This is a story about two people who escaped to the foot of Tianshan Mountain for various reasons, met, got to know each other, and fell in love.
Intention: True bravery is not to leave, but to still choose to love despite the scars
Reader comments
I feel that the writing style is quite good, but the narrative is a bit slow. The first two chapters can be combined into one chapter, and the first chapter introduces the story of the male protagonist and his ex. In the second chapter, you can let Gong appear and write about the interaction between the male protagonist and Gong. Unless the plot has foreshadowing for the rest of the story, the first three chapters can be compressed into two chapters.
The writing style is very good, and the writing is smooth and eloquent. Young couples also have tension when getting along, come on, come on [come on]
The first one is already well written, I'm looking forward to the next one
Little Couple 99 Forever Free [Spreading Flowers][Orange Candy] has arrived
I feel that the writing style is quite good, but the narrative is a bit slow. The first two chapters can be combined into one chapter, and the first chapter introduces the story of the male protagonist and his ex. In the second chapter, you can let Gong appear and write about the interaction between the male protagonist and Gong. Unless the plot has foreshadowing for the rest of the story, the first three chapters can be compressed into two chapters.
The writing style is very good, and the writing is smooth and eloquent. Young couples also have tension when getting along, come on, come on [come on]
The first one is already well written, I'm looking forward to the next one
Little Couple 99 Forever Free [Spreading Flowers][Orange Candy] has arrived