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58 大 The Boss Is Back, Lawyer Pei Starts Chasing His Wife as a Lover MuyinziModern Romance1.0M WordsCompleted 7.9kReads8.6Score1.2kShelves

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Many vests, great articles, highly recommended [learned][learned][learned][learned]

59 柯 The World of Science Is Unscientific Two Concessions2.8M WordsCompleted 20.6kReads9.2Score2.4kShelves

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On the 21st floor of Yoneka-cho 2-chome, downstairs of a slightly old apartment. Suzuki Yusuke stood in the shadow of the street corner, raised his hand and looked at his watch - 3:27 pm. He took a deep breath, and the fresh air unique to Rice Blossom Town mixed with the aroma from the bakery not far away flowed into his nostrils. It's all so real, yet so illusory. "I really traveled through time..." Yusuke whispered to himself, his fingers unconsciously rubbing the SLR camera hanging on his chest. A month and a half ago, he was just an ordinary anime fan on Blue Star and had just finished rewatching the first episode of "Detective Conan". Unexpectedly, when he woke up, he actually traveled to this two-dimensional world and became the illegitimate son of Suzuki Consortium consultant Suzuki Jirokichi - Suzuki Yusuke. What's even more outrageous is that something called the "Detective Training System" is bound to his mind. Bite! It is detected that the host has arrived at the designated location and the mission is about to begin. Please be prepared. The mechanized system prompt sounded in his mind, and a line of translucent text appeared on Yusuke's retina: [Main mission: Witness of history] [Mission content: Wait at Yonehua Town 2-chome 21, witness the entire process of Kudo Shinichi becoming Edogawa Conan, and take photos as evidence] [Mission reward: Detective Eye (Elementary), APTX4869 complete information] Yusuke's mouth twitched slightly. This mission is simply playing with fire. You must know that if you show your face in front of that dark organization, you may be silenced together. But the reward given by the system is really tempting - information on APTX4869, which is one of the most mysterious drugs in the world. "System, are you sure this mission is safe?" Yusuke asked in his mind. [Host, please rest assured that the system will provide necessary protection. But you only get one chance, so be sure to seize it. ] Yusuke sighed and adjusted the focus of the camera. According to his memory, today is the day when Kudo Shinichi and Maori Ran go to the tropical paradise. It is also the historic moment when the famous detective becomes a primary school student. But why does the system want him to wait here? Just when he was wondering, a familiar conversation sounded in the distance. "Shinichi, go slower!" "Xiaolan, you're too slow. If you don't hurry up, you won't be able to catch up with the roller coaster." Yusuke's body stiffened. This voice... He slowly turned his head, and sure enough he saw a man and a woman walking this way. The boy is wearing a blue school uniform and has a bunch of iconic bangs on his forehead. He is Kudo Shinichi who will soon become Conan. And the girl with a ponytail next to him is the heroine Mao Lilan. "What the hell, why are they here?" Yusuke was secretly shocked. According to the original novel, they should go directly to the tropical paradise. He subconsciously took another step back toward the shadows, but it was already too late. Kudo Shinichi's keen eyes glanced over, and their eyes briefly met in the air. "What's wrong, Shinichi?" Xiaolan followed Shinichi's gaze and found Yusuke standing in the corner. "It's nothing." Shinichi looked away, but Yusuke could feel that the other party looked at him a few more times. As expected of a detective, he is very alert. The two passed by Yusuke, Xiaoran glanced at him curiously, and Shinichi was obviously thinking.

60 玄 The Master of Metaphysics Suddenly Appeared at the Scene of the Horse's Fall When His Chainsaw Rang Out. Xia WangzhuModern Romance595k WordsCompleted 2.4kReads9.1Score520Shelves

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In this book, the female protagonist and the male protagonist exchange yin and yang, reversing their destiny, and then reverse and reverse again. This book is about the female protagonist wanting the male protagonist to live, the male protagonist wanting the female protagonist to live, and then having very good friends around her.

61 开 At the Beginning, Everyone Is Useless, but I Use the Power of the Dragon to Conquer the World Xuan CrazyUrban9.8M WordsCompleted 28.7kReads9.2Score14.1kShelves

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Okay, this opening chapter of Return of the Urban God of War is very impactful! The core conflict (the tragic situation of the benefactor) and the identity of the protagonist (Long Shuai) have been pointed out. Next, I will continue your style, deepen the emotional impact, strengthen the aura of the god of war, and highlight the strong determination to "protect" and "repay the favor", making the opening more charming: --- **Chapter 1 With me, you have the world** **Jiangzhong City, long-distance passenger terminal. ** The noisy flow of people is like a turbid tide, carrying all kinds of luggage and the eagerness to go home, surging in the slightly old station square. The air smells of gasoline, cheap fast food, and the sweat of tired travelers. In this chaotic and noisy background, a figure looks out of place, like a piece of dark cold iron thrown into the turbid current. His figure is unusually tall and straight, like a javelin. Even if he wears a well-tailored but unobtrusive dark coat, he cannot hide his powerful silhouette that has been tempered by many battles. His broad shoulders seemed to be able to carry mountains, and his steps were steady and powerful. Every step he took on the cement floor carried an almost solid rhythm. The crowd around him subconsciously opened an invisible passage for him. A pair of wide sunglasses covered most of his face, revealing only his jaw, which was as hard as a chisel, and his thin, tightly pressed lips. Under the sunglasses, no one could see the complex and heavy emotions surging in the depths of those eyes that once made the heroes outside the region tremble and could not blink despite mountains of corpses and seas of blood. As he walked, he put a seemingly ordinary military-grade encrypted mobile phone against his ear. The voice on the other end of the phone came clearly through a special channel, and every word was like a cold bullet shot into his heart. "Have you checked it out?" The man's voice came through the receiver, low and steady, but with an invisible pressure, as if the air around him was stagnant for a moment. The other end of the phone was obviously under tremendous pressure, and his voice was filled with absolute respect and an imperceptible tremor: "Long Shuai! My subordinates used all channels to check and confirm! Ten years ago, the woman who desperately dragged you out of the sea of ​​​​fire in Jiangzhou... Was named Tang Chuchu!" "Tang Chuchu..." The man repeated the name in a low voice, and the pupils behind his sunglasses suddenly shrank! This name has been sealed in my heart for ten years, like a brand! "Keep talking!" His voice was still steady, but the knuckles of the fingers holding the phone were slightly white from excessive exertion. The voice on the other end of the phone paused obviously, as if he was considering his words, and finally reported with sadness: "Ms. Tang... After she dragged you out of the fire, she was hit by the falling burning object... Although... Although she was lucky enough to be rescued by the firefighters who arrived later, she saved her life... But..." "Say!" "... But more than 95% of the skin on her body was severely burned! The face... Was especially tragic! In the past ten years, she has undergone countless painful skin grafting operations, and the effect... Was minimal. According to reliable information, she covered her face with a gauze all year round and lived in seclusion. She endured unimaginable pain and... The strange eyes of the world..." **"Crack!"** An extremely subtle, but heart-stopping sound of shattering sounded! The military encrypted mobile phone casing, which was made of a special alloy and was strong enough to withstand the impact of ordinary bullets, was suddenly pinched with several clear cracks by the terrifying force of the man's fingers suddenly closing together! The screen is instantly covered with cobwebs! Several passengers passing by seemed to feel a sudden chill. They subconsciously shrank their necks and looked doubtfully at the man in sunglasses who exuded an aura that no strangers should approach. However, they were frightened by the terrifying aura on his body that burst out instantly and was suppressed forcibly. They hurriedly walked away. The man stopped. Standing in the center of the surging crowd, he seemed to be in an ice field of absolute silence. The sunglasses hid all his expressions, except for his tight, bloodless lips and the extremely tight muscle lines on his jaw, revealing the huge waves and the burning anger in his heart! **Ten years! ** He fought bloody battles in mountains of corpses and seas of blood, rising from an unknown warrior to become the "Dragon Commander" who terrifies the underground world around the world and wields supreme power! He has the power to subvert small countries and make them extremely wealthy! He thought that he finally had the ability to find and repay the benefactor who gave him a second life in the sea of ​​fire! He had imagined countless reunion scenarios, but he never imagined... That it would be such a cruel truth! The girl who used her weak body to pull him back from the edge of hell, the girl who should have had the most brilliant life... But because of him, she fell into another ten-year hell where life was worse than death! 95% Disfigured! Covered all year round! Accept the strange looks from the world! Every word was like a red-hot iron, scalding his soul! An indescribable pain tore his heart apart, a hundred times more painful than any fatal injury on the battlefield! What followed was enough anger to burn up nine days and a monstrous murderous intention! What was hidden behind the "accidental" fire that year? Who caused his benefactor to suffer such inhuman torture? How did she survive these ten years? The heartbreak every time when changing dressings, the despair every time when facing the mirror, the criticism every time when going out... Thinking of this, the man's tall body could not help but tremble slightly. Anger! Heartache! Guilty! It was like a violent hurricane raging crazily in his chest! However, in the next moment, all the violent emotions were forcibly suppressed by a more determined and majestic force, and transformed into a determination that could shake the mountains! He slowly and extremely carefully put the cracked mobile phone into the inner pocket of his coat, as if he were putting away a rare treasure. Then, he raised his hand, slowly but with great force, and took off the sunglasses on his face. When those eyes are completely exposed in the river **Points to highlight the charm of the novel:** 1. **Strengthen the contrast between the God of War aura and identity:** Describe in detail the protagonist (Ye Lingtian)'s physique (such as cold iron, javelin), pace (the crowd automatically separates), strength (crush military mobile phones), and the pair of eyes that contain evil spirits and distress after taking off the sunglasses. Let readers intuitively feel the terrifying strength of "Long Shuai" and the fierce conflict in his heart at this moment. 2. **To deepen the tragedy of the benefactor and the guilt and pain of the protagonist:** Describe in detail the tragic situation of 95% of Tang Chuchu's disfigurement (the face is particularly tragic, countless skin grafts are ineffective, the face is covered all the year round, and she is subjected to strange gazes), and words such as "hell" and "life is worse than death" are used to intensify her suffering. At the same time, it describes the protagonist's reaction when he heard the news (the phone was crushed, the body trembled, the pain of tearing the heart, the anger of the burning sky), allowing readers to deeply sympathize with the guilt and anger of the protagonist. 3. **Highlight the absolute determination to "protect" and "repay kindness":** The protagonist's oath is the core charm of this chapter. "Oh my god, I'll support you! I'll bear your pain! Everything you lose, I'll take it back for you a thousand times over!" These words are very resounding. "As long as I, Ye Lingtian, are here, you have the whole world!" It elevates the determination of guardianship to the extreme. It not only highlights the topic, but also gives readers a strong sense of security and expectation. 4. **Lay suspense and foreshadowing:** Point out that the fire may not have been an "accident", implying that there was a black hand behind it ("Who caused it?"), Laying the groundwork for subsequent investigation of the truth and revenge. At the same time, "Recapture Thousands of Times" also implies that the protagonist will use his terrifying energy and resources to restore Tang Chuchu's appearance and seek justice. 5. **Give the protagonist a name and emotional depth:** At the end of this chapter, name the protagonist "Ye Lingtian" and give him a rich emotional layer (evil, distressed, gentle, decisive) to make his image more three-dimensional. 6. **Environment and aura description:** At the beginning, the noisy passenger terminal environment is used to contrast the protagonist's incompatibility and strong aura. At the end, descriptions such as "invisible momentum spreading" and "sunlight gilded with brilliance" are used to deify the moment of the protagonist's return and enhance the sense and shock of the scene. This opening chapter successfully creates an image of a powerful, affectionate, and responsible urban god of war. It creates a strong contrast and tension between the tragic experience of the benefactor and the protagonist's overwhelming power and absolute protection. The core oath is extremely impactful, and the suspense (the truth about the fire) and expectation (how to heal and protect) coexist, which is very attractive.