
Naruto: Two Bloodline Limits from the Start
火影:开局双血迹
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 7d ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
429Chapters
5.2kReads · 30 days
10.4kReads · all time
504Shelf adds, last 14 days
769Listens
33 ch/weekPace
Reader comments 7
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Here's some advice: don't use AI editing. This is Naruto fanfiction, not ancient Chinese literature. Use colloquial language. AI editing might make the sentences flow better, but it will also make the story completely unlike Naruto. Fanfiction readers are discerning. If you write this story well, you might just get a debut.
Pure AI has no human touch whatsoever
The protagonist was born on the night of the Nine-Tails' death, and is two years younger than Naruto. A bit erratic
There's too much repetition; the AI traces are too obvious.
It's hard to comment if I haven't read the original work; I should read it before writing.
Hinata was three or four years old; her younger sister hadn't been born yet.
It's too AI-driven.