
The Magician Beneath the Moonlit Sky: Detective Conan
柯南之月夜下的魔术师
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 58k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 15y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
26Chapters
777Favorites
8.4Score
1Nutrient gifts
9.1kClicks per chapter
165Comments
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What a short QAQ?_?
So the white horse is just a light bulb...
Why is it so short? I still want to see it~~~~wuwuwu
Good looking!!! I really want to watch it again
It turns out she wasn't wearing it~~ 555~~Guessed wrong~~
If Guo Wei doesn't like Toyama and Ye, then I'll kill her. " It turns out that the heroine is so powerful~~
So I wore it with Ye~ right?
Share love First of all, would you like to congratulate me on the completion? (Closing fists) 'Congratulations on the completion' In fact, every time I watch Zi Mo's Wen Zhen, I am pleasantly surprised. Okay, first of all I admit it. I especially like ghost animals. This leads me to like 'Chongyuan' who disappears as soon as he shows his face more than the male protagonist Kaito-kun... (I suddenly felt like I was here to pick a fight...-_-||) Secondly, life is full of surprises. Originally, in my opinion, Conan fans are really difficult to write... First, it's basically just a carrot and a pit... Whether it's Kudo, Hattori, Kaito or Hakuba, they all have their names. If by any chance you dismantle a pair of CPs, you might attract someone from the CP party. I remember reading a fan story where the person was forced to have no choice but to look past all the positive characters and extend his claws to Gin... (I am becoming more and more like a show-off...) The main purpose of this long review is to spread flowers to celebrate the end of Zi Mo, so I won't say this kind of hateful words... Maybe it's because I watched too much abuse in the early days, so now I can't help but want to cross my fingers when I see abuse. This sweet article by Zi Mo is still very refreshing to read. Before writing this long review, I read a few refined reviews, so I reluctantly read them again in an attempt to find errors. Unfortunately, we really didn't catch the bug. But the overall article feels too fast. It's not the progression, it's the characterization. Many things have passed from generation to generation, and some people cannot understand them. Here are some of my characterization points. (This is what I am learning and selling now... —_—||) First of all, we should focus on the description of the characters' language, expression and environment. Let me give you an example... "So? If I die, will there be nothing left?" The girl calmed down, her eyes dull. Like a puppet doll. The expressions and actions after the words can be further drawn. (To put it bluntly, no matter how long-winded it is, do it with all your heart) That's what I think anyway There is this passage in an article written by an author that I think is quite pertinent: Among the taboos in writing: The fourth taboo is not to be general but to be specific. No one said it better than the great Russian writer Chekhov about generalizations about writing taboos. In a letter, he warned a writer friend to avoid generalizations and commonplaces: "I believe that a true description of nature should be quite brief and relevant to the subject. You should avoid cliché descriptions such as 'the setting sun bathes in the waves of the black ocean and the purple golden light cascades down' etc. When describing nature, grasp the details and do it to such an extent that even if you close your eyes, you can still see the scene you are describing." So when you sit down to write, remember not "a drink" but "a martini"; not "a dog" but "a poodle"; not "a bouquet of flowers" but "a bouquet of roses"; not "a skier" but "a budding young girl"; not "a hat" but "a hat"; not "a cat" but "an Abyssinian cat"; not "a gun" but "an o". 44 Caliber automatic pistol" is not "a painting" but a "Manet's 'Olympia'". Combining the description of the four taboos with Chehefu's golden words we get a rule that all good authors should follow when describing. Be specific! You need to be able to accurately depict scenes to make the characters believable as they go about their daily tasks with their own senses of sight, hearing, smell, touch, and taste. ——Ravel Spencer. "How do you make something look real and believable? "When a writer is asked this question, it is actually a compliment to him. If someone further says to him, "I seem to be immersed in the scene and can hear, smell, and feel these places as if I have walked into the pages of a book." Then what he has given the reader is indeed extraordinary. When I was asked the same question, my answer was "With the help of the five senses." Some authors always fail to realize that they should use the five senses of the reader to obtain a sense of reality. It is common to use the reader's visual sense, but how many times do you use the reader's sense of smell, hearing (except in dialogue), touch or taste? I have kept the five words "see, hear, feel, taste, smell" on the wall of my office since I started writing in 1997. Whenever I write, I will consciously write something with a smell. In fact, some disgusting things have a miraculous effect in creating a sense of reality. This is the so-called characterization of details. Suddenly I wrote so much, and when I look back... (Covering face) The more I write, the more I feel like I am here to cause trouble... Then I'll stop here. In fact, I don't necessarily know how good my writing is, but I just like to write long comments on the articles I like. (Tucao: This is the so-called armchair discussion, hindsight, hindsight...) [Tucao, this is not the same thing at all! But as soon as I write it, it becomes a mess. (T_TThere is nothing I can do...) Originally I wanted to write it for Lao Hu's "Eastern Invincible", but looking at it this way, I... I'd better stop... Don't let all of you come and beat me up... I have nothing to do today, so I read your The Magician Under the Moonlight again. I suddenly wanted to write a long review. It just so happened that I applied for another Jinjiang number [I have a brain twitch, so as long as there is no place that requires one person to have one number, I like to apply for several] I just jumped up with a lucky mentality. The final look at the results. Sure enough... It looks more like a prankster, hey! Just Jiang Jiang, looking forward to Zimo's Internet King...
The next one is The Lonely Magician "" "" "And" Countdown to Heaven by Kudo
Congratulations on the completion!!~~~= =