Honkai: Star Rail: My Bootleg Astral Express

Oh! See what I found? A very nice fanfic with great potential! Ah, the previous evaluation was too early. I got tired of looking at the back. After thinking about it, I still don't deserve five stars. There is too much nonsense, and it would waste most of a chapter just to give an example. If this is how you beat the word count, then you get the two stars you deserve. If not, then please shorten the meaningless examples and all kinds of nonsense background introduction. Okay, I got over my head before, so aside from all the nonsense, the text is interesting enough, so I'll give it a star.

Overall it's okay, but the reviewers are right, it's a bit bland. It's obvious that the author wanted to write it well, and there's nothing wrong with the plot, but it's quite bland. Many things that could be written a lot are actually not written in a few sentences. As for the introduction, half of it can be regarded as a summary of the previous situation, the kind that has been skipped at the beginning, and the paragraphs and content are really complicated. It feels like writing a lot here and a lot there. But the plot and structure are generally okay, and it belongs to a series where the author has more than enough ambition but not enough power.

Originally I wasn't interested, but when I saw Guiji, I knew it would be a lot of fun, so I came. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I haven't read it yet, but I just remembered that I had read a similar pirated version of Star Train in Pigeon Nest. The protagonist occupies the advantageous position of Pam + Aki. Then the navigator is Jizi, Bengsan's Wuliangta Jizi Lao Yang is Yang Chaoyue star corresponding to dome The seventh month of March is reversed into the personality of Chang Yeyue and Gary. Dan Heng is directly Dan Feng from another timeline

The introduction looks very good. I just don't know how good the author is [laughing evilly]

I'm in good spirits and relieved [laughing evilly] Side by side with ☀(((;꒪ꈊ꒪;)))

I haven't read the book yet, but the introduction is really attractive. I'll give it four stars for the author. Fun and engaging, but really messy. Can the author put the corresponding world in parentheses before or after the characters in each parallel world? Sometimes when you watch characters from two parallel worlds talking, you don't know who belongs to which side?

Nice,,,

Boss boss! You are still alive!

Although it's a bit confusing, it looks good