What the Heck Is Psychokinesis?!
念力是个甚？！
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 102k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
41Chapters
90Favorites
901Clicks per chapter
146Comments
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Okay~ But I have to update it quickly!
Look up at the sky, think carefully, focus on quality rather than quantity, and wait for you. . . .
Overhaul... It's like a trap! In fact, this one is better than the one about the fraudster. The article overly describes the setting, and the characters and plot are extremely thin. I couldn't stand it. In fact, both of your articles have this flaw - the characters are not very distinct. Moreover, you seem to be unable to control the characters' emotions. You don't have the basics of sensationalism or the process of emotional changes, so Xiao Yi seems to be inexplicable towards the heroine. It's not that you made Xiao Yi white, but that your characterization is not detailed enough... If nothing else, I can't at least clearly outline the heroine's character... Well, these are my personal feelings, and my opinion is to finish it before revising it. No article can be without problems, so just keep writing without affecting the layout of the full text... The above is for reference only... This is my personal opinion.
Woo. . . . How could this be?!! But this article has only been updated weekly recently, and now it has stopped updating. I hate you. . . Well, I can only hope that this article of yours will not be a scam. You must not be a scam. . As for what some people say about the character being out of shape, Xiao Yi didn't appear many times in the original work, but now many people's understanding of him mostly comes from Jinjiang colleagues. . So, you all understand. . Each person has his or her own understanding. Above
It's very plain, but it takes courage to write it down...
In this case, the leader can only kidnap the chain-handed woman as revenge. There is no other way = =
Hey ╮(╯▽╰)╭, how embarrassing it is!!!
My favorite cannon fodder in comics is the dog man~~
Floating surface, come here and have a look too
With Yimu's character of "a dead Taoist friend is not a poor Taoist", it was really unwise to save that cannon fodder black man. . Three against one. . There is obviously no chance of winning. .