Clouds of Smoke over Tianmu

Describe the smoke and clouds in the third eye with wonderful strokes...

This novel is very beautiful. The world written by the author is lifelike, and the characters are full and three-dimensional. Each character has his own soul and story. The writing is beautiful and smooth. After reading it, you will have endless aftertaste and let the reader be immersed in it. The author uses delicate brushwork to depict a fascinating world. The relationships between the characters are also clearly sorted out. 😍

Got halfway through and need a comment? I'm familiar with the place names here.