Two young men set out on a journey in a world called Cangqiong.
Here, you can discover the ruins of immortals.
Here, you can find enticing magic treasures.
Here, you can meet loyal and lovable spirit beasts.
There is cultivation and leveling up, fighting and treasure hunting, as well as bewildering disputes and entanglements.
And of course, even after cultivating to immortality, a beautiful romance between men can still blossom.
Because Tingxi believes that a journey can also mean a lifetime of companionship!
P.S. The cultivation setting is based on the great Xiao Qian's A Journey to the Ethereal Realm.
P.S. This is a long, slow-burn story. If you like it, please show your support. If you don't, feel free to leave.
This story is all made up. If anything seems illogical, just let it slide with a smile...
Ahhhh, come back when the time comes and continue writing.
Pitfalls, pitfalls, whether to jump or not, that is the question
Look? Still not watching? This is a problem!
Look, it's confirmed to be a trap
Don't watch it, everyone in the pit says it looks good.
Resentment
Don't leak wealth. It's a crime to hold a pearl in your arms
Seeing that you have paused the article, I will write some thoughts after reading it. If you think it does not make sense, just think of it as my nonsense :).
1. I think this article is good. From my reading experience, the first 15 chapters are very good. The life of two people at the bottom of the valley aroused my interest in pursuing the article.
2. After Chapter 15, I personally think there are three points that have a great influence on the pursuit of the article:
A: The golden finger is too wide open. With the three-year Nascent Soul Golden Pill, it feels like they are at the top of the world all of a sudden. It feels too easy. Of course, adults may have other considerations.
B: Xiao Qiao's character. Although ordinary middle school students are likely to be like him, in the eyes of readers, he is too naive. After all, he grew up in online novels and conspiracy theories. In addition, many people have written about this personality, so it is not very attractive.
C: The story after they came out of the mountain is relatively cliché.
To sum up, I think the first 15 chapters are very good, at least I enjoyed reading them. However, it seems that the author needs to overhaul the outline and character settings of the later chapters to make the story more attractive.
The above is my personal opinion. If it is not correct, please forgive me.
I like to wear double wear. We both love each other very much. Send flowers, send flowers, send flowers.
Isn't Lin Nan lovable?
And Xiao Qiao is really heartless.
Maybe people with that kind of temperament will be easily appreciated by superiors~
I really don't understand the importance of being on guard against others! ! ! ! What else is called "Yoshi"? It's not like Little Japan! ! ! !
Why don't these two kids have any sense? If you commit yourself with a jade, it seems that you will suffer.
Aren't they afraid of someone stealing their elixirs? Just like being forced out of the inner elixir~?
Don't blame me for being a fairy and an idiot, haha
Ahhhh, come back when the time comes and continue writing.
Pitfalls, pitfalls, whether to jump or not, that is the question
Look? Still not watching? This is a problem! Look, it's confirmed to be a trap Don't watch it, everyone in the pit says it looks good. Resentment
Don't leak wealth. It's a crime to hold a pearl in your arms
Seeing that you have paused the article, I will write some thoughts after reading it. If you think it does not make sense, just think of it as my nonsense :). 1. I think this article is good. From my reading experience, the first 15 chapters are very good. The life of two people at the bottom of the valley aroused my interest in pursuing the article. 2. After Chapter 15, I personally think there are three points that have a great influence on the pursuit of the article: A: The golden finger is too wide open. With the three-year Nascent Soul Golden Pill, it feels like they are at the top of the world all of a sudden. It feels too easy. Of course, adults may have other considerations. B: Xiao Qiao's character. Although ordinary middle school students are likely to be like him, in the eyes of readers, he is too naive. After all, he grew up in online novels and conspiracy theories. In addition, many people have written about this personality, so it is not very attractive. C: The story after they came out of the mountain is relatively cliché. To sum up, I think the first 15 chapters are very good, at least I enjoyed reading them. However, it seems that the author needs to overhaul the outline and character settings of the later chapters to make the story more attractive. The above is my personal opinion. If it is not correct, please forgive me.
I like to wear double wear. We both love each other very much. Send flowers, send flowers, send flowers.
Isn't Lin Nan lovable? And Xiao Qiao is really heartless. Maybe people with that kind of temperament will be easily appreciated by superiors~
I really don't understand the importance of being on guard against others! ! ! ! What else is called "Yoshi"? It's not like Little Japan! ! ! !
Why don't these two kids have any sense? If you commit yourself with a jade, it seems that you will suffer.
Aren't they afraid of someone stealing their elixirs? Just like being forced out of the inner elixir~? Don't blame me for being a fairy and an idiot, haha