The Martial World Is Dead

First of all, I want to apologize. I was a fan who read the girl's DN elsewhere and wanted to give it a thumbs up, but the next door was blocked, so I found a place to write a few words. It was many years ago that I read DN for the first time. In the past few days, I suddenly started to review it, so I also looked for fans from many years ago to read it. When I saw the last postscript, I felt that the girl wrote this article very carefully and carefully, so I registered to express it. The care between the lines is still conveyed after so many years. I just don't know if someone would comment after so many years, would it be very abrupt or even embarrassing... I read the article overnight and felt very moved. I wonder if the propositions that the girl discussed in the article so many years ago (legal principles, procedural justice, love and death, etc.) Have now found more precise answers, are they more determined, or have they been ignored. (Actually, it doesn't matter, I'm just out of curiosity.) Putting these propositions in the same person's way makes people very emotional, and I think it's the best way to explain this pairing. When it comes to meeting opponents in chess, it is indeed the most successful one. Having said that, although the ending is HE, the various "constant misses" during the period are actually very cruel... (Laughs) If you have never met such a person, then that's it. After meeting you, no matter what kind of miss you are, you will not be reconciled. (I'm not obsessed with BE or HE, I'm just complaining symbolically, because the writing is too affectionate, and when you read it, you will be very entangled in the fate of CP... In fact, I should write a long review for the girl, but after reading it, my thoughts were a little confused (after all, I haven't read fanfics for many years), so I'll think about it before writing. Thank you for your wonderful article, it can still touch people's hearts even after years.

Good writing, definitely good writing. How lucky to see such writing in this era when little white stallions are everywhere. After watching the ending, I was still thinking, does Yuan Qingzhou (I really want to beat him = =) still believe in the sword? Will she still hide in a certain mountain forest and ignore it - or will she finally realize that there is no mountain forest that can't be stained with blood and fire? The old friend is dead, the famous sword is dead, and the world is dead. Perhaps the feeling of contradiction and despair at the end of the previous chapter could be reinforced? Inexplicably, it feels a little bland. ——My humble opinion, please ignore it...

Good article, I suddenly remembered "The Way of the Sword" All old forces will always shine with incomparable light the moment they are replaced by new forces.

The Jianghu people are not dead.

Master author, is your hunter's pit really useless? ? ? ? Cry, there are so many mysteries.

I wish Yao Yuan had said, "Junior brother, take care of yourself" when he left. Hiding your face...

Uh, touching the head, knocking the head, pulling the hair... What is the relationship between these two people? PS: Common master versus master route

What can I say, the writing is good, but as a short story with more than 10,000 words, if you lose your indifferent mood and read this article, the tone of this article will be a bit draggy. In my opinion, the whole article may not be particularly beautiful, but it has a quite beautiful proposition and exploration. So, thank you for your advice.

What a pleasant surprise to see a good article! It is a pity that there are so few comments on such a masterpiece, and I feel sorry for it. I am not talented, so I can only do my best to write a long review for comfort. What first attracted me was the title of this article, "The Rivers and Lakes Are Dead." It seems that many ancient texts like to use the title "martial arts". However, "martial arts" is not that easy to write, especially the word "xia" after "", so people settled for the next best thing and started writing "". But where are the rivers and lakes? When modern people are asked this question, they can naturally answer with emotion or ridicule: "Where there are people, there are rivers and lakes." Of course, in the author's writing, he has to add another sentence: "Where there are swords, there are rivers and lakes." So when I first saw this title, I couldn't help but wonder, to what extent can "jiangs and lakes" be considered dead? At first, I thought it was not the objectively existing world that died, but the world in the minds of certain characters. This kind of setting is not uncommon, so I preconceptionally thought that this article followed the common line of "some things happened, but things have changed over the years." Of course, this meaning is indeed implicit in the whole article, but this feeling is far from the point, let alone the whole story. What really traps the human body like tough threads and penetrates into people's hearts like moisture is the death of the Jianghu that makes all the people of the Jianghu in the past and present helpless. In the hearts of Jianghu people, although "a chivalrous person breaks the law with force" is often spoken of, it may not be taken seriously. Even if dynasties change and those in power use various means to soften and weaken the role of Jianghu, Jianghu will only retreat temporarily, and there will always be trouble again. However, this New Year, which was engraved in the hearts of Jianghu people, was eventually defeated and shattered by foreign artillery bullets. It was a wave that could not be undone even if we tried our best, which made people despair to death. I was moved by such a death, but it didn't happen until the final chapter. Maybe it's because I saw everything that happened through Yuan Qingzhou's eyes, so no matter what, I couldn't avoid the coldness and alienation of watching the fire from the other side, and even the pain was a dull pain. Let's talk about the characters. In such a short story of less than 15,000 yuan, several flesh-and-blood characters have been created. One of them is Yao Yuan. In fact, if Yao Yuan was placed in other stories, he might just be an ordinary supporting character. Characters like his may be rare in the world, but in the eyes of readers, they are just the same and have nothing new. Generally speaking, the author who creates such a character is just copying people's wisdom, and it is easy to be thankless. But when it comes to this article, Yao Yuan is suddenly very surprised. He appeared early, but he has never been described positively since that time, so in my memory, this man is no longer the hereditary general who is dedicated to serving the country, but a Jianghu man who threw down the wine jar and said "take care" before leaving. The other two relatively important supporting characters, Gao Ge and Xu Tongzi, also have something to say. However, even if the supporting characters portrayed in the original work of only ten thousand words can withstand careful handling, it would be boring to really consider them one by one, so it is better to stop here. As for the protagonists Mei Bumi and Yuan Qingzhou, I naturally prefer the former, and for the latter, if I say love, it is better to say confusion. Although this article uses Yuan Qingzhou as the first person, both the ending of the final chapter and the order of the protagonists in the copy confirm my judgment that Mei Bumi is the real protagonist. So I was confused about the character Yuan Qingzhou. Apart from being used as a thread, what is the meaning and soul of this character itself? I could see her character, but I couldn't see her faith. The other characters who have appeared all have their own pursuit goals. As Yuan Qingzhou said, even if they take different paths, they all lead to the same destination, but she is the only one who lives in a corner and has close connections with so many people in the world. However, there is a mist inside that makes it impossible to see clearly. This is probably my biggest regret about this article. Another thing that makes me a little confused is the label "love". To be honest, throughout my review of the entire text, I was struck by the heavy and desolate tone of the text several times. The affection between teachers and friends was perfectly rendered, but I could not find the word "love" in it. It would be far-fetched to say that the relationship between the protagonists Mei Bumi and Yuan Qingzhou is love. However, if the love in this article is about the love between the characters in the article and the "Jianghu", although it is wonderful, it is not pointed out in the context, and it is too ambiguous and obscure. Anyway, thank you to the author for letting me see such a good article.

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