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Lin Qiusheng is a farmhand who scrapes by working the land. He once dated a local village hooligan.
Later, that hooligan died. Lin Qiusheng was sad for a while, but life had to go on.
Then one day a group of young people suddenly arrived in the village, talking about missions and clues. Only then did Lin Qiusheng realize that he might just be an NPC in an infinite-flow game dungeon.
The young people called him the pretty widower.
*
Lin Qiusheng takes three seconds to accept that he's just an NPC, then goes right back to farming.
Until night falls, when he suddenly jolts awake to find himself held tightly by a cold body.
He turns around and sees a blood-covered man staring at him in silence.
The village hooligan, his deceased lover, has returned, bringing a pile of things Lin Qiusheng has never seen before.
“Do you like them?”
The man leans closer, his body icy and his face smeared with blood, but he gazes at Lin Qiusheng with utter seriousness and offers him a lingering kiss.
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From then on, Cheng Ye leaves every morning and comes home in the evening with a pile of strange things: expensive watches, pretty necklaces, elegant fountain pens...
The only problem is that Cheng Ye comes home filthy and covered in blood every day.
Lin Qiusheng, an honest farmer, decides to sit down and have a serious talk with his lover.
And so this scene unfolds:
All the players in the infinite-flow game know of a dungeon with a strangely high difficulty level: The Village of a Hundred Filial Virtues.
It features a pretty widower who, unlike the sinister NPCs in other dungeons, is honest and kind, and even goes out of his way to help players.
It should be a dungeon with a high clear rate, but the strange thing is that an infinite-flow game's ultimate boss can spawn there at random.
A killing machine who wants nothing more than to destroy everything in the dungeon.
Until one day, players pass by a thatched hut.
Inside, the pretty widower is earnestly lecturing the “killing machine.” “Did you go steal things from people again?”
An honest, beautiful pretty widower bottom x a gloomy, murderous, real ghost top
Content warning: The top is an ultimate boss and may have clones in different dungeons.
Theme: Live positively and face hardship with the courage to never give up
From the beginning of the article to the end, I feel a little empty after reading it. The text stops at this point. I understand the big idea, but I don't know if it's because I read it roughly. I always feel that there are still things that have not been explained clearly, such as why Cheng Wu He is an evil god, what is his relationship with the system, and what is the relationship between Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye? I always feel that Cheng has a bit of background in the later period, and I still have a lot of unfinished ideas, but no matter what, I still look forward to a lot of extras [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses]
I have finished the story. In fact, both the main story and the short story are okay. Although there are a few typos in each chapter, overall it is okay. I hope my wife can finish the foreshadowing after writing the extra chapter. There are still a lot of pitfalls in reading it. On a side note, has my wife also watched Dead Silence and Fatal Game, and saw some familiar old friends? Haha
I stayed up late yesterday to read it and I was a bit full of questions. Because I think it's not easy for you to write such a long one, and the unit story is quite interesting, so I would like to give my wife some advice. If you don't like it, just treat it like my sister:
I think the ending of all novels, "God descends", is a bit broken. In this article, the concept of "mental power" is not mentioned from beginning to end. The ending suddenly comes, and the reader wonders, "What, can it still be like this?", And then it ends. This is the descent of the gods. Since this is a key clue that constitutes the ending, can we lay some foreshadowing in the previous article?
Furthermore, some branch lines ended in vain and the correlation between the subsections was not strong. I put these two points together because the synchronization of the expansion of the branch lines seems to also promote the correlation between the subsections. For example, the part about the wax museum brought out the powerful concept of "resentment". I thought I would focus on this to talk about the causes of the copy, but it turned out not to be the case. The stories of everyone in Aurora have not yet unfolded, nor has the story of Cheng Ye. It is true that readers have the obligation to use fragmented information to deduce the complete process of events in mystery and suspense books, but there is still very little information currently known, who are Mo Shui and Chen Yutong, what are the causes of their personalities, etc. And at the end of the story, we still don't know the opportunity for players to enter the game, the source of players' power, and the purpose of player domain development... (This information does not need to be extended, but the appearance of the character Junze raises these questions).
So, for now, I feel confused after reading it. Above, if this review has had a bad impact on you, please delete it directly. May your thoughts and writings flourish!
The overall story is still very interesting, but the extra story about Cheng Wu feels a bit pity. I originally thought that Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye would reunite as one person and be with Lin Qiusheng in the end, but in the end they became two completely different people, but Lin Qiusheng has always been the same person, he just lost his memory. It stands to reason that after regaining his memory, he should think of his former lover, but looking at the subsequent plot, it feels like he has no feelings for Cheng Wu. , There is a feeling that Lin Qiusheng fell in love with someone else after losing his memory. From Cheng Wu's point of view, I traded everything with the system in exchange for my lover to live again. As a result, my lover fell in love with someone else. Even if his memory was restored, he did not choose me. Finally, when he returned to the real world, he forgot that he could live again, but in the end he remembered everything. Even he was the only one who remembered this incident. I felt so pitiful for him.
I don't understand the relationship between Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye. Has Cheng Wu returned to the real world now, while Cheng Ye and Qiu Sheng stayed in the game? ? ? [Crack][crack]
. It's so beautiful... Why is it over?
Author Author [Crying] When can I watch Tiantian's extra story? It's really hard to live without reading novels [Hold my thighs]
Ah? Is it so sudden...
The author, the process of Xu Yuanqiu Sheng and Cheng Ye getting acquainted, I feel that the previous description is too short and not enough to read [crying], the text of the sweet relationship is so sweet [crying]
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From the beginning of the article to the end, I feel a little empty after reading it. The text stops at this point. I understand the big idea, but I don't know if it's because I read it roughly. I always feel that there are still things that have not been explained clearly, such as why Cheng Wu He is an evil god, what is his relationship with the system, and what is the relationship between Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye? I always feel that Cheng has a bit of background in the later period, and I still have a lot of unfinished ideas, but no matter what, I still look forward to a lot of extras [dog head holding roses] [dog head holding roses]
I have finished the story. In fact, both the main story and the short story are okay. Although there are a few typos in each chapter, overall it is okay. I hope my wife can finish the foreshadowing after writing the extra chapter. There are still a lot of pitfalls in reading it. On a side note, has my wife also watched Dead Silence and Fatal Game, and saw some familiar old friends? Haha
I stayed up late yesterday to read it and I was a bit full of questions. Because I think it's not easy for you to write such a long one, and the unit story is quite interesting, so I would like to give my wife some advice. If you don't like it, just treat it like my sister: I think the ending of all novels, "God descends", is a bit broken. In this article, the concept of "mental power" is not mentioned from beginning to end. The ending suddenly comes, and the reader wonders, "What, can it still be like this?", And then it ends. This is the descent of the gods. Since this is a key clue that constitutes the ending, can we lay some foreshadowing in the previous article? Furthermore, some branch lines ended in vain and the correlation between the subsections was not strong. I put these two points together because the synchronization of the expansion of the branch lines seems to also promote the correlation between the subsections. For example, the part about the wax museum brought out the powerful concept of "resentment". I thought I would focus on this to talk about the causes of the copy, but it turned out not to be the case. The stories of everyone in Aurora have not yet unfolded, nor has the story of Cheng Ye. It is true that readers have the obligation to use fragmented information to deduce the complete process of events in mystery and suspense books, but there is still very little information currently known, who are Mo Shui and Chen Yutong, what are the causes of their personalities, etc. And at the end of the story, we still don't know the opportunity for players to enter the game, the source of players' power, and the purpose of player domain development... (This information does not need to be extended, but the appearance of the character Junze raises these questions). So, for now, I feel confused after reading it. Above, if this review has had a bad impact on you, please delete it directly. May your thoughts and writings flourish!
The overall story is still very interesting, but the extra story about Cheng Wu feels a bit pity. I originally thought that Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye would reunite as one person and be with Lin Qiusheng in the end, but in the end they became two completely different people, but Lin Qiusheng has always been the same person, he just lost his memory. It stands to reason that after regaining his memory, he should think of his former lover, but looking at the subsequent plot, it feels like he has no feelings for Cheng Wu. , There is a feeling that Lin Qiusheng fell in love with someone else after losing his memory. From Cheng Wu's point of view, I traded everything with the system in exchange for my lover to live again. As a result, my lover fell in love with someone else. Even if his memory was restored, he did not choose me. Finally, when he returned to the real world, he forgot that he could live again, but in the end he remembered everything. Even he was the only one who remembered this incident. I felt so pitiful for him.
I don't understand the relationship between Cheng Wu and Cheng Ye. Has Cheng Wu returned to the real world now, while Cheng Ye and Qiu Sheng stayed in the game? ? ? [Crack][crack]
. It's so beautiful... Why is it over?
Author Author [Crying] When can I watch Tiantian's extra story? It's really hard to live without reading novels [Hold my thighs]
Ah? Is it so sudden...
The author, the process of Xu Yuanqiu Sheng and Cheng Ye getting acquainted, I feel that the previous description is too short and not enough to read [crying], the text of the sweet relationship is so sweet [crying]
Looking forward to the next chapter ovo