[High Martial] [System] [Corruption and Revenge] [Decisive and Ruthless] [Extreme Dao Style] [No Saintly Protagonist]
In an era of great catastrophe, martial arts reign supreme, and the weak are prey to the strong!
Su Mo's elder sister was a peerless genius of the human race, but she was betrayed by a traitor on the front lines and died a gruesome death, her remains trampled underfoot by other races! His parents sought justice, only to have their legs broken and their cultivation crippled by the mighty martial arts elite. They were tossed back into the slums like dead dogs!
The powerful declared, "In three days, the Su family will be wiped out for good!"
Just as Su Mo was about to give in to despair, the Supreme Draw-Sword System activated!
Every time he draws his sword, his strength, speed, and sword intent increase without limit!
On the first day, after drawing his sword ten thousand times, his sword energy stretches a hundred meters and cleaves through steel!
On the tenth day, after drawing his sword a hundred thousand times, he comprehends the ultimate sword dao and splits mountains and rivers with a single slash!
On the hundredth day, his attributes surpass a hundred million. Even if a god descends, he can cut it down with one strike!
When his enemies surround the Su family with a large force of martial artists, ready to wipe them out root and branch, Su Mo slowly grips the long saber at his waist.
"If there's no justice in this world, then I'll use this blade to carve out a bright, spotless world!"
One lump is inedible; both paragraphs repeat themselves. It was already said they left, but then it was repeated again a while later. After the repetition, there's a bunch of unnecessary talk. They could have killed them all with one strike, but instead they insisted on killing them one by one.
Generally, those who hesitate and dawdle will strike you first, regardless of who they are or whether they are innocent, and you'll be stabbed without hesitation.
Let's see, it can't be restored for now.
It's alright; it makes you want to get into it from the reader's perspective.