The writing is good and the plot is also good. The male protagonist is the uncle of the heroine's fiancé, and he has been secretly in love with the heroine for many years. He dare not act rashly because of his responsibility. Unexpectedly, the woman took the lead and struck, so the sky thunder stirred the earth.
I am diligent and diligent in updating 4,000 words every day, and the script has unlimited flow × ancient tactics. I particularly care about the rigorous logic. Please feel free to read it. I also hope that you will support me a lot.
I wrote this work for a year, and spent another half a year revising it five times. Only after I finished the book did I dare to update it chapter by chapter. However, the title of the book was not chosen well, and the reading volume was very average. But every detail can stand up to archaeological examination. You can boldly enter the pit and take a look. The so-called hard-necked type is a Hakka dialect, which means stubborn to the core.
Scientist Jiu Shiyi accidentally obtained a mysterious prescription. By chance, he mastered the Guiyuan Gong of the Four Symbols of the Starry Sky and was accepted as a disciple of the mysterious organization Star Gate. Jiu Shiyi has achieved three major clones: the red-haired Yi Tian cultivates demons, the white-haired Jiu Ming cultivates immortality, and the black-haired Jiushi Yi cultivates the power of the stars. Follow the Drunkard to seize memories. A portable artificial intelligence encyclopedia that knows everything. A group of people experienced various aspects of the world, traveled through various interstellar civilizations, and witnessed the rise and fall of different civilizations. . . . . The author wrote it carefully.
The atmosphere at the beginning is immediately full! The ruins of the ancient town and the weird and sinister atmosphere fill the scene with a sense of suspense. The protagonist's life experience is laid out at the beginning. The mystery of his life experience + the weirdness of the market run in parallel, and the rhythm is not sluggish. The foreshadowing is very cleverly laid out, and it establishes the gloomy and depressing atmosphere of the market as soon as it starts. It has a strong sense of immersion, and the more you watch it, the more you want to dig deeper into the secret behind it!
The writing of this work is solid to the naked eye, which is very different from the emotionless AI works that are flooding in the world. After reading it, I can't help but admire, this is a book written by a human! Whether it's a story or a scene, a few strokes have established a complete context. The ancient puppet series is full of visuals, the characters are successfully created, and the protagonists have online IQs, especially the heroine Chu Liuran. She takes one step at a time and speaks three steps at a time. Her words are impeccable. Her personality is free and generous, both strong and soft. I like it very much!
The books on the bookshelf are all good to read. There are two new articles. I will add them to the bookshelf and read them slowly. The authors of the two new articles are the ones I came to Tomato from an external website. I don't know if the writing style is suitable for Tomato. I am an old bookworm who can eat all kinds of writers.
It is a novel that is true to the ground, serious and not deceptive, not fantasy, not exaggerated, not suspenseful, not whimsical, but few people read it. A realistic version of the period novel. Please recommend the new book to see if anyone will read it.
Attached below is a map I drew for the novel, which you can use as a test read. Do you know the stink bug? The male stinkbug is small, like a paper ball, holding its half-dead body and smashing it into the misty hookah. The stink bug will carry its partner on its back, like a stone holding up its entire universe. After that, they will shoulder the responsibility of finding food. They have a broad diet and will prey on all small aquatic organisms. Whenever food is found, the male will share most of it with the mate on his back. After the two mate, the female lays eggs on the male's back, and then the female leaves the male and dies, as if she has given up all her nutrients. After that, the male will take on the responsibility of taking care of the offspring alone with his wife's instructions. But... Raising offspring is also very difficult. The stink bug must constantly move in the water to ensure sufficient oxygen and appropriate temperature, while also looking for food. Therefore, the stink bug has a huge amount of exercise every day. But it doesn't matter, as long as he is exhausted, he can achieve the continuation of life. These movements will quickly consume the nutrients of the stink bug and convert them into heat for the larvae. After the larvae hatch, they will continue to stay on the warm back of their father, while the stink bug will have to work harder to find more food. After the child can survive independently, it will use its long legs to pluck the child from its back and let them run in all directions. After that... The poisonous stink bug has run out of fuel and energy, and the only thing waiting for it is death. Of course, I am not a bad person, my life is better than it, I have a mother-in-law, and my mother-in-law does not need to die. When I was young, I always felt that I wanted to find a glamorous career, the more dazzling the better. Anyway, I wanted to start a family as soon as possible, so that my parents wouldn't have to work so hard. At that time, walking two miles away from home and walking upstream along the river, there was a retired old priest who sat there fishing every day. The people in our little place respected him, and so did my parents, so I often went next to him and caught him asking questions. The old priest is very nice and always answers my questions patiently. Later, probably because he saw that I was studious and inquiring, one day he followed me home and told my parents that he wanted to send me to study. It was rare that the adults, who usually always argued over trivial matters, had surprisingly consistent eyes and looked at me blankly. I didn't understand it at the time, but I probably understand it now. It was a look of struggle, not wanting the pearl to be dusted, but the financial conditions didn't support it. Later, the old priest told them not to worry about money. He waved his hand and contacted some people, and my schooling problem was solved. I felt at that time that as long as I became a priest, I would probably make the whole city tremble with every stomp of my foot. After that, I looked at the old priest with even more reverence. My parents didn't say much to me, and there was some missing in their expressions, but in the end, the words passed through my tongue like saliva in my mouth, and I struggled with them again and again, but they still didn't spit them out. I went to school. I am just a poor student. The old priest solved the problem of going to school, but my parents still have to bear the problem of food. Naturally, the configuration is the same as before. Every day I go to the tree to beat a fruit, or go to the vendor to get an egg, heat it on the fire, and knock it with my hand, and it will feel solid inside. Then I will weigh it again, and if it has weight, it will be condensed and formed. Catch two more bugs, put a cover on them and throw them inside, and place them behind the dormitory. If you are lucky, you can add some meat dishes. I studied at the Phenomenon branch of Fromontoza. I heard people say that this school is famous. I thank the old priest from the bottom of my heart. The study of [phenomenon] is complicated. I have to learn how light shoots and how wind blows. I even cannot see some things, but I just want to understand them. At that time, I felt that the person called the ancient sage written in the book was really powerful. He knew everything and invented everything. Later, after learning more, I realized that this was not one person, but many people, but we had lost their names. Haha, we also lost the old priest's name, and even he couldn't remember it. I have no background and no power. I can only rely on myself. Before I left, my mother told me that I should cherish my life. I didn't understand what it meant at the beginning, I just worked hard to learn. Others were reading the contents of the first volume, so I followed the next volume. Others were still looking at the books of low-level scholars, so I started to preview the teaching materials of intermediate scholars in advance. If you reach the cnidarian level, then I will be the ctenophorus level. If you reach the ctenophorus level, then I will be the flat-shaped level. If you reach the flat-shaped level, then I will be the linear level. Just completing the oracle, how could there be an easier way to practice than this? Then I understood what my mother meant. When I was completing the oracle, I encountered a group of animals whose brains had been eroded by the Mohist. They had lost their minds and attacked everyone they saw. The brown bear's strength was already extremely strong, but this was even more so. A slap weighed tens of thousands of tons. Its speed was also first-class. At that time, I was so confused that I forgot everything. I couldn't remember anything about [gravitation], [leverage principle], or [Kepler effect]. The fear of death was approaching, and it scared me to death. Fortunately, I met a law envoy who happened to be patrolling nearby, otherwise my story would have ended there. Only now did I understand the meaning of my mother's words. Later, I didn't dare to complete the oracle because my mother said that I should cherish my life. It would have been fine if it was earlier, but as time went by, I naturally became a freak in the school. I made rapid progress in my degree and was a role model for everyone. I had a degree as a terminal scholar at a young age. In time, I would definitely obtain a master's degree. But looking back at my level, I have been stuck at the linear level, dawdling for a long time, and it was not until shortly before the last incident that I broke through to the link level. But it doesn't matter. The process of learning [phenomenon] seems to take me back to my mother's warm womb. I still seem to feel the bubbles emerging from the gentle water hitting my face one after another. But just because I think it doesn't matter doesn't mean everyone will treat me like a normal person. Bullying the weak may be a necessary step before these so-called strong men can embark on the path of achievement they consider themselves to be. But when I was being troubled, a girl named Semiya appeared. She was a very ordinary girl with no special family background, but she was bold, confident and arrogant. She pointed out that the person who sent me in was an old priest, and in the following words, she meant something, implying that they might not be able to offend me. In fact, this is a very clumsy lie. How can a person with a background put himself in such a difficult situation? But... Since you choose to bully, why not hurt people who are obviously unlikely to get you retribution? Anyway, she saved me the trouble. My respect for the old priest is even greater. Just like a spring flower encountering its own first drop of rain and dew, she and I are getting closer and closer. I am too stupid to describe the feeling. Anyway, it was probably the sweet feeling I got when I ate the candy my mother brought me. She and I seemed to identify with each other, and from then on, we had a mutually beneficial and symbiotic relationship. Without either of us, the other would not be able to live well. She would rub her emotions into a stone that was as small as possible, and then gently throw it at me. I would also swallow and chew the troubles I encountered until they were too small and broken before I opened my mouth to tell the other person. People, when they treat their partners sincerely, they always want to show a better side. Maybe it's because we both seem... Good enough in each other's eyes. She and I soon had the child of life. I don't know if I am a poor person, but... The hemp rope did break on me. Our first child, she was extremely weak. You don't know what it feels like, watching her wet and wrinkled face come out of her mother's body, and then her white face becomes red after the first cry. She doesn't understand anything, she doesn't know anything, but she always smiles and looks at you with her hands stretched out. After a while, she doesn't know what offended her, and she wants to burst into tears. Whether you cry or laugh, this will make the child look energetic, but our child just has a pale face and cannot cry or laugh. You can only watch her suffer and wish you could bear the burden for her. It just so happened that I had an opportunity for promotion. I wanted to help my daughter find a medicine. If I were promoted, I would be a priest. The priest who would make the whole city tremble with just one stamp of his foot was not far away from me! But I really tried my best and tried my best. During that time, I even started to fill in the oracles as frequently as before, but it was too late, and my daughter got worse and worse. Later, a man came to me and asked me to give this opportunity away, and he would give me a healthy daughter in return. I know my daughter can't afford to wait. No matter how many leaves there are in autumn, they can't hit anyone. I'm just an ordinary person. I'm not even an autumn tree. I'm just a leaf, and it's light when it falls on the ground. So, someone came to find a gold decoration for this leaf and picked it in advance. Isn't this a great thing? This opportunity is not valuable, but this opportunity is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity! So…what about the priest I've always wanted to be? It's so close before your eyes, you can touch it with your fingers. It's not as far away as a bus and the ocean, it's like a beach and a sunset, very close. … My daughter is healthy again. Soon, news came from home that the old priest was dead and died by the river. No one found him for several days. Did he just die silently? It turns out that the priests are not that important. I thought they would stomp their feet and the whole city would tremble. Remember the stink bug I mentioned to you at the beginning? Of course, I am not a bad person, my life is better than it, I have a wife, my wife does not need to die. It's definitely not easy to hide things like titles. The family found a reason for me to collude with the bandits and sent me away. Fromontoza Academy could not keep me in the end, which was a pity for the old priest. I also brought my parents to the city. Anyway, I am also a link-level person. As long as I have tools, I can live a good life. My wife also has a younger brother who is still in school. I have read books and know the importance of this. I asked him and my wife to follow up, so the whole family had eight mouths, and it suddenly fell on my head. Within two years, my wife also graduated, and finally someone helped me take care of my workload, so I didn't have to be so tired. But who would have thought... The burden is like a weight placed on a scale, it cannot be removed, and it will become unbalanced as soon as it is removed. I fell ill. I was ill for several days before I recovered. However, ever since I fell ill, my brother-in-law has always been acting strangely. He always looks at me and his sister with something else in his eyes. Later, my brother-in-law also graduated, and life gradually stabilized, and the second child was born in the family. The second child's physical condition is better than that of the eldest child, but he is also very weak, but the family has no burden at this time and can afford to support him. One day I went to help others debug mechanical parts, and suddenly there was a chaos outside the shop. I couldn't listen to those nonsense. I only knew that the high priest issued a new order, saying that the Crescent City was divided into two parts, and those who were attacked by the Mohists were defined as Mohists, and all were driven to the outer city. I listened to it once and stopped listening to it. It had nothing to do with our family. But who would have expected that as soon as I got home, I saw Semiya holding the quilt and crying. The eldest daughter seemed to be frightened and sat beside her without daring to say a word. The brother-in-law lost his voice and stood silently aside without saying a word. I walked to my wife and asked her anxiously. She didn't say anything, but looked at her brother-in-law for help. My brother-in-law also cried. It turns out that the illness I suffered from was not easy either. At that time, there was one thing missing from the doctor's prescriptions: either go to the wild to collect it or use tools to make it yourself. But there was no such tool in the city at that time, so my wife made a special trip to the wild to collect this medicine for me, but unfortunately it was corrupted by the poet during the process of collecting the medicine. That's why my brother-in-law worked so hard after that. It turned out that he felt that he was dragging down his sister and me. I didn't say anything. My family became like this because of me. I don't have to blame anyone, and I don't have to think about fighting for anything. The most important thing is to comfort my family. The next day we packed up, tidied up, and headed to the outer city. What happened next... What happened next... Forget it, let's not mention it. After that, the outer city was sorted out, and our lives got back on track. I deceived a priest, and I later learned that his identity was so special. Then, if I have to die, I can only wrong my brother-in-law, and suddenly the burden of the whole family will fall on him, but I can no longer drag down the family. But the twist and turn was that the priest did not make things difficult for me. He was really a good person. In this matter, he further tolerated me. Then, ▽ and I talked △ in △♢, and ♢□ showed that we could sit down and talk slowly, and I △still▽... I died. That Aesop priest killed me and sealed my throat with a knife. But why? But... Why? I can't remember it anymore, my mind goes blank when I think about these places. There was a buzzing next to my ears, and I couldn't seem to hear anything. Aesop seemed to be calling me. My neck was bleeding. I pressed both hands up, but the blood still flowed out from between my fingers. I want to breathe, air, I want air, my chest feels tight, I can't breathe, the air I just sucked in has escaped through the hole in my throat. All the oxygen in my lungs seems to have escaped. So, is the trachea broken? Let me see... My eyes are so blurry, I can't see clearly anymore, the world is spinning, I... I want to talk, but I can't tell whether I am swallowing or breathing. It seems that there is blood everywhere, including my hands, mouth, and throat. Aesop is really calling me, I have to say something back to him. I couldn't speak, all the blood was stuck in my throat, and when I opened my mouth, I could hear the sound of "ho ho" airflow. Who is Aesop? Am I going to die? The big trees are flying, and I am a fish, holding on to the cans I just salvaged from the sky today. I can have a full meal tonight. It was really thrilling. The quilt I was riding on just now almost hit the cable. If it was smashed, there would be nothing to illuminate in the future. By the way, it seems to be telling a story. What story should we tell? ... Why tell a story? ... Where am I? ... What are you doing? …… Who I am? ... I also lost my name. ... Oh, by the way, the story of the bearded stink bug. Of course, I am not a bad person, my life is better than it, I have a wife, my wife does not have to die. Goodbye, Natoza - annotation left by an unknown person
I am writing it seriously, but not many people are reading it. There is not only small love in the book, but also big love. There is no love brain, no intellectual subversion. Each chapter has an inscription, and some sentences are not bad. It will be checked and revised before each release. It is expected that the full text will be revised before it is completed. If you are interested, you can come and take a look.
Written very carefully! 1VN! ! All villains are single arrows ➕strong female ➕female protagonist ➕heartthrob ➕rule maker ➕growth flow redemption. Our heroine will not be wronged at all, and she will avenge her on the spot. Training the male protagonists is like training a dog! ! ! With his high acting skills and high IQ, even if the male protagonist has the ability to resist, he will be manipulated to death! ! !
There is no time travel and no system space, so the rating is a bit low, but the writing is really good and there are almost no typos. It is not an AI. I recommend young people to read it.
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