[90% revised, new outline. If you spot any over-the-top tropes or character issues, that's because of pirated copies, not this book]
Childhood friends | Obsessive lover | Both are each other's first and only
Cool and aloof in public, proud and coy in private, a teasing cat x a big bad wolf pretending to be a dog
Afraid topping will be exhausting, afraid bottoming will hurt, too blunt to kiss, and using his hands makes them sore.
For Yin Qingyun, dating Jing Yi is basically impossible.
Yin Qingyun and Jing Yi grew up together. Their families were evenly matched, and they were inseparable.
Yin Qingyun was born premature and frail. As a child, he was like a delicate porcelain doll, and the slightest change in the weather could make him sick.
After Jing Yi watched Yin Qingyun fall into a high fever and lose consciousness because of his own carelessness when they were seven, he made Yin Qingyun's health an absolute priority, something he could never allow to be put at risk.
He remembered all of Yin Qingyun's allergies and dietary restrictions, knew the slightest signs that he was coming down with something, put a coat on him before the weather turned cold, and made sure he ate three meals a day on time.
His care was everywhere, and his indulgence knew no bounds.
Everyone said the Jing family's young master spoiled the sickly beauty of the Yin family beyond reason.
Was he taking care of an emperor, or an old wife?
On the day they graduated from high school, Yin Qingyun received confession texts from three people.
The top student who was his equal.
The school bully who fell for him at first sight.
And Jing Yi, his childhood friend.
Yin Qingyun thought for a moment, then swiped left on Jing Yi's message without hesitation and deleted it.
The next day, when Jing Yi casually asked whether he'd received any texts,
Yin Qingyun feigned confusion. "No. What texts?"
Then he savored Jing Yi's conflicted, eager expression as his hope turned to disappointment.
Someone once asked Yin Qingyun what his relationship with Jing Yi was.
Yin Qingyun thought for a moment.
"Jing Yi? He's the dog I've been raising all along."
Reader's Guide:
[Both are each other's first and only]
[The seme has been great at taking care of his future wife since childhood. Before he could even read, he already knew to help him put on his shoes, wipe his hands, and put on his hat...]
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How to Raise a Pretty Childhood Friend
Sickly, younger, scheming green-tea seme x Energetic, straight-laced uke
Everyone who knows Yue Yan says he's good-tempered and gentle as jade, with a smile as warm as a spring breeze. He's the quintessential kind, gentle senior.
Who would have guessed that as a child, he was a little devil who gave his parents headaches?
Mischievous and destructive, climbing onto rooftops and pulling up tiles. Even the neighbor's husky avoided him.
Everything changed on a rainy day when he was ten.
His parents brought home a boy as pretty as a porcelain doll: Lin Zhunlu. Quiet and pale, just as his name suggested, he looked at people with trembling lashes like a startled fawn.
Yue Yan was told that the boy was the son of one of his mother's friends, and that their family would look after him for a while.
Yue Yan rubbed his hands together, thinking he'd gotten himself a little underling who would do whatever he said.
Who could have known that this boy would turn into a little tyrant who needed soothing every single day?
Lin Zhunlu was afraid of the dark, so Yue Yan told him stories every night until he fell asleep.
Lin Zhunlu was a picky eater, so Yue Yan fed him by hand, one spoonful at a time.
When Lin Zhunlu felt hurt and sulked, Yue Yan had to put his hearing aids back on and whisper, "I like you," over and over in his ear.
…
Time passed. The little fawn Yue Yan had carefully looked after grew taller, his pretty features taking on the contours of someone between boyhood and adulthood.
Lin Zhunlu was still quiet and clingy. But as his dependence on Yue Yan quietly grew, it seemed to be mixing with something much hotter and more intense.
The air conditioner sent cool breezes through the room, but they couldn't dispel the heat.
The person on the bed was curled up, with muffled gasps and faint movements coming from beneath the thin blanket.
At first, Yue Yan thought he was having a nightmare. He lifted the blanket to comfort him, but what he saw made him stop breathing.
Lin Zhunlu opened his eyes. They were still damp and innocent, but his voice was hoarse beyond recognition.
"Yanyan..."
"I feel awful... Help me..."
His voice was choked with tears, on the verge of breaking down, but his gaze burned fiercely.
His grip was strong, impossible to break free from. He pulled Yue Yan's hand toward the blanket.
Theme: Study hard
It's weird, I feel like there are a lot of holes left unfilled, and the ending is too hasty, and some of it feels inexplicable [cheek holding] (personal feeling)
Author, don't overwrite it. I really think it's very good now. Hahahaha. Maybe everyone's preferences are different. I really feel that this novel gets better and better as you go to the end. The last few pictures made me feel sad. The middle may be a bit bland, but it really gets better and better as you read towards the end! It's been a long time since I've seen a novel that suits my taste so well. Hahaha. I just like the plot of the fight between the attacker and the victim. Hahaha. The author is really interesting! I haven't even slept yet. I finished reading it all at once hahaha. I can't even get up early tomorrow (Ꙭ). It's my first time to comment on a novel. I can't find Jinjiang's comment. Hahahaha, I was so anxious that I went to Douyin to search for a long time. I still have to find it on my own. Wow, it's my first time to write a review and I still write so much. Author, you must read it!!!
Brother, you and I are heart to heart 😂
Attacking in the later stage is like seizing the body, and I feel like I was deceived by the plot in the early stage.
Oh, do you want to cover it? I think the chapters about the quarrel are very interesting and the writing is very touching. There are very few quarrels that I can keep reading. It's so refreshing to see Shoubao lose his temper so clearly. Hahaha, Gong deserves it. He was so busy that he left her alone as soon as the relationship was established. Moreover, Shou himself has psychological trauma, so it is good to vent it. Otherwise, Gong would never have this opportunity to understand Shou's character more deeply. It seems to be his only chance. If he doesn't understand how much Shou cares about and can't do without worrying about gains and losses all day long, then he won't be able to get a wife. Since the author couldn't control himself and thought the writing was too heavy, why couldn't it be that the two characters in the novel were growing out of control and growing souls.
…I always feel like something is weird [changed]
It was the first time that I understood so deeply that I was under control, because when I read this passage, my first reaction was that I was very angry, and I thought that I should be eating sugar, so I should be eating sugar.
The writing and the beginning of the story are very good and attractive, but as the conflicts and quarrels in the plot develop later, I feel that the character design in the second half is very thin and a bit one-sided. Later, the character of the protagonist has been developing around the plot. I am too hasty to follow the plot, and the emotions are not very detailed.
The plot is a bit messy, and the ending feels rushed (looking forward to the extras). I don't know why it feels like prose when I read it (). There are a lot of arguments between the two people, and it's sad [Spread] [Spread] [Spread]
Puppy: Only I am worthy of Yin Qingyunòᆺó