In the fifteenth year of Hongwu, Zhu Xiongying, eldest grandson of the Ming dynasty's imperial line, is critically ill. The imperial physicians are helpless. Zhu Yuanzhang flies into a rage and draws his sword, while Crown Prince Zhu Biao weeps uncontrollably.
Just then, Ma Ye, the younger brother of Empress Ma, who has only just been welcomed back into the family, kicks open the palace doors. "Brother-in-law, put down the sword. I can save Xiongying!"
From the start, he binds himself to the Ming Dynasty's National Fortune Keyword System. A single miraculous pill pulls Zhu Xiongying back from death's door, and he even adds the keywords [Favorable Weather] and [Mighty Military Spirit] to the Ming dynasty!
Zhu Yuanzhang: "Brother-in-law, do you have any more of those sweet potatoes?"
Zhu Di: "Uncle, take me to war! I'll hold your horse!"
Ma Ye: "The Ming dynasty has only one sun, and that's my sister! Brother-in-law, give me money. I'm building a huge ship and heading to the Americas to dig for gold!"
The plot is too slow.
So much nonsense, so long-winded.
I've only read four chapters and I've already been fed several doses of poison! 🤦 He's giving massages while spouting nonsense, and he also has to find time to fight. 🤦
It burst!
It's too wordy. One chapter is finished, and the next one just picks up where the last one left off, it feels like they're just padding the word count.