Shen Yi always thought she was pretty ordinary. An ordinary family, ordinary education, ordinary job. Her one advantage was that she seemed to have pretty good luck.
She got a job offer on the very day she switched jobs, her boss personally drove her home, and even a handshake during an interview made her heart skip a beat. She chalked it up to "my luck's finally turning around."
Only then did Shen Yi realize that someone seemed to have been secretly taking over her life.
Jin Shengquan is the mastermind behind overseas capital. He said, "You're mine. Whoever lays a hand on you is out."
Soon after, a man who introduced himself as Yun Zhaoyan came to her door. A behind-the-scenes fixer within the system, he always kept something back when he spoke, yet made an exception for her and showed his hand. He said, "Your business is my business."
Then there was Wei Ling, a VR gaming mogul with military ties. Though he hated being told what to do, he took the initiative and handed her a marriage contract. "Name your terms."
Shen Yi had never known what they saw in her
Keep it up, it's writing well so far.