
A Garden of Danmei Fairy Tales
耽美童话世界之花园版
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 7k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 21y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
5Chapters
2Favorites
1.2kClicks per chapter
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Keep going Why don't you write it??
Well... I'm really not convinced when I see Hua writing so many book reviews for you! I must write twice as much as she wrote~!!!! First of all... It's time for your first paragraph... You lazy ass! Just write articles well! One moment you ask us for inspiration, and the next moment you say I don't want to write anymore, how can you become a good writer like this?! Who spends all day reading articles on the Internet, saying that they want to become a writer like Baby Annie? Have you forgotten all about it?? However, I would like to praise you instead! From the second paragraph onwards, it seems that he really has the posture of a writer! Although the writing style is still relatively simple, if you ask me, it is too simple! But the uniqueness of your storyline makes up for the simplicity of your writing. I really don't understand. Your Chinese compositions are so beautiful, but how come your novels are so different? Are you too lazy to think about it? But your fourth paragraph is indeed very high-level, "People only know how to cherish the "bitter fruit" of hard work", "If you just make meaningless efforts, although you will be very happy when you get the results, won't you lose the opportunity to do many other things?" ' It's all very philosophical~! It's very tasty! "A few pieces of pure white feathers fell from the sky. The owner of the garden stretched out his hand to catch the feathers that floated towards him, and said softly to the sky: "Are you in the moulting period? Throw so many feathers down..."' This paragraph also makes me very depressed! How ridiculous~~! I originally thought that I would say something beautiful, but in the end, I came out with such an impactful sentence, hahahaha... I laughed to death~! And there's more! That part where you wrote 'Are you stupid? If you ask me to give it to you, I will give it to you! It would be too shameful for me, and my integrity would be reduced! And you think you are wearing the coat of the big bad wolf, and if you say "ouch" a few times, you will really become the big bad wolf! The workmanship of that coat is so poor, don't you feel embarrassed if you dare to wear it to show off? (There are 500 words left at once)..." Hua and I were made to lie down in front of the computer (in full view of the teacher) and laughed so hard that we felt like we were old and rude, not like literary students at all~! In fact, the cherry blossom tree you wrote earlier really reminded me of Seiyaro and Subaru in Tokyo Babylon! Have you read that book? Very exciting! Don't just look at your beautiful BL~~! It's rare to see a normal one... You seem to see it often too... The part about Alice you wrote is the funniest, about the cat... The big fat cat... You wrote it based on the fairy tale book you borrowed from library A last time? So creative! If it were me, I would never have thought of that kind of writing. Everyone's style is different~! (It's considered self-comfort) It seems that you are still very suitable to be a writer~! Come on! And oh! You've read so many of Annibaby's books, how come all of them are comedies? Is it genetic variation in organisms? It seems impossible for you to become a writer like Xiao Anan... Even Zuo Qingwen can't match your ideas! But speaking of it, your Chinese compositions are so upright, and you incorporate Tang and Song poems into them, so how come your novels are so... Is this the so-called polarization? (Thinking randomly) Could it be that... You have a dual personality?!! Don't scare me!! I have grade three heart disease!! We are all in the liberal arts class, why is it that what you write is so... Special, while what we write is so upright? I really can't figure it out! But to be honest, the novels in my diary are not serious... The life of a liberal arts student is really surprisingly exciting! You used to say things like, 'If it weren't for your wishes, you would never go to the liberal arts class', now you are here to confess to the whole world!!! (I am the queen! Hahaha!!) One more word for you - remember to turn off the computer next time you use it in the school office!! You mindless brat~!! Hahahahaha... Ah! Magnificent! Don't fight me for the computer again! Isn't the one next to it empty?!
I have read 4 paragraphs, each one is richer and more exciting than the last, I am in the mood! (Laughing) In fact, angels and their masters have a very ambiguous relationship! Is it fate that makes them always meet? Or is the owner of the garden a big shot? Believer? Or some kind of great god? I don't know either~! But I think the first paragraph is not very good~! Change it when you have time! Many people can't understand it! But starting from the second paragraph, it becomes an upward trend! It makes people want to watch it more and more! The work itself follows the philosophical line of a comedian. It is a very creative work and has a sense of being out of the world. However, the author seems to be a very lazy person and is unwilling to write seriously. Please work hard~! This fourth paragraph is already very formed, congratulations! I like that part very much. "A few pieces of pure white feathers fell from the sky. The owner of the garden stretched out his hand to catch the piece of feathers that floated towards him, and gently said to the sky: "Are you in the moulting period? "Throwing so many feathers down..." "It surprised me~!" It's funny and adds to the atmosphere. The fairy tale written by the author is actually not a fairy tale! It is just a legend of an angel and a garden owner, a history of love. It can be said that the author's works are different from ordinary people, and the idea is also different. Your field is different from others. The works you write do not need long words and excessive modifications. Such simple writing style is the unique essence of your fairy tale, and there is no need to change it! As long as you work hard... I'm talking about hard work with a goal, you will definitely succeed! Looking forward to your fairy tale... Also, remember to turn off the computer next time you use it in the school office!! You mindless brat~!!
Alice in Wonderland + Spirited Away?
Kaka~~Tokyo Babylon?
It doesn't matter how the starting point and the end point are connected. As long as there is breath from beginning to end, that is the purpose of writing. At least in my opinion these texts are quite innovative.
This... That... So far, I haven't seen the color of fairy tales (except for the Alice part) Come on, look forward to the next one~~~What does the master do?
Hahahaha, the script of Alice in Wonderland is a failure!
Like But let me tell you, everyone is looking down on me. I can't understand~~~~~~~~Shun people first
I'll wait! I hope! My love! My beauty! My fairy tale! Mine and mine are all mine! They are all my favorite~! Favorite~! The combination of beauty and fairy tale~~! So innovative~! I like it so much~! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! Alright! The nonsense ends here!! Mr. Xiao! I really admire your courage to write beautiful fairy tales~! Danmei - not simple words, fairy tale - simple language! How could you have so much courage to write such a simple work that is not pure?? Tell me quickly! Tell me quickly! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! I'm going to sing a poem for you! A perfect fairy tale - so beautiful! You appear in Master Xiao Ling's writing! You are my love__! La la la!! You are so impure, yet so pure! La la la! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! I want to sing loudly and be beautiful~~! La la la~! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! I want to praise Xiao Ling's courage~! La la la~! Alright! I sing very uniquely! Haha~! I still have many, many hymns~! But I don't want to call him~~! So lazy! So lazy~! The third bedtime fairy tale written by adults: "Miracle Garden" feels very much like XXXXXXXXX! Of course that XXXXXXXX refers to the famous fairy tale "Alice in Wonderland"~! Hahaha~! Xiao Ling's writing is very interesting! It's just a little bit shorter! But fairy tales seem to be very short... In a word! Please continue your efforts, Sir Xiao Ling~! I will support you~! I am also a beautiful wolf~! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! I want to praise Master Xiao Ling with my poems~! La la la~! Praise her for writing Danmei fairy tales - beautiful pure yet impure fairy tales~! La la la~! I love you~! La la la~! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! I am a happy troubadour~! La la la~! … (End) Oh hehehe~! (Increase) Oh hehehe~! (Raise it further) Oh hehehehehe~! (Ahem)