Being Chuunibyou Isn’t a Disease (Naruto)

This is not an ordinary setback. . .

Huh? Didn't I leave a message on this?

Someone has read the article, but can you give me a sharp review? 1. Why does Xiaolan have the idea of ​​conquering the world? Her mental journey is never explained from beginning to end in the article. 2. If conquering the world was an ignorant idea she had when she was a child, then why is she still so persistent in this wish when she grows up? 3. I personally think the biggest flaw in this article is that Xiaolan is too self-dominated and does not mature with age. Although this may be Xiaolan's personality, readers will also look forward to the growth of the protagonist while reading the article. This is not to say that Xiaolan has not become stronger or awakened as a ninja, but a heroine who is always self-centered will inevitably get angry after seeing her. 4. Well, if the mind doesn't grow, then go back to her desire to conquer the world. However, there are repeated scenes in the article where she is not as strong as others, which disappoints readers who expect cheats and strong women. 5. When reading fan fiction, most people like to see the connection between the original characters and the original protagonist and plot. However, the plot direction of this article does not have much connection with the original work. This is okay in the first place, but there are too many people writing similar plots, and it's annoying to read them. However, this article does not contain any original highlights, and the direction is vague and unclear, leading to a sense of boredom and incomprehension. 6. In a nutshell, author, what do you want to express? The life of a middle school girl who goes all the way to darkness? Continuous persistence under persistent desire? Or is it a change of consciousness after the desire is broken? Maybe both. But it's already 70,000 to 80,000 words, and I still feel like I'm stuck in the same place, and even tend to be a trap. If you are unable to write it yourself, it is inevitable that the readers will not be able to do it either. Above.

Have! ! Always waiting for your update! !

"Murderous!" Is this article a scam?

Angry! She wasn't worried about Inuzuka Kiba! She didn't know that the mortality rate in the Chunin Exam was very high or something! It's just that there is no one to bully these days, so I feel very bored. So arrogant Xiaolan~

It's awkward to protect your pride.

Good article, beat, update soon

I think Shikamaru is Kakashi, Ran is Naruto, Kogen is Sakura, and Kusashijian is Sasuke. . . .

Five fingers... I thought they were five radishes... Going on a mission, although I have never played an online game, it looks like an elementary mission in an online game novel. Then, if a chuunin or even a special jounin encounters the task of leading the village's seedlings, they can only act as a ninja mother~ It's so peaceful! Actually, JJ is right, I can't even see the replies from the authors and I have to go back and look for them one by one… I really like to be replied to. I've been busy these days, so I read all the articles on Bawang. I wanted to come back when I have some free time... But as expected, is it better to encourage the author by leaving comments in time? =333=