Epoch: The Erudition Faction's Half-Blood Fairy

It's been a long time since I've seen such a pure running account. This kind of wonderful text that just looks at the setting collection and doesn't make me feel happy at all. It's not an AI product, but I'm still a little moved by it.

It looks good so far. I was enjoying the story. Suddenly, someone from the future comes back to remind me. It's really frustrating. And you're supposed to be a smart character? Only you go to the library. And you have to come back to remind me? Other main characters come back to help themselves improve, but this one comes from the future and, unable to defeat someone in the future, helps others improve. You're supposed to be the main character.

I've seen a bit, and the concept seems quite interesting. But why is the gender "none"? "None" is worse than "female." Also, there are far too many "Supreme Edition" versions. Not many people can casually pull out 10 million, and among them, only a minority play games, let alone spend it on a game they've never played before.

Essentially subpar, but clearly hand-crafted, so I'll still give it four stars as encouragement. The worst thing for a fast-paced, fictional novel is emptiness. Don't cram the entire book with settings and backgrounds and feed them to the reader. You're not running a tavern, and readers aren't easy prey. Characters won't come alive just because the settings are more elaborate.

The writing style needs improvement, but the premise is excellent and shows great potential. When I read the part where the future protagonist travels back in time, I felt the dialogue was particularly feminine and felt off. After checking the comments, it seems the author is a habitual offender when it comes to gender issues.

As a newcomer, the author has both obvious strengths and weaknesses. The strengths include a vast world-building, numerous professions, and the author's desire to introduce new elements, all developed manually. The weaknesses lie in the attempt to cover every concept, resulting in some parts being lengthy and tedious. Personally, I think it would be better to simply introduce the name and function of new concepts.

It's pretty good, but the setting explanations are too detailed, with long, drawn-out sections that I wanted to skip.

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To be honest, so far it's just a stream of consciousness, mostly setting up the story with almost no detailed plot descriptions. But I can accept that. However, frankly, I find the author's writing style difficult to read; there are always sentences that I have to repeat twice. I can only hope the author will revise that. I really like the setting of this book, though.