Douluo: My Martial Soul Is the Sky-Piercing Chrysanthemum

I genuinely think it's well-written, but you gave the protagonist too much of a power-up. The cultivation speed usually decreases as the story progresses, and reaching level 70 in less than ten years is a bit exaggerated. Even with a divine-level martial soul and good resources, it's still unreasonable. It feels like the power increases too easily, lacking any sense of excitement in the progression. Adding a time span in the middle would probably have a better effect.

An interesting martial spirit concept. Much more interesting than those other things like the Four Swords of Zhuxian or dragons.

It's great, please update it soon!

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Is this not worth mentioning?