Choosing a Husband

These two are so boring~~~~~~Hahahahahahahaha

You asked me to come and see you, so I came... Uh... Lingbo took a slight step... And drifted away...

The expansion will make it a long story~ I haven't thought about writing a long novel at the moment. I dug too many holes - Gone with the Wind

Kindness. .. Give you a little flower… Short... I won't go into details. . Anyway, enough has been said below… The article is pretty good... It has a lot of room for development... Continue to expand it...

The writing is quite twisty and a bit suspenseful. But it's not enough to read. It's so short. 1 Haha! It's been a long time since I saw your article. 1

Give you a little flower It's not funny, it's quite novel.

It's too short, so it's very bland. I'm not good at describing it either. Education opportunities will continue to add plot points, laugh. . . PS: I owe you N articles. . . Climb. . .

I saw "Choosing a Husband" - it's finished - so I came in and watched it~~~I didn't expect it to be so short~~mo Laugh~~ You said I wanted to give you advice~~ So I won't talk about the advantages~~ Just give your opinions~~ Laugh again~~ Well... I felt that I was very curious about the story when I read the introduction~ But when I actually read the full text~~~ I felt it was a little dull~~ (Being photographed~ You haven't written any rich writing yourself~) It's probably too short~ Because there is only one scene~~ The language is not the most vivid~~ (Being filmed again~ This is very good~~ Look at the language you wrote~~ It's not even vivid~) Smile again~~ Finished~~After three smiles——Gone~~ Let's work together~~I'm not very good either~~Just tell me~~You can give me the eggs~~But don't make them smelly~~I can make fried rice with eggs~

Bad.

Classmate Mo and Bai, do you know who he is? Hmm. Well written. The writing style and character conception are both wrong. It's just a little missing. I feel like it's not enough to watch.