Angel

It's not that this article is bad, it's just that it doesn't attract attention. Of course, I am not the author, and I don't know the next development. It is also difficult for me to offer constructive suggestions because I have never been exposed to the road of writing articles. However, from a viewing perspective, one naturally wants to see the development of the plot. In addition, although there is a lot of character description, it is not impressive, so it is better to describe the characters through events. I have so much to say, I hope you won't blame me, I just hope that this article will eventually become a masterpiece.

... I don't see anything worthy of praise so far, but I support you as a newcomer!