[Would you like to transmigrate and experience a different life?]
[YES. NO.]
The answer is definitely NO.
As the saying goes, curiosity killed the cat.
I watched as a bunch of people clicked YES for no good reason and ended up in worlds where it was easiest to die.
Sure, there was a chance some wonderful god or something might give you a few perks and make you overpowered.
But why risk a calm, ordinary life?
[Choice invalid.]
[Automatically switching to a valid choice.]
[Automatically generating an existing character.]
[Randomly selecting a world for rebirth.]
[Have a pleasant journey.]
So even the famous transmigration program has a virus, huh? We don't even get the option to say no! 360, you'd better keep working on it. Stop flirting with QQ all the time.
Thanks to Yue Da for the cover. The slideshow is amazing.
Today's fifth trick is QAQ
I'm going to pray to God and worship Buddha. Come quickly.
What a deep pit::>_<::
Although I don't know if the author will read the comments on the old article, I still want to give some opinions:
1) There are many shortcomings in the use of punctuation marks. Sometimes the commas are too broken, sometimes there are no periods in the entire paragraph, or they are even used completely incorrectly. Don't underestimate punctuation, it has a great impact on the reading experience! In the description of the same person's actions, thoughts, or scenery in the same scene, try not to separate four or five words with commas, which can enhance coherence; when one person's action is completed and the other person responds, try to separate the paragraphs and add a period.
2) Dialogue. The dialogue should be divided into appropriate paragraphs, and enough hints should be given to let the reader know who is speaking. A large number of continuous dialogues crowded into the same paragraph will only make the reader confused.
3) Subject. I find that authors sometimes lack subjects. Please pay more attention when writing. Appropriate use of subjects can increase the sense of substitution. The lack of subjects makes people feel detached, like talking to themselves.
4) Repeated statements. I noticed that the author sometimes reused the same sentence, such as "after listening" in this chapter. That's not to say it can't be repeated, but it's best to space it out a few paragraphs.
5) Lack of side description. Sometimes a thousand sentences of "Grandma is very tired" are not as good as one sentence of "Grandma's stooped waist has bent half a point again."
6) Reduce meaningless modal particles. Um, oh, ah, ah can be used, but it's better to space it out by a few paragraphs.
7) The sudden movement has no psychological description transition and feels abrupt.
8) Please write more details! I was full of expectations when I saw "The scenery on the coast is so beautiful", but the next sentence was "Xiaomei looked at it for a long time before going home", which made me feel very sad. A vulgar lyric is better than nothing, "The tide draws layers of ripples and water marks on the white sand. The area between the blue and white is like the beauty of my hometown. Underneath the cheerful character is a down-to-earth heart."
The pit is so deep d(?д??)
The pit was too deep, so I crawled away.
Is this a trap?!~~
Damn, sister has jumped into another trap. I don't even know which one this is.
There are indeed pitfalls everywhere in Jinjiang.
It no longer feels like The Sims, it has become a simple cheat-in skip fan.
Sure enough, we have entered the bottomless abyss.
It really scared me to see it seven years ago
Today's fifth trick is QAQ I'm going to pray to God and worship Buddha. Come quickly.
What a deep pit::>_<::
Although I don't know if the author will read the comments on the old article, I still want to give some opinions: 1) There are many shortcomings in the use of punctuation marks. Sometimes the commas are too broken, sometimes there are no periods in the entire paragraph, or they are even used completely incorrectly. Don't underestimate punctuation, it has a great impact on the reading experience! In the description of the same person's actions, thoughts, or scenery in the same scene, try not to separate four or five words with commas, which can enhance coherence; when one person's action is completed and the other person responds, try to separate the paragraphs and add a period. 2) Dialogue. The dialogue should be divided into appropriate paragraphs, and enough hints should be given to let the reader know who is speaking. A large number of continuous dialogues crowded into the same paragraph will only make the reader confused. 3) Subject. I find that authors sometimes lack subjects. Please pay more attention when writing. Appropriate use of subjects can increase the sense of substitution. The lack of subjects makes people feel detached, like talking to themselves. 4) Repeated statements. I noticed that the author sometimes reused the same sentence, such as "after listening" in this chapter. That's not to say it can't be repeated, but it's best to space it out a few paragraphs. 5) Lack of side description. Sometimes a thousand sentences of "Grandma is very tired" are not as good as one sentence of "Grandma's stooped waist has bent half a point again." 6) Reduce meaningless modal particles. Um, oh, ah, ah can be used, but it's better to space it out by a few paragraphs. 7) The sudden movement has no psychological description transition and feels abrupt. 8) Please write more details! I was full of expectations when I saw "The scenery on the coast is so beautiful", but the next sentence was "Xiaomei looked at it for a long time before going home", which made me feel very sad. A vulgar lyric is better than nothing, "The tide draws layers of ripples and water marks on the white sand. The area between the blue and white is like the beauty of my hometown. Underneath the cheerful character is a down-to-earth heart."
The pit is so deep d(?д??)
The pit was too deep, so I crawled away.
Is this a trap?!~~
Damn, sister has jumped into another trap. I don't even know which one this is. There are indeed pitfalls everywhere in Jinjiang.
It no longer feels like The Sims, it has become a simple cheat-in skip fan.
Sure enough, we have entered the bottomless abyss.