This Immortal Path Turns Good Men into Girls!

The current modern cultivation texts clearly show that due to a lack of money, the protagonist constantly earns money to buy spells, then uses those spells to pay off debts, etc. These events reveal a society short of money, even resorting to such methods to save on elixirs. But what is the purpose of this saving?

It's well-written. Because the protagonist accidentally becomes a woman, there's none of the awkwardness or timidity often found in other transgender stories. The writing focuses on the narrative rather than constantly emphasizing physical transformation and character progression, which is commendable. Keep up the good work!

It feels alright, but don't write it like a wish-fulfillment story, otherwise it won't be competitive. You can add your own perspectives. If it's a short story, you can try adding a marriage or a yuri twist to attract readers. If you want it to last a long time, you can add it later or not. And according to the protagonist's thinking, it's unlikely to appear early on.

This is a well-written, fast-paced, and satisfying novel. Compared to other single-transformation fast-paced novels, it's a cut above, and the traffic is decent.

Yes, the first chapter has a clear theme. It gives a slightly whimsical feel, like something out of a budget for modern-day repairs; this kind of subject matter is quite rare. Author, please keep writing!

The plot was decent, and the premise was quite good.

So delicious!

Very good, very well written. I just hope the author sticks to the singles approach. Based on my many years of experience, I have a feeling this childhood friend is in a bit of trouble. 😏

The design is good, and it's hand-crafted, which is nice.

Yes, yes.