He is the demon hunter Park Dong Soo, who has regretted for a thousand years having killed the woman he loved most with his own hands in a past life. From then on, he wandered the world, unable to settle down, until he met her. The ice around his heart melted, and the walls came crashing down.
She is Bing Yue, a nine-tailed fox from China who was sealed away. Innocent, lively, and kind-hearted, she met him by a twist of fate.
The wheel of destiny begins to turn. Will this be a sweet romance, or an even deeper ruin?
In this life, I live only to love you. I have the courage to fly into the flames like a moth, yet I still cannot defy the parting fate has decreed.
Darling, I love you too much, so please forgive me for erasing your memories.
A woman's greatest sorrow is not being abandoned, but being forgotten.
Oblivion is the deepest darkness, the most searing pain.
So, darling, in a world without me, please live well.
A thousand years ago, I killed with my own hands the woman I cared about most. Regret and pain have tormented me ever since.
A thousand years later, I pushed away the woman I loved most with my own hands. Emptiness and loneliness have haunted me ever since.
How cruel can Heaven be, to make me forget my most precious memories?
If I remember everything, will I then be able to see Hell?
Looking back over the story now, I see that a lot of it isn't very good, so I've decided to take my time and revise it carefully.
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I don't like Park Dong-soo in it. He doesn't cherish others when he is there. He treats others' feelings in every possible way. He only shows so much love when others leave. He wants to live or die.
Park Dong-soo's portrayal is not very similar, and the words and sentences still need more connection. It's great to be able to stick to it and finish it! Come on
Ye Zi Niu, I specially registered to support you, wow haha
Hello Ye Yejiang, this is Eleven.
In fact, this article is only continued because of my original enthusiasm for the original drama. There are many Korean dramas, and every year there are one or two good dramas that are so brilliant that they leave a deep impression on us.
"My Girlfriend is a Nine-Tailed Fox" was a drama two years ago. I was so excited when I watched it. Especially the second male lead, his cry broke the hearts of many girls at that time, so now I reread it through Ye Ye-chan's writing, and I have a different feeling.
Here, I would like to say something silently, if I remember correctly, I seemed to have read this article in the Tieba forum before, Ye Yejiang, is that you? Star eyes...
Well, without further ado, let's start the long review.
This article is the final article, and it has been completed for a long time.
Let's start from the beginning. I've actually been reading the article for a while, but I've been very busy recently and haven't bothered to write it. After some research, most of the fanfics were basically written about the second male lead. Well, I have to say that the moment I saw Noo Minyu, I was completely blown away. But trends are changing so fast, and now I can't bear to see Noh Min Woo's hairstyle again, so the moment I clicked on your copy, I was shocked by the cover. Is this No Min Woo? He used to look so pretty, so if I were to revise the article, the cover should also be updated, especially that hairstyle. Well, no one really has that hairstyle recently... (Just like now when I think of his airplane head in Rock, I always feel something is wrong...)
Having said that, let's go directly to the characters, starting with the male lead. In the original novel, the character Dong Zhu was a coffee table, and he tortured people to death. Fortunately, in this article, it is a HE. Generally speaking, the character does not seem to be broken, but I feel that the details of the character are not very good. For example, the profile description of the characters, that is, the movements, expressions, etc. Are a little weak. Also, when writing the movements, you can actually add some adjectives to make it look fuller. Depending on the particular situation, it is much more comfortable to describe a character from the side than from the front.
But having said that, this article has completely made up for the regrets of the past [tears...
Let's talk about the female lead. At first glance, she looks cool, but the setting is basically the same as that of the tail fox. Let me make a complaint. At the beginning, I felt that the heroine was quite domineering, but then slowly all the domineering power faded away. The rest, I felt that she was completely tail fox. But after all, Dongzhu teacher is good at this, so I will complain about it. I just want to say that the characteristics of the character creation are not clear enough, because the personality positioning has been slowly worn away by Ye Zichan herself...
In fact, as mentioned above, it is really troublesome to repair, um, Ye Yejiang ~ there is a long way to go, and Eleven knows the pain of repairing [Star Eyes]
Ye Zichan himself said that his writing style is not good, but at first glance, he looks like a novice. In fact, speaking of it, the description of the environment is too weak. Well, after taking another look, it is really quite lacking. For example, the location of the character, the place where he lives, what is around him, and what the weather is like, you can actually write some in it, and it will not be cumbersome. Especially in terms of scene changes, it seems that some places are a bit sudden at present. In one sentence, um, it's a montage... When the scenes are changed, the description of the general environment is actually very easy to bring in, just like when watching TV, the camera cuts from far to near. Good environment description can actually easily give people an immersive feeling. I hope Ye Yechan can strengthen this point~
The article is very touching, the plot is very good, and it completely meets all the hopes of our second male party. Let me talk about it a little bit on Eleven. Do we have to turn off the lights and make it bright again? Must it be? Either...
That's all Eleven said, I hope it will be helpful to Ye Xiang's editing.
Above.
BY 11Delusional SyndromeProduced by Changpingpu
Awesome, come on! ! ! !
Please give me a bridal chamber~Please give me a side story~Please give me some meat~Ahh~
Are the leaves not coming? We are all waiting for you...
Woo woo woo
bite handkerchief
The prostitute wants to see the bridal chamber
Ye Zi, please give me face. Oh, by the way, add more wedding scenes.
I want to see what it would be like for two people entering the bridal chamber, hehe...
I don't like Park Dong-soo in it. He doesn't cherish others when he is there. He treats others' feelings in every possible way. He only shows so much love when others leave. He wants to live or die.
Park Dong-soo's portrayal is not very similar, and the words and sentences still need more connection. It's great to be able to stick to it and finish it! Come on
Ye Zi Niu, I specially registered to support you, wow haha
Hello Ye Yejiang, this is Eleven. In fact, this article is only continued because of my original enthusiasm for the original drama. There are many Korean dramas, and every year there are one or two good dramas that are so brilliant that they leave a deep impression on us. "My Girlfriend is a Nine-Tailed Fox" was a drama two years ago. I was so excited when I watched it. Especially the second male lead, his cry broke the hearts of many girls at that time, so now I reread it through Ye Ye-chan's writing, and I have a different feeling. Here, I would like to say something silently, if I remember correctly, I seemed to have read this article in the Tieba forum before, Ye Yejiang, is that you? Star eyes... Well, without further ado, let's start the long review. This article is the final article, and it has been completed for a long time. Let's start from the beginning. I've actually been reading the article for a while, but I've been very busy recently and haven't bothered to write it. After some research, most of the fanfics were basically written about the second male lead. Well, I have to say that the moment I saw Noo Minyu, I was completely blown away. But trends are changing so fast, and now I can't bear to see Noh Min Woo's hairstyle again, so the moment I clicked on your copy, I was shocked by the cover. Is this No Min Woo? He used to look so pretty, so if I were to revise the article, the cover should also be updated, especially that hairstyle. Well, no one really has that hairstyle recently... (Just like now when I think of his airplane head in Rock, I always feel something is wrong...) Having said that, let's go directly to the characters, starting with the male lead. In the original novel, the character Dong Zhu was a coffee table, and he tortured people to death. Fortunately, in this article, it is a HE. Generally speaking, the character does not seem to be broken, but I feel that the details of the character are not very good. For example, the profile description of the characters, that is, the movements, expressions, etc. Are a little weak. Also, when writing the movements, you can actually add some adjectives to make it look fuller. Depending on the particular situation, it is much more comfortable to describe a character from the side than from the front. But having said that, this article has completely made up for the regrets of the past [tears... Let's talk about the female lead. At first glance, she looks cool, but the setting is basically the same as that of the tail fox. Let me make a complaint. At the beginning, I felt that the heroine was quite domineering, but then slowly all the domineering power faded away. The rest, I felt that she was completely tail fox. But after all, Dongzhu teacher is good at this, so I will complain about it. I just want to say that the characteristics of the character creation are not clear enough, because the personality positioning has been slowly worn away by Ye Zichan herself... In fact, as mentioned above, it is really troublesome to repair, um, Ye Yejiang ~ there is a long way to go, and Eleven knows the pain of repairing [Star Eyes] Ye Zichan himself said that his writing style is not good, but at first glance, he looks like a novice. In fact, speaking of it, the description of the environment is too weak. Well, after taking another look, it is really quite lacking. For example, the location of the character, the place where he lives, what is around him, and what the weather is like, you can actually write some in it, and it will not be cumbersome. Especially in terms of scene changes, it seems that some places are a bit sudden at present. In one sentence, um, it's a montage... When the scenes are changed, the description of the general environment is actually very easy to bring in, just like when watching TV, the camera cuts from far to near. Good environment description can actually easily give people an immersive feeling. I hope Ye Yechan can strengthen this point~ The article is very touching, the plot is very good, and it completely meets all the hopes of our second male party. Let me talk about it a little bit on Eleven. Do we have to turn off the lights and make it bright again? Must it be? Either... That's all Eleven said, I hope it will be helpful to Ye Xiang's editing. Above. BY 11Delusional SyndromeProduced by Changpingpu
Awesome, come on! ! ! !
Please give me a bridal chamber~Please give me a side story~Please give me some meat~Ahh~
Are the leaves not coming? We are all waiting for you...
Woo woo woo bite handkerchief The prostitute wants to see the bridal chamber
Ye Zi, please give me face. Oh, by the way, add more wedding scenes.
I want to see what it would be like for two people entering the bridal chamber, hehe...