Shaxi Night: Birthday Stories for Friends
沙汐夜色之给朋友的生日贺文集
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 4k Words
- Genre
- –
- Era
- –
- Updated
- 20y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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I just found out about this article from Shasha today... I apologize... A birthday message for Coral...= =|||Birthday message... I haven't written the birthday greetings for a certain bird yet... Piaozaoma's greetings
Nice to say~~ Because from Coral's perspective, it's the diary version again It feels so warm~~
Shuiwangwang hugged Shasha... I was so touched and said... I have forgotten... And the rustling... Hug my dear~~~I am already very satisfied with the gift... As for the quality of the article... I think it's pretty good... At least I won't feel dizzy after watching it... I can also imagine it... Besides... Kang is right... After all, it is a diary written by a child... So there is no need to worry about the writing style... As long as the language is fluent, it's OK... Live All in all... The gift is really worth it... It's alive...
As for the diary of a primary school student, the language cannot be too forced. Even if the adult's writing is good, the age of the protagonist must be considered. However, the date in the diary is a bit confusing, and adults should change it.