel too powerful and it will affect the reading experience to a certain extent.
The second is the fluency of writing. I feel more and more comfortable later on, but there is still room for improvement.
Then there's the writing style, which is outstanding. I was at the very beginning of the first chapter
The last part was amazing. ®
Well, the shortcoming is that criminal investigation may be difficult to write in the first place. In addition, there seems to be a bit of confusion in the text, and the reading and writing rhythm feel a bit jumpy. It is that a lot of it is only after reading it that you realize what was said before. Q Well, that's about all I want to say. [Knock on wooden fish]
. I'll take a closer look at it in two days. [Sunglasses]
Also, please keep up the good work, the author~
Well, closing the window can be replaced by another adjective. [Compare your heart]
I'm curious what the last two words are? Why is it gone? [Covering face, laughing and crying]
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The full article is finished, and a new article "Taming a Mad Dog A" will be published at the end of July. The beauty attacks, the mad dog suffers, and AAs fight each other. Interested friends are welcome to click on the column to take a look~ — "Taming a Mad Dog A" "The hand holding the ruler is also quite beautiful. It's so beautiful that Lu Xiao wants to lower his head and kiss his fingers." * Chuanshu was bitten by a mad dog as soon as he woke up. Xi Zhao covered the side of his neck where blood was bleeding, smiled coldly, and immediately beat the unconscious dog half to death. That mad dog was still shouting at him: "Xi Zhao! I won't let you go! If you didn't beat me to death today, I'll beat you every time I see you in the future!!" Okay, Xi Zhao satisfied him, and then saw this mad dog whipping him every time. With such a dog's temper, no wonder he is the biggest villain in the book. … Xi Zhao is out of the book, a bloody campus ABO novel. The protagonist is the school bully alpha Gong and the cold and stubborn omega Shou. It combines a series of bloody elements such as robbery, contract lovers, chasing wives and crematoriums. Of course, this kind of literature usually has a villain who drives the protagonist's emotions, which is the mad dog that bit Xi Zhao, the young master of the Lu family, Lu Xiao. The protagonist Gong is a "tyrant" at best. He is really crazy, because the protagonist has no regrets after receiving a kind help once. From then on, he caught Gong Shou and bit him all the way to the extra story. He lives endlessly and causes troubles. He can be called a fighter among mad dogs. And Xi Zhao is just a cannon fodder who covets the protagonist and is targeted by Lu Xiao. He only appears in a few chapters. I didn't want to get involved in the dramatic love story of this group of horse-catching gay men, but unexpectedly, I became the mad dog's neighbor and classmate by accident, and took on the important task of supervising his studies. Seeing the mad dog's arrogant grinning expression, Xi Zhao touched the pointer on the table that was used as a motivational decoration, and smiled, OK, let's learn, it's not that he doesn't know how to teach, and what's more, he hates wild dogs like this that can't see the situation clearly and bite people indiscriminately. If he didn't listen carefully, he would be punished with a whip; if he answered the questions randomly, he would be punished with a whip; later on, when he made a mistake in the quiz and was whipped once, and his palms were swollen, he would take off his pants and spank him. He also asked him, "Young Master Lu, how come you, a top alpha, can't beat me, an inferior alpha?" Later, the mad dog that bit him when it saw him finally learned to put away its teeth and wagged its tail obediently at him. From a high position, Xi Zhao looked at the red and gasping face, and gently brushed his thumb over the bitten and bleeding lip: "Young Master, how can you be in heat like this? Do you still dare to bite me?" "Remember, keep your shit away without my permission." Ps: In the early stage, Gongshou was really hard to deal with. The fight was a real fight. Shou had a slight pain disorder and was controlled by his hands without even realizing it. So in the later stage, there will definitely be a plot where he is obsessed with his old Gong (dbq, I am bt). Pps: The plot requires it, but fighting is very, very wrong! !
It's a tie, will you come back again? [Crying]
The subject matter of the story is good and the writing style is acceptable. I feel like there are a lot of things I want to express. After reading the first chapter, the overall feeling is a bit messy. There are many characters and the supporting roles are not clear enough. I can't remember them after reading it. The metaphors in some dialogues feel of little use and have no memorable points. The biggest problem is... I don't remember who is who. (This is just a random comment, please delete it if you don't like it) Don't affect your mood, keep up the good work
. You can add the previous one here.
In addition, I would like to add a few points. There are obviously very prominent issues after this comment. First of all, the subject matter is criminal investigation, and the protagonist's profession is related to criminal investigation. Manage his position and perform his duties according to his duties. This sentence has always been said by people, and it is reflected in all walks of life. But in fact, what the article presented to me was completely different. The first person to attack is the leader of the detachment. This position is not only a reflection of qualifications, but also the comprehensive result of ability and other aspects. It is also true that Gong will be very calm and composed when sorting out cases and facing various situations that arise when handling cases. It is shown more than once in the article and the supporting characters also point out that Gong cannot remain calm and loses judgment when he is in danger. This is a very fatal problem. As a detachment leader, how could he not be able to maintain judgment and calm down. As a major in administration, not just in criminal investigation, students will generally explain professional ethics, professional qualities and other professional-related moral bottom lines in advance during school, and they will continue to study throughout the school period. When you go to work, you practice those things to the end and integrate them into your work. And work is work. When handling cases, it should be very serious and serious. This is the process of finding the truth and seeking justice for the victims. Case handling comes first. However, the two protagonists openly expressed their feelings to each other during the handling of the case and began to walk the emotional line. This is really incredible and what is shown is very unprofessional. So much so that what was shown in the article made me feel very uncomfortable. Secondly, in terms of narrative, it was first stated that An's mother died in a car accident, and a few chapters later it was revealed that An's mother was still alive, and then continued to revolve around her. This place is outrageous, and no matter how I look at it, I can't come up with an acceptable explanation for this situation. Flashback? Not quite. The plot presentation was very abrupt and felt unfocused. The last one is about copywriting. The content presented in the copy does not quite match what I have read so far. At first I thought it would be a flashback, but I rejected it after watching it. I thought it would be an interlude, but it didn't seem to be reflected. To be honest, the copywriting and writing style are quite to my liking, but I have found a lot of bugs so far, which do not make sense logically and make me uncomfortable. These are just some of the problems I found after reading so much, and I don't mean to deliberately find faults. Because of the novel and the subject matter, logic is particularly important.
This passage is so well written
"She called a car for me, and now..." This is a big bug for the author~ Called a car?
. It's not annoying and feels a bit conflicting with rare habits. [Question mark]
I should point it out here that it's a phone number. Listen to the voice coming from the phone. [Shy]
It seems that, after all, he can see the face, but he can't seem to determine where his eyes are falling?
Was it originally onomatopoeia? [Changed]
The part about the online car-hailing scene was quite real, and the male protagonists met "smoothly", although their gender was not revealed. There are still problems with the first chapter, some descriptions could be deleted, and it is unclear who spoke the dialogue. Are the symbols used to express inner thoughts, or are they words spoken by others? (I watched it again. It should refer to the message replied on the phone?) It was a popular misgendering joke, so Xiao Qin sang a one-man show for a while, not noticing when the pomegranate juice spilled on Xiao Chui. Compared with the first chapter, the expression is a bit clearer, but some descriptions are still a bit difficult to pronounce and are not commonly expressed. Come on come on
Morally corrupt person hahahaha
Add ⛽ to urge updates, more and faster, more accurate updates! [Knock on the wooden fish][Knock on the wooden fish][Knock on the wooden fish]
"Taruye would never have thought of..." This is a big bug for the author~ I'm a little fan.
Completed "Spreading Flowers" [Spreading Flowers] belongs to Yes Meow on my XP
It's so cool to be called brother [dog's head holding a rose] [dog's head holding a rose]
Can you mark what things should be revised? Is it just free chapter repair? Last night I encountered an incoherence in the text (I hope you will reply to me) [Xingxingyan]
I found it was really messy, there was no transition, and I had no idea what scene I was in.
See Chapter 8 here for now. Remarkable. First of all, let's talk about the advantages. It has foreshadowing and is given early. It can be seen that the author has an outline or has conceived it. However, it may feel too powerful and it will affect the reading experience to a certain extent. The second is the fluency of writing. I feel more and more comfortable later on, but there is still room for improvement. Then there's the writing style, which is outstanding. I was at the very beginning of the first chapter The last part was amazing. ® Well, the shortcoming is that criminal investigation may be difficult to write in the first place. In addition, there seems to be a bit of confusion in the text, and the reading and writing rhythm feel a bit jumpy. It is that a lot of it is only after reading it that you realize what was said before. Q Well, that's about all I want to say. [Knock on wooden fish] . I'll take a closer look at it in two days. [Sunglasses] Also, please keep up the good work, the author~
Well, closing the window can be replaced by another adjective. [Compare your heart]
I'm curious what the last two words are? Why is it gone? [Covering face, laughing and crying]
The mystery here refers to Tarino Drop [hug]