Lu Yunhe transmigrates into a cultivation novel called Nameless. But there's one difference: he arrives four years before the story officially begins... and the System runs out of energy and shuts down.
Lu Yunhe: System? System? System!!! What am I supposed to do now? Say more! After four days of calling out with no answer, Lu Yunhe accepts his fate, adapts to local life, and waits for the story to begin.
Lu Yunhe, with tears in his eyes: At last, the day has come!
Although the useless System only told him the novel's general outline and left him to figure out the rest on his own, the little protagonist is so sweet and gentle. Lu Yunhe gives him a piece of candy and performs a butterfly trick to cheer him up, and the boy sticks to him from then on. He's so small he doesn't even reach the height of Lu Yunhe's sword, yet he wishes to stay with him forever.
That pure heart is precious beyond measure. Lu Yunhe can't help but cherish him, and even starts to see the System in a better light as he follows its instructions and completes one plot point after another.
In his spare time, Lu Yunhe once planted a flower seed by the window with the little protagonist.
The round, black seed buried in the soil was like a promise waiting to be fulfilled, filling them with anticipation for the bright, beautiful days ahead.
But Lu Yunhe had only glimpsed that butterfly-like patch of flowers once when disaster quietly struck.
The Guixu appeared, and calamity descended. The sea flooded inland, and all things crumbled. As a force capable of erasing everything swept toward them, the little protagonist, now a young man, stepped in front of Lu Yunhe and covered his eyes. He whispered, "Lu, don't be afraid. I won't let you die here. You'll be all right..." In the darkness, scalding tears fell onto Lu Yunhe's face, burning his heart.
"Don't... forget me."
The grand historical records say little about the You clan member who ended the calamity single-handedly, only preserving a few vague lines that reveal almost nothing. The clearest account says that he eventually disappeared in a vast snowfall, never to be seen again.
They say he lingered for a long time in one place before his fall. Surely it must be filled with countless rare treasures and supreme opportunities. Countless cultivators yearn to visit, scrambling to reach it.
But when they entered after exhausting every effort, they were shocked to find that all that remained in the world was a cluster of... butterfly orchids in full bloom, their shadowy forms drifting down like butterflies.
They had been growing there for years, never tiring of their vigil.
As if waiting for someone to come.
Easygoing, softhearted shou x Innocent, lovesick gong
Lu Yunhe x You Wenlei
#How to turn the plotline into a love story#
P.S.:
1. The little protagonist is You Wenlei.
2. One-on-one, happy ending. A sweet romance.
3. This is an irreverent cultivation novel, with the whole story being made up as it goes, all for the two leads.
4. The paid version won't be abandoned.
5. If you've made it this far, please add it to your collection _(:зゝ∠)_
Theme: Love is something you must never forget.
I've finished reading it. It's a very exciting article [Like] The plot is a bit fast at the end, but I can still get a general idea. The atmosphere of the whole story is really unexpectedly good [Like] and the lack of comments may be due to the lack of gags between characters to reflect the relationship. It feels like many characters' own stories and personalities are over before they have time to reveal themselves. As a reader, I have the guts to jump in right away! It felt like everyone had dispersed in the next second ()
How should I put it? Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing style is very good, so good that it doesn't look like a new author. But the first one is that there are too many foreshadowings. Although it seems to have been recycled in the end, there are too many, so it feels like many places are still unclear. Secondly, the plot is too messy and complicated. I really feel that the author has a lot of ideas, but many of them are not expressed clearly. Now in the first episode, now in the second episode, now he is dressed as Yang Chunsheng, and then back to the second episode, and then I don't quite understand where it happened in the first few chapters that are about to be finished. From the looks of it, it seems that Lu Yunhe is the 23-year-old Lu Yunhe in the present world (?). But when I read the article, I feel that You Wenlei is not at all the 8/9-year-old person he was before everything happened. So has the 19-year-old You Wenlei passed through in the second episode? So where did the original You Wenlei go? Because the world line is constantly changing, questions like this are a bit hard to understand. Then there are some bugs that I want to complain about (? Can I call them bugs? Anyway, some questions). For example, the reason why I returned to Guixu for a week was because of the copper bell given by Lin Xia. No one has discovered that such an important prop can be used to return to Guixu by shaking it. If it is because only the protagonist can trigger it, I feel that I need to write about it. And this function is too exaggerated. Where did this bell come from? If it was Wu Yao who did it, he is too powerful. It feels like Biyou is crying. Why is he still worrying about whether people from the outside world can come? He can just kill Gui Xu. Another example is that Lu Yunhe was probably dragged into his sea of consciousness by You Wenlei from the first to the second eye. How?? Obsession? Damn it, it always feels too far-fetched... Or maybe I think too much. Does You Wenlei's bad cooking just mean that he is just bad? Doesn't it have any special meaning? And when the cooking scene happened, I remember that time was very critical in this world and in the second episode. How could I still live a leisurely and idyllic life in seclusion all of a sudden? It was so funny. Maybe because there are only 170,000 words, a lot of places have been covered. It would be great if all the foreshadowings could be written clearly, the protagonists and supporting characters could be fleshed out, and the bugs could be fixed. Uh-huh, but in any case, I still stumbled and finished reading it. Overall, the writing style is really good. Otherwise, I would definitely not be able to read it if I was a picky person. Come on
Catching insects, I repeated these paragraphs
I can feel what the author wants to write, but many places have been vaguely passed over. It would be nice if I could refine it in the future. [Bixin] It will be more exciting.
The plot feels messy, and the abusive points of the copywriting are actually not mentioned much in the main text. It may be because I jumped to buy it, so I didn't understand it (#-.-) But it's okay. There is no point in the main text that makes me embarrassed. If I am not interested in the subsequent extras, I will not buy it. I wish you all the best, xql99
"This means that we will set up a few tables in Courtyard No. 2 To invite the old neighbors. Thinking that they can have a good meal, everyone said: "I will definitely come then! ""Catch a big bug for the author~
"You Wenlei raised his eyes, "So,..." This is a big bug for the author~ Lu Yunhe