Western Fantasy: Me and My Egg

It's well-written, but I noticed a problem. The gods in the Western fantasy world scheme against the protagonist, wanting to have him become their child. But since the protagonist is a modern person, he should know that Li Xiuyuan is the Arhat who subdues dragons, but the Arhat who subdues dragons is not Li Xiuyuan.

Overall, it's a Western fantasy novel with a decent pacing, though the early stages are a bit slow. At 100,000 words, only one of the three overpowered abilities has any real effect; the other two are still sealed. The strengths are the lack of AI traces and the possible multiple female leads. There are no forced power-ups or face-slapping moments.

The protagonist's cheat ability lies in the White King's embryonic development and potential enhancement. The White King provides a safety net in the late game, and in the early game, the protagonist can acquire unique cultivation techniques through practice, making them significantly stronger than others at the same level.

So far, there haven't been any major issues. By the way, the data breading is a bit too frequent in the early stages; some data should be hidden if necessary. Too much data isn't good for readers. Just write down the data that has changed. Once there are more chapters, we can add a separate chapter for the main character's panel, which would be convenient for both readers and the author.

The protagonist is practically a super mom, but unfortunately, he doesn't really like transforming. His divine avatar is a female white dragon, and he's already expecting children—a pair of twins and an unborn daughter.

Beautiful, very beautiful What the hell does it mean to become a girl?

It's rare to find a book like this that's actually quite enjoyable to read, unlike other dragon and elf stories that are all about constant plunder and greed. Every help the protagonist receives—dragons, elves, naga—is given a reason, an explanation for why it ended up in the protagonist's hands, and a reasonably plausible one at that. It's not like he just sees something and decides to grab it because he likes it. There's logic to it; it's so rare to find something like this. I'm so happy!

The book is good, the pacing is a bit slow, and it doesn't start with the protagonist being invincible. However, there are too few words; please update more frequently.

In terms of plot and such, this book is considered quite good by Tomato's standards.

Excellent, very good and powerful!