Naruto: Nanaeko

Actually. I think the setting of the article is okay, although the heroine is a bit too strong. As for the writing style, I find it quite comfortable anyway, but... . . . Damn it. Why Orochimaru would leave his daughter in Konoha is unscientific. Being a Hokage at the age of 9, the intensity of physical development is not right. Also, Orochimaru showed his children the dark side of the world before, but why did he become like this later? And even if you want to protect. Defection can't be exchanged for any promise.

Previous life~~It's a pity

What. . Come back and visit occasionally. .

Still there. . . Sure enough, he's not dead

The male pig is spotted. Surprised.

Although... I doubt that by the end of writing, it will turn out to be... My father is married! ) All kinds of beauty

A different Uncle Snake...

Uncle Snake is so full of love, so envious

Uncle Snake... He's so loving. I like him too.

The heroine is starting to become more and more mature, and the original character has collapsed a lot, so it is still a fanfic after all... The main plot has changed too much... The main thing is that the original character's personality has changed too much... It feels like it is completely arranged to make the heroine more "perfect"... The subject matter is good, you can seriously think about it or ignore it