A New Writer Has Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Can Anyone Comment on It?
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I want to read a book similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: The Smoke and Clouds Reverse the World". It was the first time I wrote 80,000 words, and then I tried my best to write 400,000 words. I also wrote towards the standard of 400,000 words. It was boring to be free at home. After all, I just finished the first semester of college.
If you can take a look at my works, you can first look for Chapter 0 "The Determination of a Novelist", where I will focus on explaining my creative views, and it is also an article that is deliberately anti-conventional.
Can you support this new novel? It is a traditional and serious fantasy novel about cultivating immortals. The writing and plot are very good. If you are interested, you can read it.
A Harry Potter fanfic with a coherent plot and no obvious surprises. It's suitable for those who love watching Harry Potter! The first one is my novel, I beg you readers to take a look at it. If you feel something is obviously toxic, you can comment directly and I will make corrections as soon as possible. Thank you! ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧
Can someone come and take a look? It's so boring and lonely to code alone. It can be any comment, just let me know that someone can read it [crying][crying][crying][crying]
"It looks like we have arrived at the beach of the city." Yi seemed not to care about the kick, even though his waist felt a little painful. "Aren't you going to explain it?" Huaiyin was a little urgent now. To be honest, she had a feeling now... "I'm not schizophrenic." Yisi smiled and shook his head, "I did it on purpose, so that we can come out." "How do you say this?" Huaiji, who was lying like a dead dog, raised his hand and asked, and then lowered it weakly. "Did you notice it?" "Are you saying that it's a fish tank?" "Hmm... So it's really a fish tank." Huaiyin was obviously not satisfied that he might just be a fish rotting and smelly in the tank. "How did you come up with it?" "Well... I said it was a bet and you might scold me, but when I tell you the reason, you might think I'm making up a reason based on the answer." "OK, I understand." Huaiyin looked at the other person's eyes for a while and stopped asking. "What on earth does she understand? These two are just sitting here playing riddles." Huai Ji was obviously dissatisfied with the results of this "traveling around", "My feet are hurting to death, is there any justice..." Before she could finish her words, He Xi threw a handful of sand at her: "Can you stop talking, it makes my head hurt." "I don't care about that. How do you know you can succeed by letting that thing occupy your body? What is that thing? How are you sure that we can succeed." As soon as a series of questions were sent out, Yihong kept moving again, "Fuck you, you won't predict that the dream will happen again and find the perfect timeline after envisioning 100,000,000 endings, right?" Huaiji next to him just stood up excitedly and wanted to say something, but He Xi covered him up. He could only whine in despair, obviously regretting that his genius ideas had not spread. And Yi seemed speechless. "Do you think he is Doctor Strange?" "Stop, stop, why are you getting more and more biased?" He originally wanted to create a mysterious atmosphere, "all right, all right" "That's me too." "The one before?" "No." "You are still so unknown..." "What are you thinking." Yisi sighed, his reputation in this life was ruined. "That's another paranoid version of me." "Parallel time and space?" "So... Right?" Yi Xi continued, "Do you remember the hole you fell into?" "Guixu?" "What kind of turtle whiskers?" Huai Ji came to life and asked. The two ignored him, "Guixu used my memory to recreate a similar environment, and used my personality to make a copy of me to simulate." "Cloning?" "Is it more terrifying? The same life trajectory is much more severe than simply controlling the appearance." "But he doesn't look like you, I mean in many ways." "Well... Do you think you will still end up with that ending if you face the same multiple-choice question again?" Huaiyin was stunned, lowered his head and thought for a long time, and then slowly spoke, with a bit of emotion in his tone: "Well... In this way, to be able to become who I am now, every choice is crucial, it is simply a miracle." She paused, and then added, "But it seems that the exact same choice is more logical. After all, it is a brand new you. You are not making a choice again after experiencing a change and learning from the past." "I believe you already have the answer." "He was right in reporting his family status at the beginning?" "Maybe." "The water in this world is really despicable." "Really? Aren't you among all living beings a drop of water that dissolves in the sea?" "Oke Oke, I don't want to discuss these philosophical issues. What do we need to do now?" "Why, you don't believe me?" Yi raised his hand as if indulgently and turned his head towards the Etu Yongyuan knife that Yihong was holding, as if he was looking at his own face in the light of the knife. "Have you taken enough photos?" Huaiyin said. "Quite handsome." Yi Xi said absently, "You still don't believe I'm the person you are?" "It's still hard for me to believe that I have a criminal record. After all, at the last moment of escaping, who can guarantee that I won't be stabbed when I let my guard down?" As he spoke, Yi Hong restrained Yi Si. "Okay, no need to joke." "It's important to be on guard against others." "But... You should pretend to be more realistic." Yisi's words at this moment made Yihong confused. "What..." Before Yihong could finish his question, Huaiyin suddenly moved. She clenched her fist and punched Yihong mercilessly on the back of the head. The force was so fast and hard that Yihong fell straight onto the beach without even a grunt, and fainted instantly. Yisi looked at this scene, raised his eyebrows, and joked: "Why don't you imitate the martial arts drama, knock him out with a knife, and punch him directly, which looks rough." "Then why don't you throw props from your sleeves to hit him, and do all those fancy things?" Huaiyin withdrew her fist, but her expression was still not that good. "Is he dead?" "It doesn't matter if he's dead. It's not him. What are you afraid of?" Yi seemed to hear the words and smiled, his eyes full of approval: "How do you know he is fake? I have a God's perspective, so I can see it clearly. I have been worried about how to convey this news to you quietly. If I say it directly, he will definitely bite me back, which will make you distrust me even more. And even if you secretly flirt with me, you will still be suspected." "Oc. "Are you serious?" "Okay, he has a hat from the rain." Yi Xi looked around, "I don't see it either." "That thing is not an entity that can be seen with the naked eye. You don't need to go into it. You just need to know that it is the key to distinguishing it from the real one." Huaiyin explained simply, not wanting to waste too much time on this issue. "Where is Yihong himself?" "She must have been washed into the water and hasn't come out yet. Do the math, the time should be up." Huaiyin pretended to look at his watch. "How do you know that he will be okay?" "Oh, do you think why I pinch so accurately? Can't I keep a water-drop clock in my heart and keep track of the time?" Huaiyin blinked and joked deliberately. "Who asked you this? Don't interrupt!" Yi seemed helpless. "You're just kidding. You've been tense. Relax." Huaiyin smiled and said in a more serious tone, "He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "Who asked this?" "It's a joke. I see you are a bit tense. He should have seen the sun soaked in the water." "The sun?" "Song Shijiu." "Then he is okay?" "You have to know that when a person is about to die, his words are also good. This should be Song Shijiu's bravest time. The first time he was brave was so heroic." "Brave?" "The flood is coming, and she will use her own wreckage to prevent the world from being submerged." As soon as Huaiyin finished speaking, a soft light suddenly lit up on the beach, and Yihong's figure slowly emerged in the light, standing firmly in front of everyone. Yi Shi looked at the sudden appearance of Zhen Yihong, and reviewed the series of messages he had just received, and couldn't help but gasped: "Here, did our identity as a prophet just jump to the wrong side? There is too much information, I can't digest it." "Oh, your mental logo was disconnected just now." Huaiyin turned to He Xi, reconnected to Yi Shi's mental logo, and said helplessly, "No wonder it was so difficult to communicate with you just now, saying that we haven't been on the same channel for a long time." "666, I was offline just now." Yi seemed to suddenly realize. "In order to make up for the communication barrier just now, I will give you a chance to name this operation." Huaiyin looked at him and said with a smile. Yisi lowered his head and thought for a moment, then raised his eyes to look at the surging clouds and waves in the distance. A trace of determination flashed in his eyes, and he slowly said: "Well... Let's call him Storm Catcher."
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