[Two male leads, seme protagonist, Harry pairing]
Wayne Winslow has been dragged all over the world since childhood by his unreliable treasure-hunter parents.
Before he turned eleven, he explored ruins that could collapse at any moment and escaped curses lurking in ancient tombs. After entering Hogwarts, he thought he was about to enjoy seven peaceful, uneventful years. But with Harry Potter at Hogwarts, every year brought a brand-new adventure.
Trolls, a three-headed dog, the Philosopher's Stone... Wayne happily watched it all unfold, and found himself more and more drawn to Harry. Some people said Harry was reckless and impulsive. But in Harry's repeated, unwavering choices, Wayne saw what true courage looked like.
It was only much later that Harry learned someone had been plotting to win his heart all along. Wayne finally understood, too: some adventures are too dangerous to risk, but he would still throw himself into them without hesitation, because Harry was waiting at the end of the story.
This time, everyone will live to see the dawn.
Content warning: Slow burn. The protagonist is an original Gryffindor native. He isn't deeply involved in the main plot at first, but once he joins, the story changes considerably. Their relationship turns romantic around fifth year.
Well written!! [A masterpiece!] However, I noticed that the author originally intended to add some dark elements to the protagonist's personality [Shocked]. I think the family that Harry envied so much, even the one he imagined in the Magic Mirror, has the shadow of the protagonist's family 🥺 A child raised in such a family shouldn't have these kinds of traits.
After reading the first few chapters, the overall tone feels somewhat slice-of-life, with well-written descriptions of family relationships and well-developed characters. The writing style is also good, creating a peaceful, idyllic atmosphere. The only drawback is that the author seems a bit unsure about paragraph breaks; long blocks of text can be a little tiring to read, but it's still acceptable. I recommend everyone check it out! ❤️ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
You know, it's really hard to find a Harry Potter fanfic that's friendly to Harry, doesn't steal the spotlight from Harry and the three little ones, doesn't pander to Slytherin, and doesn't criticize Dumbledore or Plunder (helpless). This one is pretty good, at least Harry Potter fans can read it with peace of mind now.
It's alright. It's a rare new novel that doesn't have too much AI influence. There seems to be a little bit of AI polish, but it's within an acceptable range. The writing is good and immersive, but the pacing is poor. There are long stretches of original plot, making the early part quite boring. It only gets interesting around chapters 10 or 20. I suggest the author speed up the pace at the beginning next time and add some different elements from the original work.
This is a really delicious and beautiful fanfic, with a subtle sense of humor. I absolutely love the interactions between the main character and the original characters! And the main character's addition feels completely natural! But there's still too little content 😭 Boss, will you skip updates? I hope the answer is no... The cover is also gorgeous (I was initially drawn in by the cover ❤️). I hope it gets more popular so everyone will urge me to update more, my Boss 😭
Thank you so much for the text! I've already fallen in love with Wayne, the original character, and the little post with Harry is so cute! The original characters are all very well-developed and there's no mishap! Looking forward to more updates! (*^O^*)
The plot is okay, but some chapters need to be segmented! The protagonist is a native, unaware of what will happen in the next seven years. Will the regrets in the story still occur? Will Mr. Diggory survive the Triwizard Tournament? Will Harry's parents be resurrected? Is there any hope for Dumbledore and Grindelwald to remarry? Will Regulus, the unsung hero of Slytherin, return? Will Sirius stay by Harry's side forever?
So far, my biggest impression is that the author's writing style is natural, the narration is smooth, and the story's pacing is excellent. The first few chapters have already vividly established the Wayne family, making for a very enjoyable read. The only downside is that the plot is still a bit shallow. I'll give it 5 stars for now! 😘💕
It's very good, with an authentic flavor. The more it progressed, the more AI-driven it became; I couldn't bear to watch it anymore.
A very promising book, except for the first chapter. The paragraphs describing the adventure aren't very well divided; one section is too long. I feel it could be divided into more paragraphs. ❤️