The Ultimate Showdown of Magic

Daai, Rui and Fuwa are both our favorite types. It's so cool to see the two of them together ~ I'm so shocked

Because this is the first time for the little girl to write a long review If the writing is not good, please ignore it "The Peak Showdown of Magic" I came across this article when I was visiting Jinjiang and saw a very impactful cover. After I ran in, I saw the words "women's clothing attack" and "playboy acceptance" and I was so scared that I ran out again. When I ran out, I saw another article you updated simultaneously. That is, the article "The sun rises in the east and smiles over the city", Because I like the character Dongfang Bubai very much, So I ran to read it. After reading this article, I feel that your work is really good. I have always disliked simple articles, they look awkward. I like the kind of writing that looks light and comfortable, and your writing makes me feel exactly like this. I usually don't read unfinished articles because it's painful to follow them, and I often forget about them after reading a chapter. The plot doesn't connect at all, and "Sunrise" broke my convention. So for a light and comfortable feeling, I ran back to this article "The Peak Showdown of Magic". I have a lot of interesting things about me, such as NP, Holy Mother, Xiaobai, Even some funny articles and light-hearted articles are hard for me to read. Because I feel like the protagonist is too far away from me, The article seems very empty, and the romance is an area that I have never touched upon since I read Danmei. I switched to Danmei because of a very shocking romance novel. "Once you enter the gate of corruption, it is as deep as the sea, and your conscience is like a passerby from now on." This sentence is the perfect way to describe me, haha Women's clothing is also one of my highlights. And in your article Shi Rui's women's clothing did not cause me any adverse reaction at all. For example, vomiting, diarrhea, dizziness, and dizziness [Everyone: Xiaodie, you can do it~~~~~] something... It feels like it's just the way it should be, it's natural. Shi Rui pretends to be different people during the day and night, but they seem to have many things in common. I don't like the setting of Playboy very much. Generally, this kind of setting reminds me of A rich second generation who has nothing to do, is not doing his job properly, and is idle It would make me, the little girl, very depressed, depressed, very depressed~~~~~ But Clifford gave me a very full feeling, Both my thoughts on magic and my brother are far away from my original thoughts. The supporting characters in the author's works also have flesh and blood and thoughts, and are not existences similar to cannon fodder. I can see that Yin Da, you are really serious about writing this article. After reading this article, I still have the feeling of "Why is it over? Let's write more." I want to continue reading. But I can only seek comfort in another article of yours. It wasn't just your article that drove me to write my first long review The author greatly appreciates your reply as one of the reasons I would occasionally make comments when reading articles before, but they would usually be ignored by the author. Over time, I have become a diver for thousands of years. And when I read your article again, I felt a little excited because it really appealed to my taste. I received your very serious reply, which makes me feel very warm! I was really surprised when I saw your reply, Then every time I log in to Jinjiang, I rush to read your reply immediately. And the little girl has not been disappointed every time, When I ran to the mailbox, there was the txt you sent immediately, which moved me to the core as a little girl My eyes are full of tears Your attitude towards readers makes me more determined to write this long review to thank you! Finally, Xiaodie wishes you that your articles will get better and better as you write them, and that you will be happy every day and all the best! From: Butterfly Tomb

The supplementary article 233 is completed. Let's read the history of Yinda piece by piece. Shi Rui is quite distressing, but luckily he met the magician. The next few chapters sort of reveal all the foreshadowing. But the foreshadowing is still more fascinating when it is not revealed... I always feel that the explanation of the past is a bit hasty...? Please tell me if OTZ likes Mrs. Yin, please post it in your next article ( ′ ▽ ` )ﾉ

Sweet ending, happy ending

I won't tell you. At first I looked at the CP attributes and it wasn't my cup of tea. I picked it up first because it was limited to free. I watched The Demon King's Bride and then this one was pretty good too. The writing on Silver Paper is pretty good.

In fact, I wasn't interested when I first saw the name. Then I read the copy and said it was "Women's Clothes Attacker vs. Playboy Shou". This attack was a CP that I didn't think was cute at all before watching "Magic Showdown". But fortunately, I read everyone's reviews and thought: Hey, it feels pretty good. I have saved this article, but I still don't have much interest in it, so I haven't read it. Until a few days ago, I was so uncomfortably tired of writing that I was rolling around on the bed (girls who love reading all know me! TAT). I read N novels in my collection in a row, but I started to get irritable after reading the beginning. I couldn't get into it at all, so at this time I watched "Magic Showdown", Emma!!!!!!! Very nice!!!! The further back you go, the more you like it!!!! In fact, I am also short-sighted. The author obviously clearly stated in the copy that the cross-dresser is the attacker vs. The playboy is the sufferer, but when I read the article, I completely forgot about this setting. At the beginning, I always thought that Clifford would be the attacker, and then Shi Rui would be the scepter. (囧) Then when I saw Shi Rui attacking Clifford, I thought it would be a mutual attack, although I turned out to be wrong. All I can say is that Shi Rui's attack on Clifford was very exciting to watch! When I was in the period of literary shortage, I was very irritable when reading novels (it was called literary shortage after I was poisoned by n number of articles that did not suit my taste). When I read the first chapter of "Magic Showdown", I read it several times before I got into it. Then after reading two chapters, I couldn't get out of it. I kept reading until the early morning, and I didn't stop until I had a ejaculation... (These days, it's wrong, It should be said that after reading novels for so many years, it is really difficult to find a novel that I am willing to stay up late to read.) Now that I have finished watching it, I feel very comfortable watching it! I also fell in love with the pairing of "women's crossdresser vs. Playboy sufferer". ~\\(≧▽≦)/~~\\(≧▽≦)/~ Recommended to watch!

Very good article, Huahua

The attack-receptor type particularly hits my cute spot... Wow, Kaka, Kaka.

=-= When I read the previous chapter, I realized that there is no most outrageous person, only the most outrageous one. At the same time, I deeply felt that what Mama said might not be the complete truth. Is there any extra story about Mama and her sister? Seeing this, I think this ending is very beautiful! =3=Love the author~

Generally speaking, the author's creativity is very good and the characters are interesting, but the writing style is not enough. The magician and Shi Rui are like people from two different worlds, one is the real world we live in every day, and the other is the fantasy world. The integration of the two is not good enough, and they are not very coordinated. It often feels like they suddenly jump from the current stage to the mysterious stage. The appeal of the text is also somewhat lacking. When watching magic that should be wonderful, there is no sense of presence and it is not shocking enough. The opponents in "Peak Showdown" also tend to be slightly idiotic. The BOSS is too pretentious, not complex enough, and has no villain charm. I have said so many bad things, but my original intention is to hope that the author can work hard and continue to make progress!!!!