All the Players Say I’m a Cyber Ghost Girl?

After reading the first volume, I will make a systematic evaluation. Let me start with my conclusion: there are many problems, but the novel setting covers up these problems. It is worth watching. Let's talk about the advantages first: the author's word choice and sentence making skills are good, and he has not used tools to polish it. The setting of the first volume is very novel. Each "superpower" corresponds to its own trauma and there is an active character who breaks the fourth wall. This can arouse the reader's curiosity and keep reading. Next is the shortcomings: I also read a lot of long reviews, and they all mentioned that it is full of emotions, but my perception after reading it is exactly the opposite. I think its emotions are blunt. When Tiantai was alone for the first time, the player was curious about Asahi and was in the stage of just getting in touch with it. However, the KTV plot that followed was already a bit exciting, and there was no good transition in the middle. In addition, from the beginning of "playing" the game to "investing" in the game, there is no sense of logical transition. Instead, it is filled with the feeling of "because now the emotional change is needed, so the plot is written like this." Second, the direction of this type of writing is actually very clear. Either the designer and the characters are separated, and the plot is designed from the designer's "God's perspective", so that the player can perceive the "delicious" scenes that the players will face next; or the designer is completely immersed in the characters, focusing on describing the delicate emotions between the characters, and winning with emotion. The author used the first method in the first half of the first volume, and then suddenly switched to the second method without any explanation at all, which directly made the existing designer perspective disappear. This is the second shortcoming in my opinion. Third, the various settings of the first dungeon were almost not fully utilized. The settings of "weekly play" and "multiple plot lines" were only briefly touched upon, and the plots of several other optional characters were not explored in depth, which indirectly led to the waste of Asahi's settings of "she exists and takes action in multiple plot lines".

Great, needless to say. It's been a long time since I expressed my respect to the chef. The last time was when I saw Sister Qing and Sister Lin. I've completely turned into a strange shape 😢 All in all, shockingly delicious. This is one of the few novels that I have stayed up all night to read. The boss wrote it so eloquently! It makes me want to stop! Show it to me directly 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice So boss, can you write quickly? Hungry, hungry, rice

It turned out to be a hundred queens, the author has the talent. I've finished reading the first volume, it's great 👍👍👍👍👍. As AI said, the plots of other playable characters have been swallowed up, which is a problem. I hope that the protagonist will not suddenly become weak🐔. The future relationship between the characters and how to develop multiple girls is a big problem. If not, it will become a mess. I wish the author a surge of thoughts, a burst of inspiration, and good health. 💕

Simply stunning and delicious! The emotional description is extremely detailed, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the setting is relatively novel (in fact, the author's adolescent syndrome setting reminds me of "Charlotte"). I originally thought it would be a conventional gal's plot, but I didn't expect it to be such a heart-wrenching story. This is the cyber female ghost I want to see! The author's portrayal of Minato Asahi has reached a miraculous level. I have never seen a novel that made me so immersed in it. Although it is an omniscient perspective, it still resonates with the emotions of the players in the book. From the moment the player and Asahi watch the movie until Chapter 34, the oncoming sense of compactness and suffocation is so fascinating! If the author maintains this kind of quality, he will definitely get high marks!

The perspective of Asahi is actually very touching, but what I brought in is Kusunoki's perspective. After reading the whole article, maybe it is because there are too few novels that are defined as the best by the public, or it may be my unique taste. Although there are only a few dozen chapters, the plot can only be considered the beginning according to the novels I have read before, but when I look at it as a volume, I think it is very beautiful and in line with my taste. It is a complete short story story, and it can be regarded as the best I have read this year. It's best to read a story and see it from Nan Muqin's perspective. I will indeed be moved by Asahi. I think this is proof that I am alive. Yes, I fantasize about Asahi, fantasize about meeting, imagine about sadness, and imagine about love. I like Asahi, I love Regarding Asahi, Nan Muchin and I have similar life stories. Maybe this will be the reason for my empathy. Maybe this will be the reason why I like Asahi. Maybe this is just an excuse for me to deceive myself. Maybe I don't like Asahi at all. Anyway Now, I like Asahi, I like their stories, I like their beauty, because I have never experienced such feelings, such stories, and have not met such Asahi or such people. My life experience is similar to Nanmuqin, but not as good as her in other aspects. Maybe I live a more miserable life than her, so I fantasize about meeting Asahi and people like Asahi to save my life, my soul, and this world of mine. I am too greedy. I'm too selfish, I'm too self-righteous, I'm too inferior, I'm too arrogant, my feelings for Asahi may not be deep or shallow, maybe they're fake Maybe it's true. In fact, even I don't understand. What do I like, the virtual perfect Asahi, or the touchable person like Asahi who can redeem me? I hate myself like this, addicted to fantasy, addicted to sadness, addicted to my own world, without social interaction, but demanding But I imagine that someone else can save me, and I feel that I am worthy of such redemption, such love, and such people. The world is false and my pain is real. Where does my pain come from? I have not found the answer myself. Compared to others, maybe my pain is not that important. It's not that big, it's not that deep, it's not even painful. There are many people who suffer more than me. There are also people who soar in the sky and swim in the sea. Maybe they are right. My pain is all fake and my own imagination. I obviously have the care of my family and the care of my friends...? Maybe there is no such thing in my memory at all, maybe I had such a thing for a short time. My parents did care about me, but they did suppress me. My friends did care about me, but they did hurt me. Under such vague and unclear life experiences, my mind has long been a mess. I used to hurt myself, but now I just live in a hazy way without any purpose. I don't like to socialize and have no friends. Friends, I am also afraid of socializing and dare not talk to strangers. Even if I am a waiter, I avoid socializing. When the few friends come to see me offline, I will only use reasons to reject them. I hate myself so much. Under the influence of such messy and inexplicable things, I feel that I like Asahi, I like this book, I like such a story, I also want to experience such a story, I also want Asahi's love, I want Nanmuqin's love I want the love that belongs to me. I actually don't know what I am writing now. The logic is confusing. Book reviews are not like book reviews. I am moved to tell my own story. No, I also feel that it is disgusting for me to use my own tragic story to exchange for other people's sympathy. I no longer know what I am writing. Maybe, I am just showing off, and it will only be annoying. No one likes it. , No one wants to listen to such a bad, plain story, let's stop here, I don't know what to write anymore, just think of it as the vent of my heart, the vent of bad emotions, just think that I am a madman, I will forget this after a while, this is a normal thing, well, I also regret that I have not passed away, just think of me as a mean person, how are you doing in the southern country in autumn? Asahi's mouth is very hard, but it is also surprisingly soft when you kiss her, and her slightly rejected look is also very cute... But the panic at the moment of being pried open is also so cute. Asahi is as soft as marshmallow, and it is sweet when you kiss her. Her soft mouth is also delicious, soft Asahi is so cute, and Asahi in my arms is so cute...

Shockingly delicious! A very interesting setting, with unusual twists and turns. The rhythm is not slowed down. The foreshadowing laid in the front can also be matched later. The first volume has poured too much emotion from the author. It is really shocking and delicious, and has great staying power! Over 20 days, 100,000+ reads and 7.8 Points are all it takes! Cyber ​​female ghost [admiration] [screen licking]

The subject matter is quite novel, it is a delicious 1v1, and the writing is very smooth. However, this game subject matter is currently facing only one player. It stands to reason that other anchors will come to see the Asahi line in the future when they see that it can consume traffic. Since they cannot face multiple players at the same time like online games, Asahi cannot be divided. Now it is a bit like a fan drama that can watch barrages. But then again, why is this a new book? It's not enough to read😭😭😭 It's not 1v1, you can read the first dozens of chapters as short stories

A+! It's perfect. I haven't read it so happily on Tomato for a long time. It is linked one link after another without any meaningless dialogue or any assembly line-like plot. The girls' feelings flow into the reader's heart like water, mixed with the girls' youth and unspeakable love! Very delicious, Wagarimas!

I'm here to post a mysterious long comment again At present, it is excellent, extremely excellent. It is not easy to see this kind of work on Tomato. I thought it was an old-fashioned game production, but the author wrote in another direction. First of all, the writing can be given full marks. The writing skills are terrifyingly deep, the lyrical paragraphs and narrative are naturally combined, and there is a sense of smoothness that "this is how it should be written." In terms of character creation, the player's character in the first script is full, and there is also a reason for the emphasis on description. The player's own family reasons and living conditions jointly affect the creation of the entire character, which lays the foundation for the emotional explosion in the later chapters. Minato Asahi's image blooms clearer and deeper obsessions, love and hate against the dank background. In terms of plot, the setting is eye-catching, and the development of the plot is intense and smooth enough, but the emotional progression is still a bit hasty. There is no clear description of the progression of "love for what reason" and "hate to pity to love", which seems blunt, but the flaws are not hidden. The foreshadowing of the plot development allows you to find the tail of the mystery, but when it is really revealed, you will be amazed. The author is really a genius. Finally, I would like to reserve one thing. The first volume is so well written that the second volume will be particularly stressful. Almost 80% of similar articles have transitions between volumes and overturning in the second volume. I hope the author can settle down. I will give this article a higher evaluation when the time comes. Writing 9.8/10 Just right Drama 9/10 Genius Logic 8/10 A little rushed, but your plot makes up for it Character creation 8/10 The main characters are excellently created. Literary tension 8/10 Explosive Overall 9.5 Delicious Personal evaluation, for reference only

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