Genshin Impact: Something Unto Death

Come on, author, your writing is very good so far. I believe in you. Don't finish it and don't give up halfway. You are the only one in this genre that I think has written a well-written story with a single female protagonist, Ruonawa. I hope that in the author's writing, Ruonawa can live for herself for once 😢😢😢

It feels pretty good. I want to write more about the daily plot. Also, the male protagonist's attitude towards School Girl Wa is always forced by the system to make progress. It still feels a bit inconsistent. I hope the author can show the process of the male protagonist's mentality change.

"Very Sweet Bee" is a book where Nonawa fits the character perfectly. Unlike other mindless wish-fulfillment novels, the love between the protagonist and Nonawa has both cause and effect, and the story is also interesting. Keep up the good work, author! I'll be sending you my love every day! 🤭🤭🤭

Wow, wow, my heart almost breaks when I see the blood on the corner of Ruonava's mouth. I hope the author will let all the people in Tiwat know about Ruonava's thousands of years of hard work. In fact, I originally only had the concept of God for Ruonava, but after knowing that Nata's resurrection poem and defeating the abyss relied on Ruonava, I felt that she was more reliable than most gods. Now in the winter, Ruonava is only maintaining the earth's veins. , Has never really killed anyone, and strives to maintain the balance of Teyvat. Before other ruling stories came out later, Ruonawa was the most diligent, but in the end he was scolded as a lackey by a buffoon, and was said to be worthless by an outsider. He said it as if he was mentioning Watt would have been just fine without her. At that time, I felt a little aggrieved for Ruonawa. When Ruonawa was about to die, I felt that Ruonawa should not have ended up like this. Now I sympathize with Ruonawa. Most of us In reality, Fen is the same as Ruonawa. They work diligently and hard, but the end result is to be stabbed in the back, ridiculed, and expelled. If Genshin Impact doesn't reverse it later, then I will be really disappointed with Genshin Impact's impression of travelers. Also, Reindot has done so many bad things and harmed countless people. But because she swallowed the attachment of life, it seems that the previous things have nothing to do with her. Ruonava was almost died because of her hard work and her power was taken away by the law of heaven. They all say that good people are not good. I really hate that those harmful things can still get away with it despite their serious crimes. There is no punishment at all, but the good people are judged. I hope the author can help those who have committed the most heinous crimes to get the sanctions they deserve, so that justice can be done. I hope the author will have a better understanding of what I said. It may be a bit unreasonable, so I'm extremely sorry!

It's a very good book with a good pace, but I don't know if Nata will become the next fallen kingdom. I hope the author pays attention to polishing the plot of Nata. I feel that things will get better after Nata is written.

The Year of the Dove Carrying a Branch The eternal throne arrived in the heavens, and the world was renewed. Then the true king, the original one, began a war against the masters of the old world, the seven terrifying kings. Those terrifying kings were dragons. The primordial being created its own luminous shadow. And the number of shadows was four. [Phanes, or the original one] The original being might have been Phanes. It had wings, wore a crown, and emerged from an egg, its gender indistinguishable. But for the world to be created, the eggshell had to be broken. Phanes—the original being—used the eggshell to separate the "universe" from the "microcosm of the world." More than forty years after carrying the branch. Forty winters buried the fire, forty summers boiled the sea. All seven kings were defeated, all seven kingdoms bowed to the heavens. The first king then began [the four hundred years of twig-carrying]. Mountains and rivers were formed, and the sea and oceans welcomed the rebels and disobedient. The primordial One and a shadow created birds, beasts, and fish. Together they created flowers and trees. They created man. The number of our ancestors is unknown. From this time onward, the covenant between our ancestors and the original One began to be renewed. [The Year of the Opening of the Box Boat] The original One has a divine plan for humanity. It rejoices as long as humanity is happy. The year after the box boat opened its doors People tilled the land and harvested for the first time. People dug and found precious gold for the first time. People gathered and wrote poetry for the first time. [The Year of Carnival] When there is famine, the heavens send down food and rain. When there is barrenness, the earth produces minerals. When sorrow spreads, the heavens respond with a voice. The only forbidden thing is to succumb to temptation. But the path to temptation has been blocked. Thus began the creation of heaven and earth.

First of all, this Genshin Impact fan novel is of the highest quality among the works of the same type that I have read so far. Secondly, as a fan of Ruonawa myself, I will naturally have a higher favorability towards creations with this character as the core, so I give this evaluation.

The writing is very good, I like the lady with big eyes [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

I hope to strengthen the charm of the male protagonist! Increase initiative! Have a few younger brothers or subordinates, so that they can help the hero do something

Who knows how it feels to find Sister Wa's fan fiction on all platforms after the main storyline is so intense 😢 😢