Strange World: My Golden Finger Is a Succubus Constitution

It's a very good book; the ideas are actually quite clear. The only downside is that the dialogue sounds robotic because of the emotional language used, and the portrayal of Liu Bei is also a bit off. I think it would have been much better if it had been polished before publication.

Five-star praise, the language and logic need to be written again

Could you please revise the dialogue of the guy in the trio at the beginning? It doesn't feel like they've encountered a hidden boss, but rather like a white American police officer encountering a potentially armed Black man.

It's so-so. The main character seems to be very afraid of women, and even acts like a sissy.

This is such a wildly imaginative and imaginative story! I really enjoyed reading it. Keep it up, writer! 😢 By the way, how do I view the censored parts?

Watching it gave me a similar sense of tranquility as watching "Tales of Hulan River".

It's so hot! It's so hot!

Right or wrong? Their early performance was still very impressive.

So beautiful! So beautiful! So beautiful! I can't stress this enough! 👍👍👍

Was it polished by AI? This outline is pretty good.