She was born into a military family, and with her blood and tears she wrote the history of a powerful coach, remembering the iron-blooded prince who was clothed in glory.
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It's so good. I finished it in one day and got eaten and wiped clean in the interstellar world? Ye Lan, the dual-system superpower, expressed that he is not afraid! I found out that I had won a lottery and wanted to farm and raise a baby. Everyone in the interstellar world begged to feed it, but the commander was domineering and protected the baby😎 The love song of interstellar rebirth, heart-pounding and super exciting, quick to catch up
Is this a must-read? The heroine travels through time and has been in poor health since she was a child. However, her inner core is very strong. She has planned to revive Chinese medicine since she was a child. Without the Golden Finger, it has been really difficult along the way.
🎉"My Golden Finger is a Level 13 Creation Civilization"🌟, this novel will definitely make your adrenaline soar! 💥 📖The protagonist has obtained the golden finger of a level 13 creation civilization, which can not only create high-tech products, but also conjure magic props. He uses these superpowers to show off his talents in modern society and embarks on a cool adventure. 🚀 🧬The power of Goldfinger is amazing. From high-tech weapons to powerful magic props, the protagonist can easily cope with various challenges. He not only solved practical problems, but also triggered a series of social changes. 🌍 🤝During the adventure, the protagonist meets many like-minded partners, facing dangers and growing together. He transforms from an ordinary person into a powerful being, inspiring every reader. 💪 🌈The novel is novel in creativity, compact in plot, and full of suspense and surprises. The perfect combination of technology and magic makes the story rich and colorful. 🌈 📚If you like the combination of science fiction and fantasy, and adventure and growth stories, this novel is the perfect choice for you! Come and join the protagonist's adventure, experience the perfect combination of technology and magic, and start an exciting journey! 🚀🌟
This is the beginning of a very dramatic rebirth story! You successfully constructed the core scene of the conflict, the characters are distinct, and the protagonist Su Jin's determination to reborn and his initial actions are clear and powerful. The following is a summary of your text and some suggestions for your reference: **Highlights:** 1. **Catching beginning:** "Waking up early in the morning" directly introduces the conflict. Sheng Shaoze's lines with the characteristics of Internet articles instantly catch the readers' attention and point out the core conflict (breaking off the engagement). 2. **Clear rebirth setting:** The tragic past life of "dead in a mental hospital" is in sharp contrast with the current life of "young and energetic in the mirror", and the protagonist's state (rebirth) and rebirth time point (the day before the college entrance examination) are clearly explained. 3. **Strong core conflict:** Sheng Shaoze's arrogant breakup of the engagement, belittling the heroine ("overheard", "change immediately"), favoring "Yao Yao" (implying a triangle relationship), the intervention of Sheng's father and mother (violent suppression), and Su's mother's protection, instantly triggered multiple conflicts such as family, emotion, and class. 4. **Key foreshadowing:** * "Died in a mental hospital" - The ending of the previous life was tragic, leading people to explore the reasons. * "This severe beating was the beginning of Sheng Shaoze's hatred of me" - points out the wrong way of coping in the past life, and provides motivation and comparison for changes in this life. * "Yao Yao" - the key female supporting role (or Bai Yueguang?) Appears. * The attitude of the parents of the Sheng family - they obviously wanted to maintain the engagement and were in opposition to Sheng Shaoze. 5. **The protagonist's initial awakening and actions:** Su Jin immediately seized the opportunity of rebirth and determined to "choose again." She stops her father from committing violence (to avoid repeating the same mistake) and first expresses her love to her mother ("Happy birthday, Mom, I love you"). This move is very touching and hints at the change in her values in this life - cherishing those who truly love her. **Plot Summary:** 1. **Rebirth Awakening:** Su Jin was awakened by Sheng Shaoze's shout downstairs and found that she was reborn to the day before the college entrance examination - the day when Sheng Shaoze came to break off the engagement. 2. **Previous life memory and determination:** After confirming her rebirth, she remembered the tragic ending of her previous life (death in a mental hospital), and realized that Father Sheng's beating today was the beginning of Sheng Shaoze's hatred of her, and she decided to change. 3. **Conflict scene:** After going downstairs, I saw: * Sheng Shaoze: Arrogant attitude, accusing Su Jin of "eavesdropping", claiming to change everything she likes, emphasizing on breaking off the engagement for "Yao Yao", accusing Su's mother of being selfish. * Su's mother: Defended her daughter and accused Sheng Shaoze of choosing a critical time before the college entrance examination to stimulate people. * Sheng's father and Sheng's mother: Sheng's father is extremely angry and chases his son with a golf club, and Sheng's mother wants to join him. 4. **Protagonist intervention:** Su Jin spoke up in time to stop Sheng's father from committing violence (to avoid deepening hatred). 5. **Emotional turn:** Su Jin walks towards her mother and sends her birthday wishes and love, marking the beginning of a new life and reaffirmation of the value of family ties. **Suggestions and expandable directions:** 1. **Su Jin's psychological description:** You can slightly strengthen Su Jin's complex feelings when she saw Sheng Shaoze (disgust, hatred, maybe a trace of residual pain?), And the process of her suppressing these emotions and choosing to act rationally. This can show her growth and determination in a more three-dimensional way. 2. **Information about "Yao Yao": ** Sheng Shaoze mentioned "my Yaoyao", which can give a slight hint of the identity of this "Yao Yao" (classmate? Sheng Shaoze's true love?), And her status in Sheng Shaoze's heart (so much so that he is so desperate). 3. **Details of the parents of the Sheng family:** In addition to reflecting their insistence on the marriage contract, does Sheng's father's rage and Sheng's mother's anxiety also imply their anger at their son's failure and guilt towards Su Jin? Can be sketched a little. 4. **Expectations for the next scene:** Su Jin stopped the violence and expressed her love to her mother. Next, readers will be very much looking forward to how she will formally face Sheng Shaoze and the divorce turmoil. Will she take the initiative to break off the engagement? How will you fight back against Sheng Shaoze's humiliation? How to deal with the possible retention of the Sheng family's parents? What is your attitude toward "Yao Yao"? How to protect yourself and your mother? These are the exciting content to be unfolded next. **You write very well! ** The opening rhythm is tight, the conflict is fierce, the characters are vivid on the page, and the protagonist's rebirth goal (to change his destiny and cherish his love) is clear and exciting. The sentence "Happy birthday, Mom, I love you" is the finishing touch, instantly pulling the story from a simple bloody conflict between wealthy families to a deeper theme of emotional redemption and growth. Keep writing, this is definitely a fascinating story! Looking forward to seeing how Su Jin uses the advantage of rebirth to turn things around step by step!
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