Lotus Lantern: Just Like Our First Meeting

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The cover of Daai GN has the antique mythical atmosphere of the lotus lantern. However, when I saw the copy, I felt there were some shortcomings. I wonder if GN confused the copy with the introduction. GN's copy was written in the same way as the introduction. To put it simply, the introduction clearly tells the readers the plot of the story in the simplest words, while the copy can reveal the author's words, language style, and story emotion. GN If the most exciting turning point that is about to happen in the novel is used in sentences that attract the reader's attention and is described appropriately, then it will be a good copy. Another point is that I hope GN will design the copy more beautifully, or at least enlarge the font size. The copy and the first chapter are the key to determining whether readers have the motivation to continue. Penguin doesn't have much love for Lotus Lanterns, so his understanding of the article is not that good. I hope GN won't mind the evaluation too much, bow~ The article "Just Meeting for the First Time" is very unique and innovative. It proves that GN has spent a certain amount of effort on the article. Emotions are an intangible and subtle thing. How terrible it would be to convert emotions into a tool. At first, Penguin thought it was just the forbidden love of ordinary immortals. Penguin had guessed that writing mythical love stories, especially forbidden love, was nothing more than breaking the treaty of heaven again, but "Just the First Meeting" broke this thinking and became completely different. The previous meeting was thought to be such a simple chance encounter, but in the fourth chapter, readers can't help but start to speculate. The purpose is revenge, and the target of revenge is Agarwood, which everyone praises. What kind of story will this be? As some readers left messages to GN, Yang Jian's love for Su Han came too quickly and subtlely. This speed appeared when Yang Jian was full of doubts about Su Han. This seemed really unreasonable and came out of nowhere. Of course, from a personal point of view, Penguin still believes that love is everywhere. Penguin, who reads more romance novels than Danmei, praises Chang'e's feelings. Her love bloomed after Yang Jian's flower withered. In order to retain the love she had missed, she tried her best to express it to Yang Jian in a hidden way. [Osmanthus tea, osmanthus, noble person] The hidden meaning also shows her heart. Penguin felt sorry for Chang'e because she didn't express it directly. She didn't know that love is also instantaneous. If you want to keep it after it has passed, you must be straightforward. After all, it is the past and not the present. After talking about my general feelings, Penguin would like to talk about the problems that appeared in the first few chapters. I read the first few chapters very carefully, but there are some small problems that make Penguin a little... Difficult to understand. For example: [Yang Jian thinks carefully, this voice is... Chang'e] It's not that penguins like to find faults. This sentence appears twice in the first chapter. I hope GN can finish coding and upload it to the Internet, and patrol it carefully. Maybe Penguin can't accept that Yang Jian, who was once such a serious person, instantly transformed 360° into a childlike person, with a tone of voice that shouldn't exist in a mature man. [At that time, I always went to play in the woods outside my house after dinner. When I was enjoying myself, I often forgot that it was getting late.] The narration can describe the psychological situation, but you should also pay attention to Yang Jian's age and mental age. Removing the modal particles such as "ah, ah" will make Yang Jian a relatively temperamental character. Penguin can understand that GN wants to describe the kind of nostalgia, but these modal particles are often used by girls, and it would be a bit inappropriate to use them on men. [What's the matter, tell me] Chang'e's attitude when she said this reminded Penguin of a conversation between a boss and a subordinate, which was too serious. Yang Jian was particularly respectful when he spoke to Chang'e, using the words "trouble" and "agree", but Chang'e's "you say" was too stiff. I wonder if it would be better to change it to words like "please speak"?

Came from the forum. There are some errors in the first chapter, please look carefully How to put it this way, I had not been a girl for a long, long time when Lotus Lantern became a hit, so I didn't watch much of it. But girl, your writing style, the structure of the play, and the psychology of the characters are all fine. It's just that Young Master Su makes me not cute. I hope to make a big fuss about Young Master Su's character.

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The only bloodline of the Yang family? That Liu Chenxiang's surname is Liu, not Yang. Even if they are related, it has a "foreign" meaning. How can they be of the Yang family's blood? There is an ancient saying: A daughter who is married off is like water thrown away. It means "the children born are the incense of the man". Ps: Yang Jian's love came too quickly. In contrast, we still like the love that lasts for a long time and flows slowly...

The only bloodline of the Yang family? That Liu Chenxiang's surname is Liu, not Yang. There is an ancient saying: A daughter who is married off is like water thrown away. It means "the children born are the incense of the man". Ps: Yang Jian's love came too quickly. In contrast, we still like the love that lasts for a long time and flows slowly...

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