[Western Fantasy] [Authority of Abundance] [Decisive and Ruthless] [Building a Religious Order]
This is a terrible world doomed to perish without the gods.
The Abyss, the Insectoids, the wizards... countless worlds converge, and demons run wild.
Vitt Kevin, driven by an overwhelming will to survive, earned the attention of Abundance.
The price of being granted supreme authority was to save this world.
Everyone thought he was a benevolent pope, bringing life and hope.
Until...
The Abundance he planted crushed the lords of the Abyss;
The "blessings" he bestowed drove the wizards mad;
He raised Abundance high and smiled as he set the twilight of the gods ablaze.
"Let Abundance spread across the world, and let my hymns resound through all realms."
"As for the old gods in my way? Let them turn to fertilizer on the altar of the harvest."
Currently, there aren't any glaring flaws. However, since the story focuses on abundance, it should also address the dangers of excessive blessings. My opinion is that the initial bestowal of food was a moderate blessing, with no obvious side effects in the short term. But continuously receiving such blessings without earning food through one's own labor will lead to demonic possession.
First of all, if the author isn't writing about the abundance of the Collapsed Iron, please try to clarify this in the description. Although most players wouldn't think of the abundance of the Collapsed Iron just because it describes ruthless killing—something the Medicine King would never do 🤦—it's still best to indicate it.
The author completely disregards the original setting or is purely speculative. They don't use the original's Willpower system for short-term power enhancement; other methods of power enhancement relate to the Destiny Walker and the Blessed One. The Destiny Walker's strength depends entirely on their understanding of their destiny; the further they go, the stronger they become.
Overall, it's not bad, but it should include some negative aspects of abundance, such as the ravages of life and human greed, to make it seem more realistic.
Personally, I think it's pretty good, and there aren't any major flaws so far.