Imaginary Rival

It took me four days to read the entire story, but I was still confused until the end: why did the male protagonist and female protagonist part ways at the beginning? What's going on with the male protagonist and his "ex-girlfriend"? Why did the female protagonist find the male protagonist again after being separated for many years? Is there any intention of getting back together? In the early stage of the story, a lot of secret love and sad past events were written from the female protagonist's perspective, and the male protagonist was "unilaterally" given a central air-conditioning persona. Well... It still holds water. But later on, the male protagonist turns into a licking dog to pursue the female protagonist, asking the female protagonist if she had a crush on him and if she was jealous because of the existence of her "ex-girlfriend". The female protagonist's replies are always "There is something wrong with your brain" and "You think too much." , And when writing about the "relationship" between the heroine and Zheng, he used the sentence "Zhong Yu is not a XX person" to find a reasonable reason for the heroine's new relationship. Later, when the relationship with Zheng ended abruptly, he said "I had the answer at that moment." As a result, I still can't understand the two relationships of the female protagonist. Whether it is the male protagonist or Zheng, their images are very vague (the male protagonist can at least be said to be a dog licker in the later stage, but Zheng is just a soy sauce at most?). As for the heroine, it is still impossible to sum it up with precise words. You can say that she is a clear-headed academic, but she also has low self-esteem in relationships. You can say that she has low self-esteem in relationships, and she likes to take the initiative from above. So what a troubled person this must be. The author spent a lot of pen and ink describing the heroine's family of origin. At first, I thought that the biggest factors that caused the heroine's low self-esteem were the death of her mother, her father's departure abroad, her dependence on others, and being abandoned as trash. Later, I thought it was the sweet interaction between the hero and his "ex-girlfriend" that heightened the heroine's sad and secret love... But the article was finished, and it didn't explain what was going on between the hero and his ex-girlfriend. (In front of the heroine, he told his ex-girlfriend on his cell phone that he would contact her during the winter vacation) Adhering to the principle of reading the entire story since you have read it, and not jumping to conclusions easily, I read the entire article. To understand the market environment, you need to write a "big heroine" who is always energetic and always has an independent and clear mind. However, the settings before and after the plot, as well as the heroine's character design, are OOC, and it is true that she is exhausted.

You are not an author with mediocre qualifications. Thank you Shanuo Duoduoji for letting me see so many warm and happy stories [Three Flower Cat Head]

You said that you are an author with mediocre qualifications, so you cannot balance with so many people who collect and read. You are great. I look forward to the next one. After all, I am also quite picky. I can't stand many writing styles. I have to be more sure of myself.

No, the writing is still very good

After scattering flowers, Zhong Yu and Qiao Siheng will be happy forever [red heart] [red heart] [red heart]

So good-looking! What do you mean by mediocre qualifications? ! ! It's not even close to "mediocre"!

I feel like I'm still missing a memory of my secret love in high school. Let's add more.

"In the world of love, we are all beginners" I wish the young couple 99!

So pretty, woo woo woo [covering face and peeking] slightly sour in the early stage

Very well written! ! ! Love to read and write more! ! !