Surviving the Mist: A Local Wizard Stumbles into a Game

Boss, can you please continue to come back and write🙏🙏😣 [Hold your thighs] Don't take those harsh comments too seriously. Everyone has their own perspective. At least I didn't think there was anything wrong with it when I read it. Before I clicked on the comment area, I didn't expect it to be subject to a value trial. If your wife finds some friendly suggestions helpful, you can refer to them, but there is no need to doubt yourself or the characters because of those negative comments. Writing is like eating. Customers select restaurants that suit their taste, and restaurants select customers who can accept this taste. If there are bad reviews, there will be good reviews. It is normal for some people not to like it, but there are still many customers who are still looking forward to the stories you write. [Empty bowl] [empty bowl] Boss The two serials with tens of thousands of words locked on your homepage are only three in total. They have been written very well. Don't be discouraged🤗🤗I like the little wizard and the farmer you wrote very much. They are two very lively and novel people. Even the forums in the communication area are interesting🤩🎉💪🌈Don't give up🥺

Ga? What evil did I commit in my previous life? The authors I chased disappeared without saying a word [Lie down]

??? The character of the protagonist is broken, right? An orphan who grew up in a wizarding world, and a world where dark wizards exist. When he encounters a house-breaking robber who wants to kill people and rob goods, he actually wants to teach him a lesson and let him go? What the hell. Even a native of Blue Star, after entering the survival game, you will know that it is no longer the peaceful era of the past. I am really convinced that the wizard protagonist is so "gentle". All the previous chapters were a waste of my money, which is bad luck.

The plot of this chapter is so annoying. The protagonist's personality has been problematic from the very beginning, and it becomes even more outrageous in this chapter. A child who grew up in a world where people often died and had no parents to rely on could be so kind, which is both inconsistent and disgusting.

Seriously? The previous description describes how the wizard school fights for resources. The era is similar to the medieval era. The protagonist is not a rich young man and is a common wizard as he climbs up step by step. Moreover, the character of Shou is not that of a gentle little sun, right? Doesn't thinking too much about things mean that he is naive? It would be better to say that people who are more imaginative should be cautious. Imagination will demonize people, not to mention that it is an autistic character. I must have seen the dark side of everyone. The character design is too OOC.

? Sir, your writing is quite good, and the subject matter is also good.

Hey, madam, the child is hungry.

Aren't you coming back? This book is really to my liking.

? Why don't you write any more and don't ask for leave?

Isn't it because of the bad reviews of the character OOC that I stopped writing. That's a bit of a pity, after all, writing must be criticized to make progress.