Do you know “Cruel Sin RPG”? It was inspired by the conversation between Heathcliff and Lucio during “The Fall of the Spider's Nest,” as well as Crime and Punishment. It's mainly a speculative continuation of what life might have been like for the Thumb's younger generation within the Spider's Nest. After the Spider's Nest falls, the story moves to the one-day Re:Zero - Starting Life in Another World event in the capital of Lugunica. I'm a new writer, so potential issues include, but aren't limited to, out-of-character dialogue, behavior, or worldbuilding due to limited information or misunderstandings; reports written in Lao Wu's style; uneven character appearances; and jealous characters ending up in a threesome. Please feel free to point things out and discuss them, but let's try to avoid arguments and flame wars.
So far, the impression is not bad! I came for Subaru, and I'm really looking forward to seeing what kind of story Subaru and the others in Spider Nest will have. So far, it feels like the future is promising! At the beginning, when Subaru first arrived in the city, the writing was a bit boring. There were hardly any character relationships, and he was almost completely lost.
I've been wanting to see Subaru Natsuki's survival life in the city for a long time. What kind of trouble will his Return from Death and saintly mentality cause? Who will he attract? What changes will he bring? Especially the priest from Company N in the latest chapter—it felt like such a waste that he died. Or maybe he'll become a master hunter of fish in the Great Lakes… Anyway, good luck! Looking forward to the next chapter.
You must persevere, you must persevere. This is the first time for me to see this subject. You must persevere. There will definitely be an audience. Let me take a closer look. Come on, author.
This is a rare monthly-track book. Whether it's a monthly-track book or Re: Zero, which is no longer from 2016, it's considered niche now (maybe). I thought I'd never see a book like this, but I was wrong. The author writes very well; even those who haven't read Re: Zero can read it, but Re: Zero fans unfamiliar with the site might find it a bit difficult. The writing style is good, no problem.
Such a beautiful red is truly a rare sight, especially with Angela being so prevalent these days. 🥰
To: Philip, the man who "marked the boat to find the sword"—an interesting perspective; please keep this book updated.
It's great, but it's a pity Subaru doesn't directly travel to the city, so the "chicken bird effect" is missing, and it doesn't feel like Subaru's story. I really want to see Subaru's "chicken bird effect" with Valencia!
Let me see what you actually want to write.
Very well written! It's not OOC at all. I'm here to support you. The teacher must write it down! 🥰🥰
Give me a five-star review and support. I hope you won't stop updating and will continue to update.