[Slice of Life + Little Klee + Genshin Impact's Teyvat]
"This time, 1,600 Primogems won't be enough to fix it. Boohoo, my little Klee..."
Fourteen-year-old Lin Ke'er had painstakingly saved up over 30,000 Primogems and waited ages for Klee's banner. But after she spent them all on wishes, she didn't see even a glimmer of gold. Looking at the Genesis Crystals on her account, which she'd gotten by buying the monthly card, she steeled herself and exchanged them for two more wishes. Afterward, she planned to take her wish history to customer support.
"Finally, a five-star! And it's Capturing Radiance! Wait, has the animation always been this long? Why is the golden light getting brighter?"
"I'm hungry."
When the girl regained consciousness, she stared silently at her now-tiny hands.
[Slice of Life + Klee + Genshin Impact's Teyvat]
Fourteen-year-old Lin Ke'er had painstakingly saved up over 30,000 Primogems and waited ages for Klee's banner. But after spending more than a hundred wishes, she still hadn't seen even a glimmer of gold.
Then, on her final ten wishes, a pink stone flew out of her phone and slammed into her head.
When she woke up again, she found herself lying in a desolate wilderness somewhere in Liyue.
I've read 20,000 words so far, and it's written quite well. Even though the protagonist and Klee aren't in the same country, they still interact. But I don't mind if the author writes too much about this interaction; just keep it at the current level.
The synopsis and title aren't the best I've chosen, so please feel free to share your thoughts. If there's anything I don't like, or if any characters are out of character, please point it out. Negative reviews are welcome, but please refrain from insults. I'll correct any problematic parts. I'll try my best to reply to every comment. Thank you for your support. Finally, I hope you enjoy reading!
The fact that it's hand-crafted, with no obvious AI traces, already puts it far ahead of most of Tomato's new books. Other minor flaws are negligible compared to its competitors; in short, just add more.
Beautiful! I can't wait for the day when Klee and Kerr see each other.
It looks great, and Kerr's interactions with others are very heartwarming. Highly recommended! 💕
It's great! Kerr started out alone but really tried her best! So far, all the player and non-player characters haven't been out of character (OOC), and the logic is sound. The only downside is that there aren't enough to watch!!
Keep it up, author! I can't wait to see Kerr and Klee get locked up together!
It's well-written and easy to read, but it's too short.
I don't care, I want to bite the teeth before dawn every day.
Sure... Klee... Heh... Heh heh...