River Through the Forest Sea (The Prince of Tennis, BG, Yanagi)

Very simple and heartwarming article

Very simple and heartwarming article

Wow, Lian Ji is the best... But the author is a literary artist

Author: Hello Literary W

The plot is well designed, but I think Kurihara's departure is a bit sudden, but it's a short story, so it's still very understandable~ In addition, I think it would be better to replace [] with "". The layout feels a bit scattered, but maybe you, the author, prefer it this way. Also, how did Yanagi fall in love with Kiriyama...

Although this article only has more than 10,000 words, the pace is so slow that I feel like I have been reading for a long time... This simple narrative method is very suitable for short stories or only short stories. If you think about it carefully, it can be used as the outline of a full-length novel. I feel pretty good after reading it. I can picture the whole scene and the whole story based on the author's narration in my mind. Because of the author's writing style, when I read the article, it was like listening to a melodious and gentle song. My heart was always peaceful and soft, as if I had hidden a ball of cotton. But this also prevented me from changing my mood as the heroine's situation changed... Even if it ended in the end, I was still very calm... When Sanada appeared in the second chapter, the author arranged a flower arrangement. I felt it was very awkward, like a carrot growing in a wheat field, which did not match the style of the entire article. Also, as a male protagonist, Yanagi's appearance is too little, even less than that of the female protagonist Kurihara. If you tell me that this article is about Kurihara and the heroine Yuri, I won't be surprised. But it may be that the author loved this character very much and was afraid of writing it down, so he subconsciously avoided it. Hmm... The last one feels a bit like a shoujo manga. [In the end, this is my own point of view and not a shortcoming of the article. It is just a matter of my personality and preferences. The author can basically ignore it. Compared to girls who read literary novels, I prefer the idiot character the heroine pretends to be... Orz...] Keep up the good work, author~ The most important thing in the future is to increase the number of male protagonists! !