White Snow Breaks a Red Branch

First of all, congratulations on opening a new pit, spread flowers~ The following is a review. I am breaking bricks very warmly. I corrected it once in class, so it took a while. Sorry for the delay. A brief review of "White Snow Folds Red Branches" I read the entire article in one breath, and I felt mixed emotions. I didn't talk about the characters' views, but only about the emotions in the article. This article is not long, a little over 200,000 words. There are only about ten characters who appear with names. It can be roughly divided into three romances, namely, Su Yuren and Ye Huanjun, Ye Huanjun and Fang Xiaoji, and Su Yuren and Ruan Xiushu. First, let's talk about Su Yuren and Ye Huanjun, the two protagonists of this article. The protagonists have always been in love with each other, but not in this article. Su Yuren's love for Ye Huanjun is almost crazy. She can ignore that he has a wife and daughter, and he can ignore that he is cruel to her. Love leads to hatred, and hatred leads to fear. Her masochistic obsession with Ye Huanjun did not move Ye Huanjun, because Ye Huanjun was deeply obsessed with his wife. Looking at the whole story, if Su Yuren was a female supporting character and ended up miserable, some people might still feel pity for her. Unfortunately, she is the heroine, a heroine who has taken the title of "mistress" and is affectionate, so she does not deserve sympathy. This article has a prequel, or it can be read as an independent article. I have not read the prequel and am not clear about their previous entanglements. Judging from this article, Su Yuren's feelings for Ye Huanjun are too pale. They only talk about how much Su Yuren loves Ye Huanjun and how they risk their lives for him, but ignore the most essential content, that is, why Su Yuren is so obsessed with him? Are there any past or good memories between them? It is precisely because of the lack of this reason to be scorned in love that Su Yuren's crazy obsession with Ye Huanjun seems so ridiculous. At the same time, it also simplifies the heroine's character. Only her crazy side is seen, but her inner hesitation and confusion cannot be seen. At least as an article that can be viewed independently, this flaw is fatal. Secondly, Ye Huanjun and Fang Xiaoji. Same as above, the author did not give any explanation for Ye Huanjun's infatuation with Fang Xiaoji in this article, but because they are husband and wife, they often have a sweet world between them, so it is not as abrupt as Su Yuren's love for Ye Huanjun. It is said in the article that if they continue to live an ordinary life, Ye Huanjun and Fang Xiaoji can grow old together. Once there is a storm, I don't know what it will be like. Indeed, Ye Huanjun's infatuation with Fang Xiaoji allows them to grow old in peace, but after all, the two are people from different worlds. Once a sudden change occurs, the personalities between the two are amplified, and the conflict will become deeper and deeper. Although Ye Huanjun died peacefully in Fang Xiaoji's arms in the end, the mutual incomprehension between the two during the turmoil made the love cast a layer of white dust and became less clear. Compared to Su Yuren's relationship with Ye Huanjun and Ye Huanjun's relationship with Xiaoji, Su Yuren's relationship with Ruan Xiushu is much simpler. From the beginning of the encounter, Ruan Xiushu was in a weak position. Su Yuren had a strong character, was amorous and was deeply infatuated with Ye Huanjun. It was obvious that Ruan Xiushu knew this, so he remained calm in his love for Su Yuren. He could save her, he could love and take care of her, he could let Ye Huanjun go behind her back, or he could smile calmly in front of her grave after she died. He is a shy person who is good at pretending, and he is also a person who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals. This kind of character is destined to fall in love with Su Yuren, and it is also destined that he will not be crazy about love. As for the unbearable pain in Yun Dan Feng Qing at the end, we don't know because we can't see him being affectionate. I'm afraid only Ruan Xiushu himself knows the answer. Looking at these three relationships, I am afraid that only Ruan Xiushu is the purest to Su Yuren. However, Ruan Xiushu's personality is not distinctive enough. This review only talks about love and not people, so I won't say more. Romance novels are called romances because they must "talk about" feelings. At first glance, the love in this article feels very cruel, both physically and mentally. However, throughout the whole novel, it did not make me cry. Looking into the reason, it turns out that the love is not deep enough. As mentioned before, Su Yuren's love is too superficial and exaggerated, Ye Huanjun's love for Fang Xiaoji lacks depth, and Ruan Xiushu's love is too light and gentle. There are thousands of kinds of love, and what moves people is often the depth of love hidden under the surface. Because this hidden depth of love cannot be fully expressed, people feel that the emotion in this article is not deep enough. Finally, there is a big difference in the writing style before and after the article. Perhaps the author fell in love with another style of writing halfway through writing. The transition is quite natural, but when you suddenly wake up, you will find that the difference between the writing style before and after is very obvious. I hope you will pay attention to it in the future.

I skipped and finished reading. I don't really care about the ending. You said that Su Yuren is the main plot. Why was she so disgusting? What a nice girl at the beginning. What a unique woman. She became more and more hysterical and crazy. Who is Ye? You like Su Dai so much. Everyone can see that you are actually here to torment people. In terms of comedy, it's Su and Bai. Ye and Dai are so perfect. People are actually ordinary. Who is a saint? You only reveal the truth. Who has no selfish desires? The language needs to be improved. Sometimes it's too formal and unnatural. Please forgive me if it's not good.

Can you say something? . . There are actually harsher words for hating Su Yuren, but I'm afraid of being photographed. . . Not to mention it was uncomfortable to hold back. In my opinion, he is just crying and shouting to get people who don't like him to like him, and then he abuses people who don't like him to get him to like him, which is a detour. . What did classmate Ye Huanjun think about it in the end?

This article is so cruel! ! ! I shed tears when I saw it. But I still hope that the adults will open another trap, but don't be BE. I can't stand it. I can't stand it.

I was so meowing that I actually felt a sense of relief after reading it~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Fang Ye Dang floated by. If you die, just die

Actually, I came here with the first one. I like both of them, very good and informative articles. No one is willing to give to anyone, and there is no need to explain or take credit, because there is nothing to ask for, it is just simple love.

I've been chasing this guy for 2 years! ! ! My youth! ! ! Wow... Then I was still an undergraduate when I first read your article~~~The saddest thing that made me cry was when the general, the white-haired student, went to work... Hold your chin, you should also give me a thumbs up

You know, I will definitely say - the ending is quick It seems like you tried your best to finish writing the most tangled paragraph, and then suddenly became lazy, and then slammed the pen, leaving these babies to do whatever they want... It's really... The feeling of not caring about raising children (laughing) But it's finally over, will there be any pitfalls in the next chapter? Play another series?

Vomiting blood... Daughter... Talking nonsense So this is a fake father-daughter story!

Madam, I love you, thank you for writing such touching words. I really cried and laughed for the people in the story. Everyone in this story exists vividly in my memory. Even for every supporting character, I remember their name and story. This is not common in my reading experience, so I have every reason to believe it. Xin, Mom, you are special, special aura and perseverance, special seriousness and frankness - these are enough to make you come into my heart... The subsequent GD was also brewing for a long time. I was shameless and wanted to buckle down. I was waiting for the reply with excitement. I asked the GN in the group over and over uneasily, do you think I will pay attention to you? ... Fortunately, you didn't reject me, haha, I'm really proud to have a lady like you, because lady, you are really cool (*^__^*)