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[Is the author still young? Have you never been beaten down by society, or truly loved someone? Maybe you should go back to writing in a fictional setting!]
[The plot is dazzling, but the little details are so unrealistic, like you've never had a job. The romance is so sweet it's sickening, but it feels way too forced. Promise me, author, let's go back to the no-romance genre we're good at and keep being amazing!]
Shen Li was practically deified by her fans as a rising star in web fiction, but when her new book came out, the comments section filled with doubts.
...Never had a job.
...Never been in love.
...Wouldn't it be better to go back to the genre you know and write a plot you can handle?
Shen Li thought about it for a long time. Unconvinced, she impulsively sent out the first job application of her life: a personal assistant to an idol.
The day she received an interview notice, Shen Li gave herself a pep talk.
She had dating experience. Didn't a school romance count?
Now all she needed was some work experience. She believed in herself. Even if the job was exhausting, she could probably stick it out a little longer for the sake of her oppa's face.
Once she'd gained enough experience, she'd start a new book and amaze all her fan babies. They'd clutch their chests and cry, "How can there be such a heavenly author as 'Lychee Ice' who writes so well?!"
After starting work, Shen Li thought more than once that idols really were a handful.
He drank ice water in winter, ate leftovers from the previous meal, then lay on his bed groaning with a stomachache.
But he was so cute!
He wouldn't get enough sleep, staying up all night to practice as a matter of course, and even when he wound up in the hospital, he wouldn't take his medicine like he was told.
But he was so cute!
He smoked and drank, got so drunk he could barely think, then grabbed her and talked about his ex.
...Not cute!
He wasn't just a handful. He was a jerk, too.
The jerk didn't like her.
All of Shen Li's girlish thoughts turned into a private copy of The Confessions of a Fan Girl. She would run her fingers over it, then make herself forget, over and over.
Later, the book went missing!
All her unspoken, hidden, grand and painful self-confessions were laid bare in the sunlight, exposed to the scrutiny of countless eyes, both kind and cruel.
*Highly sensitive, deeply empathetic author x avoidant dating expert
Theme: Love is instinctive.
I picked up this book from the last book "Love Without Breaking Up". I thought it would be a short story, but I didn't expect it to end so quickly, which gave me a sense of surprise. I started reading the extra chapter after writing three chapters. I finished reading it in one night. I saw that the teacher mentioned that he had thought about writing be lines. Halfway through, I really cried. Teacher, you are a good hand at writing be. Really, absolutely sure. In the first half of the chapter, Lili fell in love too early and too deeply. The process of waiting for someone to fall in love with you is too slow, and the pressure after being exposed is too great. A relationship no longer brings pure happiness to both parties. The feeling of not not being in love but having to break up is the most heart-wrenching and sad. Things are always like this in life and things cannot go as planned. Fortunately in the novel, we know that they are the male and female protagonists, so they are destined to be together. There is a kind of comfort in knowing the direction of the plot, but I still feel sad and sad while reading the novel. Also, I personally think that the second male lead's deep affection will give me the feeling that if the male lead is not Quan, they will always be together. Personally, after a breakup, it is difficult to get back with your ex-boyfriend after a breakup with a boyfriend who is very suitable in all aspects for two years. It is really rare in real life. But who makes him Quan Zhilong? He is the light that runs through Lili's girlhood, the existence that she has deeply loved, felt sorry for, and can't let go. It can be seen from the writing that the teacher's writing style is very good, but maybe because of the short story, I always feel that some of the plots seem a bit inconsistent and a bit abrupt. I look forward to the overall plot being smoother after the revision! Looking forward to the second brush after the overall repair is completed! I originally wanted to re-read the story about love without breaking up. If I lock it and prepare to re-edit it, I'm also looking forward to re-editing that one! Come on, teacher! Very well written, looking forward to the next article 🤩
It's very sad. I don't know why I feel that the love between Long and Li is not equal. Long is always confident, and he often comes when he wants. If the position were changed, would Li have the courage to say what Long said to his girlfriend at the time when Long was in love? One person gives enough preference while the other dominates. When he appears, it seems that the few years he spent with Xiaowei are nothing to the heroine, the hurt of exposing the secret is nothing, the lack of any external maintenance after the relationship is exposed is nothing, the forced breakup finally allows the heroine to escape the environment where she studied and heal, it is nothing. This is a novel, so the heroine has graduated, and the family is rich and allows Li to relax for a year to find herself, but even so, he still did not make any effort in the healing, and after the heroine gradually came out, he praised her and put her in the storm. In reality, Long may have troubles with likes, but his perseverance and strength in career are not reflected in the novel, so the male protagonist becomes more fragile and flat. Sometimes I even feel that the dragon here likes Li even less than the real dragon likes KK. At least there is an ice bucket challenge that I can't help secretly showing off. Moreover, the romance between the male protagonist and the female protagonist was too short, which made it difficult for me to understand why Long Shen loved Li. Just because Li liked him very much, so he also fell deeply in love with her? There was almost no sweet and funny time between the two of them, their relationship was exposed too early, and most of the time they spent together was filled with depression. I see that the writing style of the current large-scale article is good. The heroine has a gentle personality, which is the type of heroine that I like very much. I already like the dragon. The above opinions only represent my personal thoughts. Everyone has different ideas and has his or her own preferred audience. Just my personal opinion, cheers ❤️❤️
Alas, Wei Ji is also very good. Long is a charming person that I know in reality, but in fact, in the text, I think he is just okay. But Wei is a character who has been given a soul by the author. As Long himself said, there is no difference between him and Wei. It's just that the heroine loved him and chose him, so he became the male protagonist.
Hahahahahahaha Others: I am willing to commit suicide! Friend: Don't get caught! Self: Falling in love!
😭 😭 Great, my sister will always be loved by others, but she must love herself the most. The Internet is really chaotic these days, so I'd better read novels to make myself happy.
I have a question. Did the heroine take the initiative to tell her boyfriend when she brought the rights home? This is really important to me. I think this statement must be made 😭 😭
Let's just say you can't write a male lead who is too affectionate!!!!!! I'm a little upset 💔[covering my face and laughing and crying]
Emmmm... I think it's really normal for a man to be so uneasy. If the heroine really wanted to be with him, she wouldn't have let him live there. Who else wouldn't be upset...
What is this now (●.●)❓Put down your personal qualities and enjoy a virtuous life! (But I also have double standards. I am shameless to others, but to Brother Long... I wish you good luck 😂)
Can the heroine accept her boyfriend taking her ex-girlfriend back to her home, even though she knows that this boyfriend is just a temporary tool?