Ten Drafts, Read and Review Each Other's Work 十易其稿，互读互评。

1. 651 提 Logged In Early! With Health Bars in Sight, How Could I Lose? 提前登录！能看到血条我怎么输？ Little Belly Fish肚肚鱼Urban1.4M WordsCompleted [Character build] [Health bar] [Horrors] [Martial artists] [Sequence] In 2035, a fully immersive game called Dark Realm hit the market and instantly took the world by storm. But a year later, the game descended into reality. Flesh-eating horrors, murderous foreign races, and paranormal Ascendants brought about the apocalypse and drove humanity to extinction. Zhang Qing is reborn two years earlier and is shocked to discover that his headset has returned with him. So he logs in ahead of time! Rebo 131kReads9.2Score10.6kShelves
2. 652 气 With Luck That Defies the Heavens, I Shocked Players Around the World 气运逆天，我震惊了全球玩家 It's Adam是亚当呀Sports1.7M WordsCompleted The world's biggest virtual online game, "Lord Era", has launched! Su Chen, hailed as the luckiest player alive, is just about to dive in when he suddenly realizes something is wrong! “Holy crap, my roommate is reborn?” “He's come back as a king from ten years in the future and re-entered this game?” “Ten years from now, I'm his enemy? He wants to steal my girl? He came back to crush me?” “Who would've thought that once the story got going, I'd be the villain getting crushed by the reborn guy?” 48.5kReads9.0Score3.6kShelves
3. 653 万 Ten Thousand Swords Return to the Void, and I Alone Survive 万剑归墟，孤我独活 Doesn't Want to Reincarnate不想轮回Eastern Fantasy182k WordsOngoing [No Transmigration] [No System] [One Female Lead] [Invincible] [Taking Disciples] [Immortality] His name is Gu Qinghan. The greatest sword cultivator in the history of Haoyue Continent, blessed with a Sacred Spirit Root and extraordinary talent. A hundred years ago, he broke through to the True Immortal realm during the World-Destroying Thunder Dragon Tribulation, only to fall back to the mortal world after his Dao foundation was gravely damaged. After a century in seclusion, the Immortal Sword 1Reads—Score—Shelves
4. 654 起 At First, I Was a Coward 起初我唯唯诺诺 Yu Xiu娛修Sci-Fi & Apocalypse320k WordsCompleted The apocalypse arrives. Savage beasts devour people, and martial strength reigns supreme. The weak are prey to the strong. Show your face and die; those who lie low survive. Lin Mo transmigrates into this world and awakens a Survivalist Panel. [Survivalist Passive 1]: Don't provoke anyone, reveal yourself, or cause trouble, and your cultivation speed doubles! [Survivalist Passive 2]: Survive safely for one day to get free Survivalist Points. Swap attributes and techniques at will! Others show —Reads—Score—Shelves
5. 655 熊 Boonie Bears: I’m Bald Qiang’s Great-Uncle 熊出没：我！光头强的小叔公 The White Porcelain Beauty白瓷美人Anime Fanfiction2.2M WordsOngoing Also known as: Boonie Bears: Me! The Capitalist of Timber Gulch [Everyday life] + [Feature films] + [Slow burn] + [System] + [Super Saiyan] + [Light novel] Liu Tian transmigrated after an accident while saving someone, only to discover that he'd landed in the world of Boonie Bears. After arriving in Timber Gulch, he promptly bound himself to his golden finger: the Myriad Worlds Trading System! Anything of value can be sold to the System. Then he can use the System to buy magical tools and items 5.8kReads6.9Score538Shelves

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   两个都非常的不错，极其推荐，好的坏的，只有自己读才能发现。评分低是因为读过人少，只要读过人多评分就可以上，相信我。

6. 656 什 What? A Chef Is Going to Ruin Journey to the West? 什么？一个厨子竟让西游完蛋了？ This Seat Doesn't Eat Beef本座不吃牛肉Eastern Fantasy372k WordsCompleted They say the prehistoric world is full of scheming and intrigue? No, no, no, that was before Xiao Yao showed up!!! From then on, the whole world changed its tune! Monkey King: Boss, could you stop running already? I've chased you for tens of millions of miles, and I've worn my Cloud Somersault to shreds! … Bull Demon King: Boss, who do you think you're shortchanging? This beef noodle soup barely has any beef in it. Hand me a knife, and I'll carve off a chunk of my hind leg for you. It'll be ni 2.2kReads8.2Score255Shelves
7. 657 儒 The Confucian Sword Immortal: Ten Years of Study, Righteousness Sweeps Across the Heavens 儒剑仙：读书十年，浩气荡青天 Mo Zhuzi墨竹子Eastern Fantasy302k WordsCompleted After transmigrating into the body of a down-and-out scholar, Chen Ning studies diligently, determined to travel to the capital and sit the imperial examinations. It is only when he accidentally touches his maid's fox tail that he discovers this world is nowhere near as simple as it seems! Luckily, Chen Ning awakens the Confucian Sage System in time, allowing him to slay demons and study every day. [You studied the Analects and grasped a divine ability: Purple Qi at Your Side] [You recited The G 11.1kReads9.2Score1.3kShelves

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8. 658 谁 Who Said You Could Really Cultivate Immortality? 谁让你真修仙了？ Qi Qi Ai柒柒唉Eastern Fantasy1.0M WordsCompleted [Lighthearted] [Invincible protagonist] [Comedy] Qin Luo transmigrates to a cultivation world overrun by monsters and demons. To protect himself, he goes to the Longhu Temple to study under a master, only to discover that his teacher is a fake Taoist who makes a living by swindling people. In the first year, his master tells Qin Luo to meditate and cultivate. He gazes within himself and integrates the foundation of the Great Dao. In the second year, his master tells Qin Luo to scrimp and save. H 36.3kReads8.9Score3.1kShelves
9. 659 修 Cultivation: Recording the Good Life 修仙：记录美好生活 Six Livers from Head to Toe浑身上下六个肝Eastern Fantasy1.0M WordsCompleted After obtaining the Record System, all Lu Yao has to do is capture interesting moments to earn all kinds of rewards. And so begins his recording journey in the world of cultivation. “This year’s list of prodigies has to have Saint Son Lingyun at the top, right?” “The top swordsman of Beiyuan would be a reasonable choice too.” “The Nine-Tailed Heavenly Demon? It’s a bit of a stretch, but I guess that works too.” “...” “What do you mean some nobody defeated every prodigy single-handedly, and there 129kReads9.0Score11.8kShelves
10. 660 全 Everyone Awakens, and I Summon the Female Warriors of History 全民觉醒，我召唤的是历史女战神 Apocalyptic Rants末世狂言Urban317k WordsCompleted From the start, the protagonist is judged to have an F-rank ability, “Weak Resonance,” at the awakening ceremony and is mocked. But that very night, his twin divine godheads awaken, and he summons the Ming Dynasty’s female general Qin Liangyu for the first time. Together, they wipe out the beast tide invading his territory in a single night. In the middle of the story, he discovers that other lords expand through technology or magical beasts, while he conquers star systems with his army of femal 2Reads—Score—Shelves
11. 661 穿 Transmigrated as a Worthless Prince: I Summon Eunuch Cao from the Start 穿越废物皇子，开局召唤曹公公 Apocalyptic Rants末世狂言Eastern Fantasy1.5M WordsOngoing The protagonist, Lin Feng, was a burned-out 996 office worker in his previous life. He transmigrates into the third prince of the Great Xia Dynasty. Born with crippled meridians, the original owner could not cultivate and was poisoned to death by his brothers. Lin Feng's soul takes over his body. His situation is hell from the start: His only companion is Qiu Ye, a maid at the first level of the Houtian realm. The eldest prince, Lin Lie, and the fourth prince, Lin Tian, see him as a thorn in the 353Reads5.5Score131Shelves
12. 662 国 National Fate: Infinite Troop Spawns, Ten Thousandfold Returns 国运：我靠无限爆兵万倍返还 Apocalyptic Rants末世狂言29k WordsCompleted National Fate: I Rely on Unlimited Troop Spawns for Ten Thousandfold Returns 75Reads—Score—Shelves

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