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The real new-style urban suspense masterpiece is here, it is scary, funny and a little bit borderline, imaginative and logical, the aircraft carrier formation fights the evil dragon, the criminal police is invited by the heaven to solve the case [please update]
[Urban Cultivation of Immortals] + [Group Portrait] + [Overhead] + [Illusion] + [Space] The details are sufficient, and the character's movements and psychological descriptions are very delicate and vivid, with a strong sense of picture and a strong sense of substitution.
The story of cultivating immortals and upgrading is clear, with layers of progression from qi training to overcoming tribulations, and combined with the plot of urban intrigues, it's so enjoyable to watch!
The male-to-female ratio in the academy is imbalanced, and the boy who attends school dressed as a girl becomes the "group favorite" of the class. He forms a strange group of roommates with astrology girls and spiritual plant enthusiasts, and together they deal with military training, club recruitment, and talisman business cooperation.
Xiao Yuntian (Ye Feihua's vest) finally mustered up the courage to walk out of the rocky mountain, face the vast sea of people, put it on the bookshelf, and look forward to it together
Cultivation of immortality in the city, treasure hunting and training to acquire women, relaxed and refreshing writing without abusing the master, IQ is online!
Urban Cultivation + Practical Teaching of Jiaosha Dong Qingyun was given a live "demon subduing class" by his master in the middle of the night. He watched the two masters fighting Jiaosha on the riverside, one with a cloth breaking nail and the other with a sharp golden formation. He also complained about the high cost of teaching. And he himself has unlocked the talent of "absorbing evil", and can even use water ghosts as "snacks", setting up novel plots, and the more he goes on, the more he looks forward to the master-disciple teaming up!
Being forced by the mother-in-law to ask about the garage deposit? The purple-robed Celestial Master of Longhu Mountain threw out his Celestial Master Certificate on the spot: "I only have this!" Aunts, ex-girlfriends, girlfriends' mothers... All the women in the city went crazy instantly! God blocks and kills God's violent and exciting Tianshiwen, gambling and drug addiction are irreconcilable, it's so exciting! ! !
Wu Tianbao, who spent his whole life drawing comics, was eventually eliminated by the times. He lost his job and returned to his hometown. He paid homage to his ancestors and knelt down to the Stone Lady. The boulder suddenly cracked and the sect token appeared. From then on, the ordinary painter asked about immortality.
Returning from the world of cultivating immortals, the spiritual energy is revived. If it looks good, you can keep it. If it doesn't look good, leave it.